LYRICS

ELOJI/SAMPLE
TIMECODE
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SHOT
INT-DAY-LIVING AREA
ACTION
ELOJI AND FEMALE LEAD (YET TO BE CAST)

INTRODUCTION:
Sometimes x 3

VERSE ONE:
sometime for a long time, I was pissed off
Make Love In the night but day light you
get cross.
end it off with an xo like were playing on
that criss cross
used to be look at each others eyes and
get lost
Somestimes, we laugh when it aint
nothing funny
sun shine when it aint really sunny
On grind, out to get that money
but i gotta ask, wonder what you want
from me. babe
cos its been different ever since you
moved on
didn't have time to listen when i wrote a
new song.
well that i know we don't deserve it.
can you tell me the point and the
purpose
i aint certain that i can maintain this
hurting,
sometime I'm feeling worthless

CHORUS:
So i think that maybe
You should be nicer than you are,
Sometimes
well your don't have to be to such a
fucking trip
sing it with me, You should be nicer than
you are, Sometimes

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Wide shot of door
opening


Wide of Eloji and
Couch, girl in
background










Mids and Closeups, 50
f p/s


Wide of Couch, girl in
background






Wides and mids of
scene

Close ups and mids of
Eloji rapping to the girl



SCENE 1:Eloji and girl walk into the room fighting, no audio of dialogue



SCENE 2:Eloji rapping on the couch looking around pleading as he raps,
Walking around in the background.











SCENE 3:Slow paced fight with girl, close up. See them screaming at each
other. Eloji gets slapped


SCENE 2: Back to first shot (modified)







SCENE 4 of Eloji in a heated debate with girl, every line of his he says as a
line to her, practically pleading with her while shes volatile.

*Spoken line from Eloji



Im going crazy
sometimes I wanna up and quit //
I just really wanna
go where ive never been, see what i
never saw, do what i never did
BUT YOU
You should be nicer than you are,
Sometimes

BREAK FROM TRACK

-Semi Spoken/Music Fades out-

I just felt that maybe we getting a little
too close,
we need to grown i mean you know you
know
sorry I'm about to choke
love you so but I've gotta go.

Don't send me no four page letter.
send you back 5 on why we cant be
together.
you gotta understand that this aint forever
we got change for the better.

so wipe your tears girl, you gotta fight
your fears girl
you got life for years girl but honestly i
just felt that sometimes.

-Music Fades in-
X2

you were abusive, loose true we were in
tune
to the music dawn till noon wed groove
found new feeling, soul blues healing
and in the bed i swear you a true demon.

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Shoot Scene

Close up of Eloji as
track comes in, as if
scene has continued.

















Wide of both across
frame




Close ups of ELoji
Rapping

*Spoken line from Eloji as if Dialogue




Similar shot to the opening shot



SCENE 4 CONT.: ACTED FINAL FIGHT

Continues into the track coming back in



















SCENE 4 CONT. OR ALT VIEW: Girl is incredibly angry, yelling and turning
her back to Eloji, while while is rapping (pleading to her) this to her.




Girl starts packing up her belonging while Eloji is rapping at her and around
the room.

but there are other things that i needing
the music changed me so Im out to
change these people
cant do that if we only focus on our evils
i need some one who truly believes me.

Used to cook me bacon and eggs
Now for breakfast i get hate on instead
where were you last night, came half past
five

who's scent you wearing you smell like
that naked sex.

-SAMPLE-

CHORUS:
So i think that maybe
You should be nicer than you are,
Sometimes
well your don't have to be to such a
fucking trip
sing it with me, You should be nicer than
you are, Sometimes
Im going crazy
sometimes I wanna up and quit //
I just really wanna
go where ive never been, see what i
never saw, do what i never did
but you
You should be nicer than you are,
Sometimes

So i think that maybe
You should be nicer than you are,
Sometimes
well your don't have to be to such a
fucking trip
sing it with me, You should be nicer than
you are, Sometimes



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Wides of girlfriend
packing up around him.







Same shot as opening,
as she leaves



Same shot as opening
and previous but with
friends entering


Scene of friends
around the room cut
with close ups of Eloji
rapping within scene.


























Rampant scream of abuse before girl storms out and slams the door.




SCENE 5: Eloji sitting in the room and friends start coming in and they start
moving things around the room and start cleaning up, changing the room
over time intercut with Eloji rapping. Throwing out the stuff she left behind.


Friends look like they are singing along with the chorus






















Im going crazy
sometimes wanna i up and quit //
I just really wanna
go where ive never been, see what i
never saw, do what i never did

-SAMPLE-

look I'm sorry that
sing it with me, You should be nicer than
you are, Sometimes


WRITE UP OUTRO




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Same as opening as
friends lieve
Short shots of Eloji
getting ready around
the room singing along.










Same as opening as
New girl comes in with
him
Friends Leave

SCENE 6Further in the future, Tidying the house singing along to the track,
preparing for a night out, dancing across the room as if hes listening to the
music, whistling to himself, maybe ironing his shirt. Walks out of the room.










SCENE 7: Eloji brings new girl into the room.