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Writing Lesson Plan Elementary)
Writing Lesson Plan Elementary)
Class Profile:
It is an Elementary class of young adult learners on the island of Paros. It consists
of five young adult students, who have lived all their life on the island, except for one,
who was born in Athens and moved to Paros 10 years ago. This particular group has had
classes since last September and they meet every Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday for a
one and a half hour session. They have just completed the “English in Mind” Starter book
and now have moved on to use “English for Adults 1” course book. On the whole, it
seems to be a rather good class, with very strong students, the majority of whom I firmly
believe, they will sit for the Cambridge Proficiency exam.
In fact, Elephtheria, an 18 year old student, is a really strong one, with very good
grammar, syntax and strong vocabulary, due to the fact that she is an avid fan of Hard
Rock music. She is the leading figure in class, being ahead of others grammatically and
lexically, volunteers in the teaching procedure effectively, takes risk with the language,
and her strongest point is to write compositions.
Marianna, another strong student,is of the same age as Elephtheria and her best friend,
possess quite strong linguistic features, strong reading and listening skills. Her rather
weak points seem to be her speaking skills compared to those of Elephteria`s , and her
writing skills need further development in terms of cohesion and coherence; time and
practice will, hopefully, work wonders.
On the same level, Manolis, a 17 year old student, is rather strong grammatically,
syntactically and lexically, whenever he wants to convey his messages to foreigners.
Manolis is a strong student at producing and analyzing pieces of language very deeply;
he is rather energetic and expects from the lesson to have constant pace of lively and
tailor made activities that will enable him to let off steam, and communicate effectively
with his classmates and the T, on the whole
On the other hand, Greg and Demeter are weak learners, who need prompt, guidance,
time and support throughout the whole teaching procedure. More specifically, Demeter
struggles to get his messages across both in speaking and writing, since he seems to
confuse the two skills; he has misunderstood the register- he thinks that we write in the
same way we speak, and needs time and loads of practice between the difference of the
two skills.
Greg, on the contrary, is a false beginner, who has recently joined the group.
Nevertheless, he has made great efforts to keep up with the rest of the class and to live up
to the expectations of the lesson. He needs time and practice to develop syntax and time
sequence in order to form complete sentences, but, he is able to grasp the intent of spoken
messages on the radio and on TV, because, he watches many American films and listens
to pop music.
Source Aids/Handouts:
1. Different website photos of Paros and Antiparos stuck up on the walls of the
classroom, to make students communicate freely (see H/O1).
2. A photo of Joe (see H/O2) to establish audience in writing.
3. A model postcard cut up into strips of paper for Ss to reorder and use it as a basis
and context to develop their own drafts in the process (see H/O3) adapted from
“English for Adults 1” by Longden Fiona and O’ Brien Cathleen (Grivas
Publications August 2003 ) Unit 17 pg.73 –Writing a Postcard.
4. A wh-task sheet (who, to whom, why, what, when, where) to facilitate Ss`
exploitation of the model postcard during pre-writing stage (see H/O4).
5. Layouts of postcards to write multiple drafts, before producing the final one (see
H/O5).
6. The w/b and some blue tack for sticking up photos and the strips of paper.
7. Re alia / postcards of Alyki –Paros, one per group of students to produce their
final draft (see H/O6).
8. Pens/pencils for writing the drafts.
Linguistic assumptions:
This particular class has covered days, months and seasons last year, therefore, they will
be able to describe time in their postcards, effectively. Moreover, the fact that they learnt
how to write addresses at their previous course book, “English in Mind”, will enable
them to write the recipient`s addresses on their postcards.
Furthermore, they covered Past Simple forms , both regular and irregular, last March,
hence, I believe they will be able to express their past life experiences on the postcard,
with a little help, from the T, if possible, for a few irregular Past Simple forms. In
addition, they have been taught “going to” for indefinite plans in the future; therefore, it
will be a great opportunity for them to practice the tense using future plans on their
postcard, during their holidays.
Finally, the topic of describing holidays on their island as tourists will enthuse and
intrigue them to fall back on describing their life experiences on the island to “families
abroad”; a fruitful way to introduce them to writing postcards.
Timetable Fit:
The class was taught Past Simple forms both regular and irregular, in their affirmative,
interrogative and negative forms, five months ago; hence, they will be able to express
themselves in writing using the Past, whenever they have to refer to past life experiences
about holidays, with slight guidance, from T, whenever possible, about irregular Past
Simple forms.
Moreover, they have covered ‘going to’ recently about indefinite plans for the future,
therefore, they will be able to narrate not definite plans in the near future, such as to
describe what they’re going to do on some days during next week.
Finally, the last unit we covered “at the travel Agent`s” on gathering ideas about
holidays, will definitely enable them to brainstorm ideas relevant to the topic of
“Holidays” and use them as a basis for keeping notes for each paragraph of the postcard
and use them in drafts, afterwards.
Cave?
Pounda Beach Antiparos
On Wednesday, I am going to go
What is she going to do on
sightseeing to Antiparos and take a
Wednesday?
lot of photos.
Closing
Love,
Joe
Ash Lane
Banbury
England
In fact, the presentation of photos of Paros, the learners` native island, scattered
around the walls of the classroom, will incite them to emotional influences and language
transfer between the previously acquired language and the target one (Odlin 1989) and
they also have their say in the production of a piece of writing. (Myles, 2002).
It is also an excellent opportunity, using the Writing –Process approach (White &
Arndt 1991) to talk and write about holidays on the island, since they are not accustomed
to going on holidays during summer seasons, because they get part-time seasons.
A variety of activities have been designed to attract the learners` attention and to
guide them to produce drafts of postcards, before producing the final one for responding-
to practice writing for content, purpose and audience (Raimes cited in Ghaith 2002) in
their teams.
The model postcard cut up into strips of paper will guide them to the content of a
postcard (genre); it will activate top-down and bottom-up reading skills of the postcard,
its addresses, greetings and closings, a process which will enable learners to “learn to
write” (Tribble 1996, p.118) at the later stages of the Process Writing Approach.
The wh-task will be used as a springboard for learners to contribute ideas for the
brainstorming session of gathering data to use for producing drafts, later. More
specifically, after collection of data, in two teams, they will be invited to select ideas
/establish viewpoints and create a first draft in their teams.
Next, there will be a rough evaluation amongst teams, since they will swap papers
and be invited to comment on each other`s drafts. Based on the comments, they arrange
information and structure the text produce the first drafts, to deliver them to the next
group for peer evaluation and responding (White and Arndt 1991).
After feedback, a second draft will be produced in their teams, with prompting and
guidance, this time, to focus on developing cohesion and coherence between paragraphs-
discoursal based approach towards learner-centres syllabuses (N. Holmes 2000-2004)-
before delivering it in for self-evaluation / proof-reading.
Finally, they will finish editing their final draft on the re alia/postcard and deliver it for
final responding to their classmates, who, in turn read it out to class. It is a process, in
which we feel that credit is given for every aspect of their effort which goes into the
writing process. Our goal is to present writing as lively, stimulating process, which Lu
Chi cited in White & Arndt 1991 puts the “matching of matter and manner”, such that it
“Stand up and look around Ss stand up and look around To explore around the
you all the photos of Paros them all the photos of Paros on class, to be introduced to
on the walls. the walls the topic of holidays,
gradually
“Look at them and then, Ss look at them and then, they
say to others which of say to their classmates which To exchange views, to
these places you like to go of these places they like to go state preferences /dislikes
on holidays and why” on holidays and why and to give reasons for
their choices
“You have 1’ to do this”
Pre-Writing After feedback, T shows Ss observe the task To establish context and to H/O2+3 Plenary Mode 3-4`
(a): photo of “Joe” and use learners` schematic
informs Ss that he visited knowledge of the world to
Paros last August for 5 combine it with the
days and he wrote a lesson`s topic
postcard to his best friend,
Amy, back in England.
“Unfortunately, this Ss get into two groups- Groups To promote group work,
postcard is in pieces and A+B get their pieces of paper to reorder pieces of paper,
Pre-Writing After feedback, T assigns Ss are assigned to work on two To practice reading skills, H/O3+4 Group Work 2-3`
(c): two paragraphs for each paragraphs in their teams and such as scanning and
group to work on, of the get the wh-comprehension task reading for detail
model postcard, and hands to complete for their
out a wh-comprehension paragraphs
task to complete for their
paragraphs.
Feedback: After feedback, she tells Ss get the pieces of paper, To reorder the strips of H/O3 Plenary Mode 2-3`
them to come to the w/b come to the w/b and put them paper on the w/b, to
and put the strips of paper one under the other present it as a whole, and
one under the other. to use it as a springboard
for the brainstorming
session
“What are the things you They are going to take down And to ask them to
did and what are you the things they did and what brainstorm ideas in their
going to do the next few they are going to do the next teams useful for
days?” few days producing drafts
T tells them that one of One group member writes the To work collaboratively to H/O6 , w/b & Plenary Mode
them will write the draft draft and the others help out achieve an aim H/O3 & Group Work
and the others will help
out; at the same time she
points at the model
postcard on the w/b and
explains
Peer After writing, T tells Ss to Ss swap papers and give them To promote co-operation H/O6 Group Work 2-3`
Evaluation: swap papers and give to the other group to re-read to achieve a goal, to peer-
them to the other group to them and to make comments evaluate, to respond to the
make comments- first draft and to give
feedback on the content
(Raimes cited in Gaith
2002)
While- After feedback, T advises Ss rewrite their drafts To improve the skill of H/O6 Group Work 2-3`
Writing Ss to rewrite their drafts, writing (Charles 1990)
Second much better, now, they`ve
draft): got the feedback from
other groups;
Post- T tells Ss to read out in Ss read out their postcards to To get their meaning Re alia / Plenary Mode 2-3`
Writing class, their postcards class across to the Postcards
(final readership(Charles 1990)
responding) and to get final responding
: (White & Arndt 1991)
Follow- T thanks for their time Ss thank for time, too None None None None
Up:
APPROX
55 mins
Love,
Joe
Who?
To whom?
Why?
What?
When?
Where?
(H/O5)
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