Living in cities has both advantages and disadvantages. One disadvantage is traffic, which causes people to lose time and energy commuting to work or running errands. Cairo, one of the largest cities in the Middle East, suffers from serious traffic issues like long rush hours and accidents. Despite government efforts to build new roads and tunnels, the problem remains unsolved. Some reasons for Cairo's traffic issues are different work schedules between private and public sectors, roads unable to handle increasing numbers of cars due to limited parking, and many residents living far from their work in the city center. To solve the problem, strict enforcement of traffic laws and a strong public transportation system are needed to reduce car usage in the city center.
Living in cities has both advantages and disadvantages. One disadvantage is traffic, which causes people to lose time and energy commuting to work or running errands. Cairo, one of the largest cities in the Middle East, suffers from serious traffic issues like long rush hours and accidents. Despite government efforts to build new roads and tunnels, the problem remains unsolved. Some reasons for Cairo's traffic issues are different work schedules between private and public sectors, roads unable to handle increasing numbers of cars due to limited parking, and many residents living far from their work in the city center. To solve the problem, strict enforcement of traffic laws and a strong public transportation system are needed to reduce car usage in the city center.
Living in cities has both advantages and disadvantages. One disadvantage is traffic, which causes people to lose time and energy commuting to work or running errands. Cairo, one of the largest cities in the Middle East, suffers from serious traffic issues like long rush hours and accidents. Despite government efforts to build new roads and tunnels, the problem remains unsolved. Some reasons for Cairo's traffic issues are different work schedules between private and public sectors, roads unable to handle increasing numbers of cars due to limited parking, and many residents living far from their work in the city center. To solve the problem, strict enforcement of traffic laws and a strong public transportation system are needed to reduce car usage in the city center.
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living in a city is the excessive traffic in which we may lose time and power in order to get from and to our work, or do run errands especially if you leave live close to the city center . In some cities, the city center is an old part of the city which was built around different times and it is unable to handle the increasing numbers of both populations and cars. I am from Cairo which is one of the biggest cities in the Middle East . Cairo is suffering from a serious traffic problems, like longer rush hours, excessive blockings and traffic accidents,. Ddespite the governments efforts on to constructing alternative roads, bridges and tunnels the problem remains unsolved. In order to be able to address the problem correctly, one needs is to be fully aware of the reasons for it. some of the reasons of that cause the traffic issue in Cairo are, different working hours between the employee of the privet sector than the governmental sector, that the roads cannot handle the parking for this increasing number which means taking space from the road itself so the capacity of the street which can maybe handle two cars side by side is now one care at a time, the fact that all the Cairo resedintat residents choose to leave in the center of the city no matter how far their work is. I think that to solve this problem we have to be very strict facing all kind of traffic trespassing, wrong parking, in the old part of the city we should bane the usage of cars ,as well as construct a stronger public transportation system that will allow people to get rid of their cars if they found find a suitable alternative.
Overall, you have very good ideas. However, how you present them is the KEY thing here. Remember what you say in the tutorial: you need to read the question carefully, get your ideas together, put a main sentence for each paragraph (like a simple table of contents), write down the paragraphs, revisit the question again, then read your answer all at once. For example, in this practice, you needed to mention the following ideas: 1. First, restate the problem (we have a traffic problem, rush hour, etc etc) 2. Reasons for this traffic issue (old cities with their traffic infrastructure not supporting the growth) 3. State that some people offer banning cars from city center as a solution and state THEIR reasons (until now you are simply stating facts and observations, no person opinion) 4. State your opinion whether you agree or disagree and why. Some general tips: Do not use generalizations EVER: no everyone believes, everyone agrees, no one can deny, it is well-known etc. Comment [NH1]: Energy? Comment [NH2]: This should come in the end. This is your conclusion Comment [NH3]: ? Comment [NH4]: This makes sense if it was before the previous paragraph. Comment [NH5]: Repeated. You mentioned that in the previous paragraph. Formatted: List Paragraph, Bulleted + Level: 1 + Aligned at: 0.32" + Indent at: 0.57" Stay focused.. first sentence of each paragraph should generally be the paragraphs topic sentence Try not to make your sentences too too long, and focus on punctuation (commas, periods, etc.) Watch out for your usage of verbs, do not do literal translation from Arabic.. for example, in Arabic we use past tense to refer to hypothetical situations (lao wagado) whereas in English you should use simple present if they find. Use the longer form. No dont, cant, Im but do not, cannot, I am. However, yet, furthermore, nevertheless,