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Handout # 3 How To Use References in An Engineering Report
Handout # 3 How To Use References in An Engineering Report
Handout # 3 How To Use References in An Engineering Report
1. Introduction _____________________________________________________1 2. The basics of referencing ___________________________________________1 3. The two main systems of referencing: overview _________________________1 4. Choosing between referencing systems ________________________________2 5. Citing references in the text _________________________________________3
5.1 Author-date (APA, Harvard) system _____________________________________ 3
6.2 Web pages ___________________________________________________________ 8 6.3 Information obtained from an interview __________________________________ 8
IMPORTANT Please dont use only these notes. You should also view the Cecil material for this section of the course, since it has extra explanatory material that will help you. The material in ENGGEN 204 gives you the basics of what is needed. For more detailed material, see the following books: 1. 2. Silyn-Roberts, H. (2002) Writing for Science: a Practical Handbook for Science, Engineering and Technology Students. 2nd edition. Pearson Education, Auckland. Written for undergraduates. Many copies on short loan in Engineering library. Silyn-Roberts, H. (2000) Writing for Science and Engineering: Papers, Presentations and Reports. Butterworth-Heinemann, Oxford. Written for postgraduate students and junior professional engineers and scientists: greater scope and more detail than (1). In Engineering Library.
1. Introduction
What is referencing? Its a system of referring to other peoples work in a document youre writing. Many authors of professional reports need to do this. Why use referencing?
To acknowledge other peoples work or ideas in relation to your own.
To enable readers of your document to find your source material. To avoid plagiarism, or literary theft. Failure to acknowledge sources is plagiarism and is a form of stealing. People who do not fully acknowledge their sources, or copy text word-for-word from them, are implicitly claiming that the work is their own.
When will you need to use it in your BE? Youll need to use in your Part 4 project reports. Other report-type assignments in the BE may require you to include references You will need to use references whenever you write a document that refers to factual material from other sources. These sources can be:
1. Material on paper such as books, newspaper articles, publicity material, etc. 2. Electronic sources such as web pages; CD-ROMs; and electronic databases. 3.
Visual and audio material such as DVDs; videos; CDs; and audio tapes.
There are two linked elements to referencing a technical document: (a) The sources that you used in preparing your document (web sites, books, articles, etc) are cited at the appropriate places in the text. (b) All the sources are then listed at the end of your document in a section called List of References (which can also be called just References).
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There are two basic systems of referencing technical documents u sed in the Faculty of Engineering: the author-date (Harvard or APA) system the numbering system Referencing is one of the most convention-ridden areas of scientific and technical documentation. Many assessors expect the conventions to be observed in the minutest detail. This material assumes no previous knowledge; the aim is to give you all the information required in this area.
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There are two main systems commonly used in technical documentation for crossreferencing citations in the text with the full reference in the List of References. The two systems are described in overview in Table 1.
Table 2 Advantages and disadvantages of the two referencing systems The author/date (APA/Harvard) system. Advantages Allows the source to be recognised by author and date in context within the text of the report (Note: this is seen as a considerable advantage by people familiar with the literature). Provides an alphabetical list at the end of the document. Inserting an extra reference into the text is easy. The numerical system Advantages The text of the document is not interrupted by wordy citations. Only a number needs to be repeated: prevents repetition in the text of the same wordy citations.
Disadvantages Can create disruption to the text when there are many citations in one place.
Disadvantages While reading the text, readers familiar with the literature cannot recognise the work that you are citing. They have to turn to the List of References to match a numerical reference to its source. It can be difficult to add another citation and renumber all successive ones. But this can be overcome by using the wordprocessor endnoting function or a referencing software package. The numbers give no information about the work, and it is easy to forget to use the earlier number when you need to refer to it again later in your report. Again, the wordprocessor endnoting function or a referencing software package will overcome this.
Overview: The sources cited in the text are in the form of (Author, year of publication)
Authors surname and date placed in brackets Authors surname cited in the text
The wind velocity and behaviour of a geographical region is a function of altitude, season and hour of measurement (Johnson, 2001). Miller (1999) showed that glucose and cellobiose are taken up and metabolised to succinate, acetate and small amounts of formate. This runoff has also introduced heavy metals (Louma, 1974), pesticides (Schultz, 1971), pathogens (Cox, 1969), sediments (Gonzalez, 1971), and rubbish (Dayton, 2006). The considerations are developed by assuming the general mathematical scheme defined in the case of a single slit (Zecca and Cavalleri, 1997). Martin and Zubek (1993) compiled a comprehensive list of dust activity on Mars, from 1983 to 1990.
The source is by more than two authors cite the surname of the first author and add et al. (italicised in some house styles)
In the soft X-ray band pass, the solar X-ray flux varies by about one order of magnitude during the solar cycle (Peres et al., 1999). or Peres et al. (1999) found that in the soft X-ray band pass, the solar X-ray flux varies by about one order of magnitude during the solar cycle. The locomotion activity of a given species may be a source of considerable error in estimating energy budgets (Boisclair and Sirois, 1993; Facey and Grossman, 1990; Hansen et al., 1993; Lucas et al., 1993; Ney, 1993; Ware, 1975)
Several sources are cited within one set of brackets Depending on house style: separate them by semicolons, and cite them in order of either (1) publication date or (2) by alphabetical order of the author.
Author-date system: Figure 4.2 Apparatus for examining isoclinics in a stressed transparent model (Redrawn from Alexander, 1983) Numbering system: Figure 4.2 Apparatus for examining isoclinics in a stressed transparent model (Redrawn from [1]) Author-date system: Figure 3.5 Schematic diagram of AFLP analysis (Adapted from Vos et al., 1995) Numbering system: Figure 3.5 Schematic diagram of AFLP analysis (Adapted from [5])
You have adapted someone elses data or figure, and incorporated it into a table or figure of your own:
Points to note: 1. The aim of a citation in the List of References is to allow the information to be retrieved again. You therefore need to provide the information that will allow your reader to retrieve the material you cite. Be sure that every full-stop or comma is in the right place, and all other aspects of the formatting are correct. Formatting of references is riddled with convention, and assessors often check this area very thoroughly.
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6.1.2 Books
Surname and initials of the author(s) or editor(s) (surname first, followed by the initials). If editor, place Ed. after the initials. The year of publication
Title of the book (underlined or in italics, and with the main words (everything except articles, prepositions and conjunctions) capitalised. For the conventions, see Capitalisation of book titles, Chapter 16, Editorial Conventions, page #) If there is a subtitle, it is separated from the main title by a colon (:) (see example 1) Title of series, if applicable Volume number or number of volumes, if applicable. Edition, if other than the first Publisher Place of publication (city or town)
Examples One or more authors One volume of a multi-volume work Second or later edition of the book Barrett, C.S. and Massalski, T.B. (1980) Structure of Metals: Crystallographic Methods, Principles and Data. Pergamon Press, Oxford. Erdlyi, A. Ed (1955) Higher Transcendental Functions. Vol. 3. McGrawHill, New York. Kornberg, A. And Baker, T.A. (1992) DNA replication. Second edition. W.H. Freeman and Co., New York.
Single author Two authors Multiple author Paper in the proceedings of a conference As for a journal paper but in addition: State the number of the conference, its title theme, the place it was held and the date.
Zizzi, P.A. (1999) Quantum foam and de Sitter-like universe. Int. J. Theor. Phys., 38 (9), 911-918. Rippon, P.J. and Stallard, G.M. (1999) Iteration of a class of hyperbolic meromorphic functions. Proc. American Mathematical Society, 127 (11), 3251-3258. Dufton, P.L., McErlean, N.D., Lennon, D.J. and Ryans, R.S.I (2000) an exploratory non-LTE analysis of B-type super-giants in the small Magellanic cloud. Astronomy and Astrophysics, 353 (1), 311-321. Bhattacharya, B., Egyd, P., and Toussaint, G.T. (1991) Computing the wingspan of a butterfly. Proc. Third Canadian Conference in Computational Geometry (Vancouver), Aug 6-10. pp 88-91.
6.1.4 Other types of sources on paper likely to be used (For a more comprehensive
list, see Silyn-Roberts, 2000) Lecture material If the writers name is stated: Carter, R. (1996) Robotics. Lecture handout, Engineering and Society, The University of Middletown.. If the writer is unknown: Wetlands (1996). Lecture handout, Conservation Ecology, The University of Middletown. Newspaper article Author is known: Nicholson-Lord, D. (1995) Does work make you stupid? Independent on Sunday, 29 January, p 21. Author is unknown: Could alcohol be good for your liver? (1999) The Week, 13 November. Magazine article Author is known: Crystal, D. (1999) The death of language. Prospect, November, 12-14. Author is unknown: Shades of green (1998). Consumer, Number 344, 21-24. Fact/data sheet: no author, undated CD article; video or audio cassette State whether a CD, or video or audio cassette. Anything where the author is not stated: Describe them as fully as possible. The order of the items cited is: The title of the document should be cited first Date (when possible), otherwise (undated) The organization / institution that produced the document. Any identifying number, such as designation code, or contract number. Twintex TPP fact sheet (undated). Verdex International S.A. Radio Frequency and Wavelength Ranges (1999) Microsoft Encarta. CD. The Life of Plants (1995). BBC Natural History Unit Production. Videocassette. For citation in the text: use an abbreviated form of the title.
- If you are using the Author-date system, and you need to cite an unauthored source in the text, use the first few words of the title. See Section 9, sample texts (The virtual trebuchet).
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The recent upsurge of interest in the mechanical efficiency of medieval hurling devices has resulted in their use as student construction projects in engineering (OConnor, 1994). There is also a wealth of web-based material: for instance, graphics and information (Miners, 2007), desktop models (Toms, 2007), and computer simulations of trebuchets (Siano, 2007; The virtual trebuchet, 2004). Used in ancient times to hurl everything from rocks to plague-ridden carcasses of horses (OLeary, 1994) and - in a modern four-storey-high reconstruction - dead pigs, Hillman cars and pianos (OConnor, 1994), the trebuchet relied on the potential energy of a raised weight. Its mechanical efficiency has been compared unfavourably by Gordon (1988) with that of the palintonon, the Greek hurling device, which could hurl 40 kg stone spheres over 400 metres (Hacker, 1968; Marsden, 1969; Soedel and Foley, 1979). This device incorporated huge twisted skeins of tendon, a biomaterial that can be extended reversibly to strains of about 4% (Wainwright et al., 1992). The palintonon used the principle of stored elastic strain energy, the fact that when a material is unloaded after it has been deformed, it returns to its undeformed state due to the release of stored energy (Benham et al, 1996). The motion of the palintonon (Hart, 1982) and that of its Roman equivalent, the onager (Hart and Lewis, 1986), has been analysed by use of the energy principle applied to the finite torsion of elastic cylinders.
-Repeat of a previously-cited reference -Author mentioned in text -Three references in a series, placed in chronological order, separ-ated by semicolons -An et al. reference more than two authors -Precise placing of references in the text; one referring to the palintonon, and another to the onager
-Article in journal, no
volume number -Editorial in journal - Web page with cited author
Benham, P.P., Crawford, R.J. and Armstrong, C.G. (1996) Mechanics of Engineering Materials. Second edition. Longman, Harlow, page 67. Gordon, J.E. (1981) Structures or Why Things Dont Fall Down. Penguin, Harmondsworth, pages 7889. Hacker, B.C. (1968) Greek catapults and catapult technology: science, technology and war in the ancient world. In: Technology and Culture, 9, pages 3450. Hart, V.G. (1982) The law of the Greek catapult. Bull. Inst. Math. Appl., 18, 5868. Hart, V.G. and Lewis, M.J.T. (1986) Mechanics of the onager. J. Eng. Math., 20, 345365. Marsden, E.W. (1969) Greek and Roman Artillery. Clarendon Press, Oxford, pages 8698. Miners, R. The Grey Company Trebuchet Page. Retrieved May 17, 2007 from http://members.iinet.net.au/~rmine/gctrebs.html OConnor, L. (1994) Building a better trebuchet. Mechanical Engineering, January, 6669. OLeary, J. (1994) Reversing the siege mentality. Mechanical Engineering, January, 4. Siano, D. The algorithmic beauty of the trebuchet. Retrieved May 17, 2007
List of References
--Article in magazine - Web page, no cited author - Web page with cited author -More than two authors. An et al. reference in the text
from http://www.algobeautytreb.com/ Soedel, W. and Foley, V. (1979) Ancient catapults. Scientific American, 240, 150160. The Virtual Trebuchet. Retrieved June 3, 2007 from http://heim.ifi.uio.no/~oddharry/blide/vtreb.html Toms, R. Trebuchet.com. Retrieved May 17, 2007 from http://www.trebuchet.com/ Wainwright, S.A., Biggs, W.D., Currey, J.D. and Gosline, J.M. (1992) Mechanical Design in Organisms. Second edition. Longman, Harlow. Page 83.
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The recent upsurge of interest in the mechanical efficiency of medieval hurling devices has resulted in their use as subjects for student construction projects in engineering [1]. There is also a wealth of web-based material: for instance, graphics and information [2], applications such as desktop models [3], and computer simulations of a trebuchet [4, 5]. Used in ancient times to hurl everything from rocks to plague-ridden carcasses of horses [5] and, in a modern four-storey-high reconstruction, dead pigs, Hillman cars and pianos [1], the trebuchet relied on the potential energy of a raised weight. Its mechanical efficiency has been compared unfavourably by Gordon [6] with that of the palintonon, the Greek hurling device, which could hurl 40 kg stone spheres over 400 metres [7, 8, 9]. This device incorporated huge twisted skeins of tendon, a biomaterial that can be extended reversibly to strains of about 4% [10]. The palintonon utilised the principle of stored elastic strain energy the fact that when a material is unloaded after it has been deformed, it returns to its undeformed state due to the release of stored energy [11]. The motion of the palintonon [12] and that of its Roman equivalent, the onager [13], has been analysed by use of the energy principle applied to the finite torsion of elastic cylinders.
-A second reference to Source Number 1. Note: it is not assigned a new number -Author mentioned in text -Three references in a series, separated by commas
-Precise placing of references in the text; one referring to the palintonon, and another to the onager
NOTE: Sources are listed by number in the order in which they appear in the text of the document
1: Article in journal, no volume number 2, 3 4: electronic sources, each with a cited author 5: Electronic source, with no cited author 6: Editorial in journal 7: Book . Note publisher, place of publication, and relevant page number(s) 8: Article in magazine 9: Chapter in book. 10: Book 11: Book with four authors
List of References
1 OConnor, L. (1994) Building a better trebuchet. Mechanical Engineering, January, 6669. 2 Miners, R. The Grey Company Trebuchet Page. Retrieved May 17, 2007 from http://members.iinet.net.au/~rmine/gctrebs.html 3 Toms, R. Trebuchet.com. Retrieved May 17, 2007 from http://www.trebuchet.com/ 4 Siano, D. The algorithmic beauty of the trebuchet. Retrieved May 17, 2007 from http://www.algobeautytreb.com/ 5 The Virtual Trebuchet. Retrieved February 1, 2004 from http://heim.ifi.uio.no/~oddharry/blide/vtreb.html 6 OLeary, J. (1994) Reversing the siege mentality. Mechanical Engineering, January, 4. 7 Gordon, J.E. (1981) Structures or Why Things Dont Fall Down. Penguin, Harmondsworth, pages 7889. 8 Soedel, W. and Foley, V. (1979) Ancient catapults. Scientific American, 240, 150160, 9 Hacker, B.C. (1968) Greek catapults and catapult technology: science, technology and war in the ancient world. In: Technology and Culture, 9, pages 3450. 10 Marsden, E.W. (1969) Greek and Roman Artillery. Clarendon Press, Oxford, pages 8698. 11 Wainwright, S.A., Biggs, W.D., Currey, J.D. and Gosline, J.M. (1992) Mechanical Design in Organisms. Second edition. Longman, Harlow. Page 83. 12 Benham, P.P., Crawford, R.J. and Armstrong, C.G. (1996) Mechanics of Engineering Materials. Second edition. Longman, Harlow, page 67. 13 Hart, V.G. (1982) The law of the Greek catapult. Bull. Inst. Math. Appl., 18, 5868. 14 Hart, V.G. and Lewis, M.J.T. (1986) Mechanics of the onager. J. Eng. Math., 20, 345365.
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1. Bowden, S. (2005) Case in point : best cases from the 2005 International Conference on Case Study Teaching and Learning, ed. M. Wilson. GSE Publications, Auckland, pp 301-319. 2. The National Business Review (2003) The Achievers' Column. NBR, 15 August 2003. 3. Brocklesby, J. (2001) World Famous in New Zealand - How New Zealand's leading firms became world-class competitors. The University of Auckland Press, Auckland. 4. Campbell-Hunt, C. (2000) The Criterion Group, in Competitive Advantage New Zealand. Victoria University of Wellington: Wellington. p. 28-41. 5. Oudshoorn, M. (2005) Reducing environmental impact of furniture production at Criterion Group Ltd, in Internal Company Document. Criterion Manufacturing Ltd. 6. Oudshoorn, M. (2005) Building a foundation for incorporating sustainable furniture production at Criterion Manufacturing Ltd, in Internal Company Document. Criterion Manufacturing Ltd.
Important point: References are listed in the numerical order inwhich they appear in the text.
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Bowden, S. (2005) Case in point : best cases from the 2005 International Conference on Case Study Teaching and Learning, ed. M. Wilson. GSE Publications, Auckland, pp 301319. The National Business Review (2003) The Achievers' Column. NBR, 15 August 2003. Brocklesby, J. (2001) World Famous in New Zealand - How New Zealand's leading firms became world-class competitors. The University of Auckland Press, Auckland. Campbell-Hunt, C. (2000) The Criterion Group, in Competitive Advantage New Zealand. Victoria University of Wellington: Wellington. p. 28-41. Oudshoorn, M. (2005) Reducing environmental impact of furniture production at Criterion Group Ltd, in Internal Company Document. Criterion Manufacturing Ltd.
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