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    Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.

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    Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.

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    Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.

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    Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.

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    CULVERHAY SCHOOL Department of Physical Education

    NATIONAL CERTIFICATE PUBLIC SERVICES (LEVEL 3)


    UNIT 20 Armed Forces

    NAME: Adam Ferris


    DEPTH
    Little description with no examples

    Basic and general description with few examples

    Sound description with well researched examples

    Public Service Presentation AO2 - Describe three different areas of work in your chosen armed force

    Excellent description with extensive examples

    COMMENT

    Area 1 of the Army

    x x x

    Area 2 of the Army Area 3 of the Army Importance of chosen areas

    Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement:


    Adam you provided basic descriptions of 3 different areas of the army with some examples. To improve you need to add more information on the importance of the chosen areas as well as more in depth examples of there roles and responsibilities.

    Overall Grade: Signed - T Hooper

    D Date - 25/07/2011

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