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Sample Dramatic Story Ending
Sample Dramatic Story Ending
After the fire died out, Lisa approached the smouldering remains of her father's house. Her
expression was troubled, as if at any moment she would either explode into ecstacy or crumple
into despairand one was just as likely as the other. The house she had known her whole life,
which held all of the memories and the intolerable pain from her childhood, was reduced to
embers beneath her feet. For the first time since he died, she felt like he was gone.
Joe touched her shoulder lightly. It's over now, he whispered. You don't have to be scared.
She stared for a moment longer, as the violent mountain winds whipped the dirt and ash across
her face. He noticed for the first time that she had grown pale and emaciated in the time since
they had first met. He barely saw any trace of the passionate beauty that he had so lusted over
all those years ago. The decades of shame showed like a biography written across her face, in
the bags under her eyes and the lines on her forehead. The pout shed always worn, which he
had initially found so arresting, had now burned itself into her mouth, and he could only pity her
for all her suffering and loss.
Soil was building up in her hair, turning the pale strawberry blonde into a greyish brown to match
her eyes. She didnt blink. How does a person live without fear? she said without asking,
without wanting an answer.
The sun-baked corn crackled under the breeze, and off in the field a stalk broke, amplifying its
deafening crack between the cliffs and mountains, echoing the terrible sound as it receded into
the valley, leaving them alone among the dust.
The heavy oak doors of the St. James Cathedral slammed shut, and I collapsed on the nearest
pew. I suddenly realized how ironic it was that I came to a place of forgiveness when
forgiveness was the last thing I'd been looking for.