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Fourteen Useful Rules For Novel Writing
Fourteen Useful Rules For Novel Writing
Example:
"When are you going to leave for France?" John asked.
could be cast as:
John took a slow breath. "When are you going to leave for
France?"
(Many times beginning authors make it hard to figure out who
is talking, but a quick reference to body movement before
the speaker speaks makes it all clear.)
Example:
Never do: "Yes, I will kill him, but not until you buy the
peaches for dinner," he said.
Instead do:
"Yes," he said, "I will kill him, but not until you buy the
peaches for dinner."
5. *Use Active Voice*
Don't say: "The paper was placed on the wall by the doctor." Use
active voice: "The doctor placed the paper on the wall."
6. *Avoid Omniscient Narrator*
Books have more immediacy if you stay within one character's head
and therefore the narrator does not have knowledge of what other
people are thinking. For example, if you are in Jake's head, we
are in Jake's head for most of the book. We can't suddenly know
how Melinda is feeling. Jake doesn't read her mind. We can suggest
how she feels through Jake's opinions and what he sees and hears,
and what she says and does. (Some people use an omniscient
narrator, but the best books avoid it.)
7. *Don't Rush The Scene*
If you are unsure if the dialog sounds natural, read it out loud
to yourself. This is a great way to make sure the dialog is natural.
9. *Involve All Senses*