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    Ashley Ruddick completed a unit on the armed forces for their National Certificate in Public Services. Their presentation described three areas of work in the army at a basic level with few examples. The grader provided feedback that Ashley needs to use more examples, both past and present, for each area as well as an overview to improve their description from a basic to a sound level. The overall grade was a fail and the grader suggested using a wider range of examples and more depth in the descriptions.

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    Ashley Ruddick completed a unit on the armed forces for their National Certificate in Public Services. Their presentation described three areas of work in the army at a basic level with few examples. The grader provided feedback that Ashley needs to use more examples, both past and present, for each area as well as an overview to improve their description from a basic to a sound level. The overall grade was a fail and the grader suggested using a wider range of examples and more depth in the descriptions.

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    Ashley Ruddick completed a unit on the armed forces for their National Certificate in Public Services. Their presentation described three areas of work in the army at a basic level with few examples. The grader provided feedback that Ashley needs to use more examples, both past and present, for each area as well as an overview to improve their description from a basic to a sound level. The overall grade was a fail and the grader suggested using a wider range of examples and more depth in the descriptions.

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    Presentation Witness Ashley R

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    Ashley Ruddick completed a unit on the armed forces for their National Certificate in Public Services. Their presentation described three areas of work in the army at a basic level with few examples. The grader provided feedback that Ashley needs to use more examples, both past and present, for each area as well as an overview to improve their description from a basic to a sound level. The overall grade was a fail and the grader suggested using a wider range of examples and more depth in the descriptions.

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    CULVERHAY SCHOOL Department of Physical Education

    NATIONAL CERTIFICATE PUBLIC SERVICES (LEVEL 3)


    UNIT 20 Armed Forces

    NAME: Ashley Ruddick


    DEPTH
    Little description with no examples

    Basic and general description with few examples

    Sound description with well researched examples

    Public Service Presentation AO2 - Describe three different areas of work in your chosen armed force

    Excellent description with extensive examples

    COMMENT

    Area 1 of the Army

    Area 2 of the Army Area 3 of the Army Importance of chosen areas

    An overview of each section is needed

    Past and present examples of action needed throughout

    Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement: Ashley you have presented some basic and general descriptions of 3 areas of the armed forces using only scarce examples. To improve you need to use a wider range of examples throughout (such as past and present examples) as well as an overview of each area.

    Overall Grade: Signed - T Hooper

    D Date - 13/11/2010

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