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    The document discusses views on whether boys and girls should be educated separately or together in mixed schools. It provides the writing task prompt from the IELTS exam, asking test takers to discuss both views and give their own opinion on the topic, supported with reasons and examples. It then provides sample feedback and a band score of 9 out of 9 for a response that fully addressed the task, was fully coherent and cohesive, and demonstrated a wide lexical resource and grammatical range with a high level of accuracy.

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    The document discusses views on whether boys and girls should be educated separately or together in mixed schools. It provides the writing task prompt from the IELTS exam, asking test takers to discuss both views and give their own opinion on the topic, supported with reasons and examples. It then provides sample feedback and a band score of 9 out of 9 for a response that fully addressed the task, was fully coherent and cohesive, and demonstrated a wide lexical resource and grammatical range with a high level of accuracy.

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    The document discusses views on whether boys and girls should be educated separately or together in mixed schools. It provides the writing task prompt from the IELTS exam, asking test takers to discuss both views and give their own opinion on the topic, supported with reasons and examples. It then provides sample feedback and a band score of 9 out of 9 for a response that fully addressed the task, was fully coherent and cohesive, and demonstrated a wide lexical resource and grammatical range with a high level of accuracy.

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    WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and/or experience. Write at least 250 words.

    Question taken from Cambridge IELTS 8, 2011.

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    Final comments and approximate IELTS band score Task Response 9

    fully addresses all parts of the task presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas 9

    Coherence and Cohesion uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention skilfully manages paragraphing

    Lexical Resource

    uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as slips. 9

    Grammatical Range and Accuracy

    uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as slips. 9

    Approximate overall IELTS score

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