Blog process - Peer Assessment Blog Author: Kirsten Boden Blog Assessor: Robbie Gale Date: 10/9/13

Question 1- The Formatting of the Blog You have used a good choice of background, post background and font colours. You can distinctly see indiviual posts and you can read them clearly because of the font colour used. Your blog title is also clear and easy to read and you have used the correct URL protocol. Also all of your posts are on one single page, this is good because you don't have to click older posts to access your firsts posts. In addition to this you have taken off the social sharing option which makes your Blog look more neat and professional. However your blog writing is on the small side and it is quite hard to see. Current mark : 9/10 Question 2 - Your Welcome Post

You have introduced yourself well explaining what you are studying. Although you haven't mentioned the specific title (OCR AS/ A2 LEVEL MEDIA STUDIES) and you haven't mentioned about what people can do if they find a problem with your Blog. In addition to this, your first sentence doesn't make sense ('i will post all the my media work') Current mark - 4/10 Question 3 - Have you published a post that clearly defines shot types? is it supported with embedded media ? You have identified 7 shot types and gave the definition of what each shot is with adequate detail. Unfortunately you haven' t supported them with embedded media. Current mark - 6/10 Question 4 - have you published a post that clearly defines camera movements ? Is it supported with embedded media? You have published a post that does identify and explain 4 camera movements, you have also gave an accurate

explanation for each type. However, you have only shown four types of movements when you could have shown more. Current mark - 6/10 Question 5 - Have you published a post that clearly defines cut types ? Ia tis supported with embedded media? You have identified the two main cut types and given each type a definition. To make this post better you could have used to a picture to show the difference. Current mark - 8/10 Question 6 - Have you published a post that that clearly defines the rule of thirds? Is this supported with embedded media? You have published a clear post on what the rule of thirds are and you have also used a picture to help back up your work, which makes it easy to understand. Current mark - 9/10

Question 7 - have you published a post that clearly identifies what Match on Action is ? Is it supported with embedded media? You have given the basic definition of what Match on Action is and you have used embedded media to back it up. Current mark - 9/10 Question 8 - have you published a post that clearly identifies the 180 degree rule? Is this supported with embedded media? You have explained what the 180 degree rule is and you have used embedded media to explain it more. However you could have used a video.\ Current mark - 6/10 Question 9 - Have you published a post that clearly defines Continuity? Is this supported with embedded media? You have not published a post about what continuity is !

Current mark - 0/10 Question 10 - Did you publish a post that clearly shows how scripts should be presented ? is this supported with embedded media? You have explained the basics about script writing. You have explained that it should be in courier font size 12 ,You have also explained the basic format of how a script should be set up. In addition to this you have backed up your work with embedded media. Current mark - 8/10 Question 11 - Did you complete the Preliminary task successfully? Did you observe the basic production rules? You have not completed the task ! Current mark - 0/10 Question 12 - Does my blog have a continuing narrative ? Does it link logically from post to post? Is it easy for the reader to follow my media journey?

Your Blog does have have a continuing narrative and it is easy for the reader to follow your media journey. But your posts do not follow on from one another. To correct this you could tell the reader what you are going to be doing on your next post. Current mark - 5/10 Question 13 - Have you demonstrated good time management? Are your posts complete? Have you completed your homework?

Your Blog doesn't look rushed, it is good quality and most of your posts are complete. But they could be explained more. Current mark 6/10 76/100 well done 58 per cent