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Location Living Room

Visual Beer cans, bear bottles and a filled ashtray sat on a small table.

Audio Time $adio show ++,+talking about the weather% news. ++,1+

Used clothing crumpled on $adio carries on the floor. and arguing is faintly heard in the background. JAY an18 year old boy wakes up mid day on a sofa, in a plain white t shirt and shorts, and reaches to the clock to turn of the radio. Jay sits up, stretches and is da!ed from the sun shinning through the crack in the curtains" he hastily reaches to the curtains and closes them. #e then looks down at his feet. Jay/s socks ha0e holes and the floor is messy with litter (alcohol, food packets etc.) #e kicks away some of the rubbish to clear a path. Jay wipes his eyes aggressi0ely. &o0ement of rubbish being pushed. &oans and sighs. 'he click of turning of the radio. (Arguing in the background becomes louder) *rumpling of rubbish on the floor.

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1ighing from Jay. (2oud footsteps upstairs) &o0ement of standing up and rubbish being rustled. (Arguing

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#e stands up from sitting slouched on the sofa, as if he is in a hurry.

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Bus Stop

A phone call to Jay from his girlfriend at a Bus 1top with glo0es on. 24A# (the girlfriend) rings Jay and the phone goes to 0oice mail. 2eah te5ts Jay saying 6where are you7/ 'he curtains for the window are shut and a shadow of 8ay shows him putting on 8eans, a hoodie and using deodorant. 2eah pays for some cigarettes in a shop. Jay enters the frame with a hoodie and 8eans. #e is doing up the tops buttons to his 8eans and stops and looks around confused. Jay picks up his belongings (an old phone, an old wallet, a cigarette packet) #e grabs his shoes from the side of the sofa and slips them on. Jay puts a cigarette in his mouth and e5its the frame :uickly. 2eah finishes a cigarette and throw/s it on the floor.

upstairs) 'raffic and urban sounds of cars and commuters. 'he 0oice mail lady.

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Living Room

Corner Shop

1ound of ++,9character putting on clothes and spraying deodorant. (Arguing begins to get louder) 45changing of ++,98 money and cigarettes. (Arguing from upstairs) ('he arguing and mo0ement from upstairs stops) ;anicked mo0ement. +1,++ +1,+<

Living Room

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Jay slipping on his shoes :uickly. ;anicked mo0ement. 1ounds of cars, teenagers playing football

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In a Park

and chatting. 1he is walking through a park where teenagers are sitting on climbing frames and starring at her whilst she walks past. 2eah gets out her phone and tries to ring Jay again, but it goes to 0oice mail. Burgh Heath Tra ic Lights *hatter from the teenagers and sounds of cars.

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*hatter from the teenagers, cars and the 0oice mail lady. Jay walks across the traffic 'raffic and cars lights and it/s not the dri0ing. green man, he walks across the street whilst the car is coming and he puts out his hand to signal stop but doesn/t hesitate or look at the car. 'he car stops and beeps. Beeping of a car horn, traffic and dri0ing cars. 'raffic and cars dri0ing. By passers chatter and cars dri0ing. Jay/s 0oice in the distance is a mumble. By passers chatter and cars dri0ing and shouting of speech. >?/m coming@ 1top nagging meAB &o0ement of 2eah, chatter

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Burgh Heath ! Path"a#

Jay remains unaffected and continues to walk across the road. Jay answers a phone call and talks on the phone for a while.

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#e stops and begins to argue down the phone displaying aggressi0e body language and mo0ement. Jay shouts down the phone and then hangs up. In a Park 2eah looks at the time and gets up off of the bench

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aggressi0ely.

from by standers%passers and football Cootsteps, chatter from by standers%passers and football. *ars dri0ing and pedestrians talking. *ars dri0ing past and footsteps. *ars dri0ing past. *ars dri0ing past.

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1he walks out of the frame. Burgh Heath ! Shops Jay walks across a pathway passing by other pedestrians. Jay is walking past low economic class flats and gritty alleyways. Jay walks past some shops" he turns his head and looks at them. Jay stops and as he does and he becomes enticed and obser0es the latest odds in a betting shop.

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Jay gets out his wallet, it is Eehicles and the used and doesn/t ha0e cash rustling of his but does ha0e used scratch wallet. cards and coupons, he then checks the !ip up pouch for change and there/s about D- left in change. Jay puts away his wallet and walks out of the frame. Jay walks back to the betting shop and scratches his head whilst cowering away from passers by. #e enters the betting shop and a young girl with a balloon and her family walk past. *ars dri0ing past and footsteps. *ars dri0ing past, pedestrians and footsteps. *ars dri0ing past, the family talking and footsteps.

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'he door shuts and the girl and her family lea0e the frame.

*ars dri0ing past and footsteps.

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