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THE CARPENTER
By
Rikhel Trivedi

Email: Rikhel@hotmail.co.uk
Phone Number: 07961477720
Address: 15 Spencer Road, Ilford, Essex, IG3 8PW

FADE IN
Mid-Shot

INT: CORRIDOR EVENING

LUCY (16) dressed in school uniform, opens the first door and
the pulls the second door and comes out the ladies toilet.
POV

LUCY walks out to the corridor as she exits the toilets and
looks right and then turns left making her way down the
corridor.
Mid-Shot

Long Shot

The CARPENTER quickly and forcefully grabs LUCY from by her head
away from the corridor.
Close Up

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INT: WORKSHOP EVENING

LUCY (16) is lying on the floor groggy tied up by ropes and
dressed with whats left from her school uniform.
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to Up

INT: OUTSIDE WORKSHOP EVENING

Extreme Close Up

Close Up

The CARPENTER (30s) tall figure and dressed in blue overalls,

he puts on a pair or carpenter gloves. He then looks and opens
the door as he enters the workshop.
Long Shot

Close Up

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INT: WORKSHOP EVENING

The CARPENTER walks and stops in front of unconscious Caucasian
girl lying on the floor and glares at her.
Mid-shot

LUCY (16) is lying on the floor groggy, her eyes open slowly and
turns her head facing the CARPENTER as she gains conscious, she
sees a tall silhouette figure and immediately begins to panics
as she struggles to move as her hands and legs are tied together
to the worktop and screams
Close up

LUCY
(Screams)

Long Shot

Mid-Shot

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Medium
Close up

Close up

The CARPENTER stands and watches LUCY scream and struggle. He

then walks to the worktop and stares at all the tools lied on
the table. The CARPENTER looks at the metal chisel and touches
the body of the chisel, he then moves his hand further down and
picks up the wooden mallet and experiments with it in his hands.
Close Up

Medium Close up

POV

LUCY carries to scream as she sees the CARPENTER pick up the

wooden mallet and walks towards her. LUCY continues to struggle
to move but fails as she has been tied to the workshop.
Long Shot

The CARPENTER then walks up to LUCY making sure he sees her

clearly and stops and glares watching LUCY scream whilst holding
the mallet.
Extreme Close Up
Close Up
LUCY looks at the mallet in the CARPENTERs hands
closes her eyes and continues to struggle and scream

she

then

Long Shot

LUCY
(Screams)
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

Close Up
Close up

The CARPENTER breathes in heavily and begins to strike the

mallet rapidly across to LUCYs ribs. The CARPENTER then stops
and steps back.
Long Shot

FADE OUT

Extreme Close Up

FADE IN

The CARPENTER walks back to the worktop and places the wooden
mallet back to its position and walks back to LUCY and unties
the ropes tied against to the pole and LUCY drops to the floor
lying there dead.
Mid- Close up

FADE OUT
Word Count: 436