Brittany Daniel ENGL1101 Ms.

Caruso 6 December 2011 Genre Recreation Reflection This paper ended up being a disaster in my mind. When I started my revision I basically did the whole thing over again. I had a much clearer understanding of what I needed to do the second time and will never make the mistake the first time ever again. The way I had my structure was all wrong. I focused more on the story than I did the ideas of why I put that particular part in my story. I didnt explain what I was thinking enough to the point that I dont think anyone knew where I was going with the paper. Focusing on why I put the section in there or why I mentioned certain things was not in the paper the first time and I had to go back and add that. I think I probably left only one paragraph the same and thats the conclusion I really liked my conclusion. Everything else I deleted and started over, however I did keep a few sentences. I think this paper was the most eye opening for me. I realized what my strengths and weaknesses were, they were a lot clearer to me after reading this paper.