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Unvanquished Rough Draft
Unvanquished Rough Draft
Unvanquished Rough Draft
Dr. Lasseter
American Literature
5/16/08
Vengeance is the Lord’s
“‘It is mine to avenge; I will repay’, says the Lord” (Romans 12:16). Revenge is not
something that man should seek against their neighbor instead good deeds should be used against
evil. Faulkner’s The Unvanquished deals with the idea of revenge and the effects that it has upon
the characters. The reader observes those who fall under the weight of revenge and those who
triumph by avoiding it. The Unvanquished treats revenge as an evil action that only leads to
more violence and does little for the one seeking vengeance. The effects of revenge are presented
through Rosa, Drusilla, and Bayard who comes to represent that there are alternatives to revenge.
Rosa’s quest for her lost silver and mules results in the mule scheme that ultimately leads
to her death. Rosa feels obligated to go and retrieve her lost silver and mules which are in the
hands of the Yankees. Rosa has lost everything and desperately desires compensation from the
Yankees. “Ishall inquire until I find Colonel Dick and then we will load the chest in the wagon
and Loosh can lead the mules” (Faulkner 79). Rosa believes that her quest will be easy however
it turns into a type of revenge in that Rosa desires payback for the actions of the Union Army and
when she obtains her lost goods she uses her paperwork from the Yankees to steal their mules for
what she claims is a good cause. Rosa even tells God that her thievery was for a good cause, “I
sinned first for justice […] I sinned for the sake of food and clothes for your own creatures who
could not help themselves” (Faulkner 147). Rosa’s vengeful actions only get her into serious
trouble through the mule scheme, yet she continues her actions in the name of justice against the
Yankees until her death at the hands of Grumby. Nothing good comes from Rosa’s quest for her
goods even though she attributes good causes to her wrong actions. Any form of vengeance or
misdirected justice results in only bad outcomes and for Rosa it is destruction. Ringo alludes to
this destruction, “It was them mules. That first batch of mules we got for nothing. [That killed
her]” (Faulkner 184). Rosa’s actions lead to her death thus initiating the string of violence with
Drusilla’s lusts for revenge because of the death of her fiancée during the war transform
her into a hysterical, violent and depressed person who cannot find enough violence to make up
for the death of her fiancée. Drusilla seeks to avenge the death of her fiancée by fighting in John
Sartoris’ regiment where she can kill Yankees. This desire for bloodshed consumes her and all
other emotions are completely erased. Drusilla only cares for her death or the death of Yankees
by her hand. Drusilla stops sleeping and finds that life is meaningless with all of one’s concerns
being destroyed or killed off. “In Drusilla’s words thank God for nothing” (Faulkner 100-101)
Drusilla’s desire for revenge causes her to become a violent person full of despair and rage.
Drusilla’s time in John Sartoris’ troop does nothing to satiate her lust for revenge. No matter how
many people die, Drusilla never finds an end to her craving. In addition Drusilla believes that her
idea of justice must apply to Bayard’s situation with Redmond and encourages him to seek
revenge. “Do you feel them? The long true barrels true as justice, the triggers[…] quick as
retribution, the two of them slender and invincible and fatal as the physical shape of love”
(Faulkner 236). As a result of this never ending hunger for revenge Drusilla becomes confused
and even tortured by Bayard’s refusal to kill Redmond, which would continue the circle of
violence. Why he’s not […] I kissed his hand […] beginning to laugh, the laughter rising,
becoming a scream yet still remaining laughter” (Faulkner 239). Drusilla becomes insane and
tortured by the thought that Bayard will resist revenge. All Drusilla really understands is revenge,
naturally she becomes disturbed by Bayard’s actions causing her to have a breakdown. Drusilla
represents revenge with Faulkner even calling her a “priestess” of violence (Faulkner 219). Her
desire for revenge is never filled and nothing comes from her extensive quest for vengeance. The
Bayard Sartoris witnesses several acts of vengeance and their effects. Since Bayard only
knows revenge from Rosa’s mule adventures and Drusilla’s quest to avenge her fiancée, Bayard,
does not question his determination to kill Grumby in order to avenge Rosa (Granny). When
asked by Uncle Buck what Bayard wants to do about Grumby Bayard states, “ I want to borrow a
pistol” (Faulkner 1590 Bayard and Ringo search for months in order to find Grumby and not
once does Bayard question what he is about to do. Bayard avenges Rosa by killing Grumby and
he mutilates the body out of rage resulting in Rosa being successfully avenged, but no
satisfaction comes from this act. The Reader notices in Odor of Verbena that Bayard views this
event as a dark and evil. “If I am going to do what I have taught myself is right or if I am just
going to wish I were” (Faulkner 215). Bayard has not only been learning law, but he has taught
himself that what he did to Grumby was wrong even though it may have seemed just at the time
it was still revenge. Bayard reflects upon the events of his past and sees that vengeance leads to
no good. The actions of Rosa, Drusilla, John Sartoris, and Redmond all lead to bad ends, but
Bayard becomes determined to bring about the end of the violent circle that is revenge. Bayard
presents the reader that there is an alternative to revenge. It can be better to walk away than shoot
the person who harms you or others. Bayard understands and avoids the motto he remembers on
page 214 “Who lives by the sword shall die by it” (Faulkner 214).
Revenge transforms people and it does not lead to any good. Faulkner poured the ideas of
rage and frustration into his novels. Daniel Signal quotes in his book on Faulkner that, “‘We
more than other men’ he noted of his fellow southern writers ‘unconsciously write ourselves into
every line and phrase, postulating our past vain despairs and rages and frustrations’” (Singal
191). Faulkner used anger and the vengeful nature of those who had to bear the harsh life of the
war torn South as a major theme of his works. The Unvanquishedpresents the idea of revenge as
a negative part of human nature that accomplishes nothing and never leads to any good. The
effects of revenge appear through Rosa, Drusilla, Bayard, and others with Bayard being the only
person to break the cycle of vengeance. Rosa’s desire to retrieve her goods results in her
dangerous mule scheme, which places both Bayard and Ringo into danger. It also results in death
for Rosa who dies trying to steal more mules. Another example is Drusilla’s lust for avenging her
fiancée, which transforms her into a violent and vindictive person. Her need for revenge and
violence drives her to the brink of insanity as shown through the pain she receives when Bayard
makes it clear that he is not going to kill Redmond. Bayard influence by vengeful acts such as
these finds no fault in executing Grumby for killing Rosa, but Bayard comes to realize at the end
of the novel that revenge and his actions towards Grumby were wrong. Revenge satisfies nothing
for a person it only brings pain and despair. The reader observes the cycle of violent revenge in
the Unvanquished where everyone ends up killing others out of revenge. There are alternatives to
revenge, which Bayard presents at the end of the novel. Not only does The Unvanquished
condemn the act of revenge, but it also presents the hope of an alternative way of dealing with