Examples (Year 5)

Your parents want to buy a house. Which house would you like your parents to buy?
Write down your points and reasons then write the complete sentences.
Point / ntroduction !eason "omplete sentence
ntroduction
would like my
parents to buy a
sin#le$storey semi$
detached house
because there are
enou#h rooms %or us.
would like my parents to buy a
sin#le$storey semi detached
house because there are
enou#h rooms %or us.
Point &
'he house has three
bedrooms and it is
suitable
because there are only
three members in my
%amily.
'he house has three bedrooms
and it is suitable because there
are only three members in my
%amily.
Point (
t has two bathrooms
but it doesn)t matter
because my parents
can use one and can
use the other bathroom.
n addition* it has two
bathrooms but it doesn)t matter
because my parents can use
one and can use the other
bathroom.
Point +
t has a small #arden
and am sure my
mother would lo,e it
because she likes
#ardenin#.
-esides* it has a small #arden
and am sure my mother would
lo,e it because she likes
#ardenin#.
Point .
can cycle with my
%riends to school
because the house is
only a %ew minutes %ar
%rom my school.
/oreo,er* can cycle with my
%riends to school because the
house is only a %ew minutes %ar
%rom my school.
Point 5
'he price is not too
hi#h %or my parents
because both o% them
are workin#.
0urthermore* the price is not
too hi#h %or my parents
because both o% them are
workin#.
"losure
am sure ha,e made the ri#ht choice and
hope my parents will like my choice.
am sure ha,e made the ri#ht
choice and hope my parents
will like my choice.
Your %amily would like to #o %or a holiday. Which destination would you like %or your
%amily to #o?
1ow* write down your points and reasons then write the complete sentences.
Point / ntroduction !eason "omplete sentence
ntroduction
would like my %amily
to #o to
because
Point &
Point ( .
Point +
Point .
Point 5
"losure