Audience Feedback Form

Producer Name: Jasmine Dhillon Title of Production: Magazine Feature/advert Audience Details: Female, aged 17 Description of Work discussed / observed Magazine feature 1st draft Comments: For a first draft, the background you have created is very eye-catching and posses that retro aspect, which enforces your Pop/Indie genre, as this style of artists is very classic and vintage. Having the front cover in the corner of the advert is conventional, but the placing of it in that corner just doesnt look right. It will probably make more sense when the text and reviews are on the page, as the finished product will look realistic. So as an improvement, you should finish it :)

Action To Be Taken: Complete it to a higher standard

Date: 5/1/12