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Ring-Composition in Catullus 64
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RING-COMPOSITIONIN CATULLUS 64
It is apparentto even the casual readerof Catullus64 that a basic patternof
ring-compositionarticulatesthe poem: prologue-guests-coverlet-Ariadne
and Theseus-coverlet-guests-epilogue.1
However, if the reader,encouraged by the elaborate example of Catullus 68, goes on to look for ringcompositionin greaterdetail, he is soon confrontedwith awkwardquestions.
Whatis thereat the beginningto matchthe lengthysong of theFates atthe end?
What correspondsto Ariadne's lament, nearly one-fifth of the whole? These
andsimilardifficultieshave discouragedscholarsfromlooking for an elaborate
scheme of ring-composition.2Nevertheless, after a careful study of what I
considerto be the naturaldivisions of the poem, I have come to the conclusion
thatin 64 Catullusis experimentingwith a form of ring-compositionin which
the related sections correspond in form and content, but may vary quite
markedlyin length. The structureis set out in diagrammaticform in Table 1,
and the verbal echoes which strengthen the links between corresponding
sections are listed in Table 2. I shall first attemptto show how the related
sections correspondto one anotherand then addressthe question of how the
discovery of ring-compositionaffects our understandingof the poem.
Since the correspondencesare most distinctin the innerstory, we will begin
with the two coverlet sections D (43-51) and d (265f). Here the links are selfevident in subject matter and striking in language (see Table 2). In D the
description of the actual coverlet is preceded by lines which dwell on the
luxuriousnessof its setting, but since several sections contain some kind of
prefatory material, I shall discuss this aspect of Catullus' compositional
techniquelater.
The correspondencebetween sections E (52-70) and e (249-264) also is
clear-cut. It is in these sections, and these sections only, that the scenes
11 would like to express my indebtednessto W. S. Andersonof the University of California,
Berkeley, and to the anonymousreaderof CJ for helpful criticismof earlierdraftsof this article.
The following commentarieshave proved most useful: W. Kroll (Leipzig 1929), C. J. Fordyce
(Oxford 1961), and K. Quinn(London 1970). Subsequentreferenceto these commentariesandto
the following article will be by author's name only: F. Klingner, "Catulls Peleus-Epos,"
SBBayerAkWiss(1956) Heft 6, pp. 1-92, which is reprintedin his Studien(Ziirich1964) 156-224.
2Klingner(supran. 1) notes that the arrivaland departureof the guests surroundsthe AriadneTheseus inset in the form of ring-composition(p. 30f) and that the account of the wedding is
interrupted"von der langen, in sich wieder vielfach durchbrochenenund in der Form der
Ringcompositionschliesslich zuriickgebogenenEinlage" (p. 80). Notable among the attemptsto
see more detailed ring-compositionare C. W. Mendell, "The Influence of the Epyllion on the
Aeneid," YCS 12 (1951) 205-226 (he sees Ariadne's lament as the center and omits 1-49 and
267-408 from his scheme) and D. Thomson, "Aspects of Unity in Catullus64," CJ 57 (1961)
49-57 (he also makesAriadne'slamentthe center, andtreatsthe song of the Fatesas a kindof coda).
A furtherscheme is proposedby C. Murley, "The Structureand Proportionof CatullusLXIV,"
TAPA68 (1937) 305-317. None of these schemes has won much acceptance. For furtherbibliographyon the poem see the useful lists by H. J. Leon in CW53 (1960) 174f, D. Thompsonin CW65
(1971) 121f and J. Granarolain Lustrum 17 / 1973-74 (1976) 27-70.
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Table 1
STRUCTURE OF CATULLUS 64
A 1-21 (21) Prologue: launching of Argo; Peleus sees Thetis; Jupiterdecides that they mu
B 22-30 (10) Makarismos of heroic age in general and of Peleus in particular.
C 31-42 (12) Arrival of mortal guests bearing gifts; abandonmentof country for to
D 43-51 (9) Luxuriousness of palace; coverlet on Thetis' couch.
E 52-70 (19) Ariadne on beach of Dia, staring after departedTheseus in "B
F 71-123 (53) Flashback: Theseus' expedition to Crete and abandonmen
G 124-201 (78) Set speech addressed to Theseus. Ariadne's querella
H 202-211 (10) Jupiterintervenes. Curse fulfilled; Theseus forge
g 212-37 (26) Set speech addressed to Theseus. Aegeus' querellae a
f 238-248 (11) Flashforward:Theseus returnsto Athens mente immemo
e 249-264 (16) Ariadne on beach. Approach of Dionysus and Bacchae.
d 265-266 (2) Coverlet.
c 267-302 (36) Departureof mortal guests. Arrival of immortalguests bearing rust
b 303-381 (79) Makarismos of Peleus sung by the Fates.
a 382-408 (27) Epilogue: formerly the gods mingled with mortals, but man's sinfulness ha
1
5
11
16f
25f
34
35
Table 2
242
246f
244
243
239f
248
g Ae
querellas2
respergas1s
languida no
nostros . . .
prospectans
bacchantes'
f Th
in assiduos2
ingressus .
praecipitem
cum primum
wind / mou
mente imme
2wor
223
230
219f
226
249
255
266
c De
279 portans silve
286f Tempel ...
d Co
pulvinar1 2
e Ar
a Ep
382 quondam
406 avertere'
397 est imbuta2
408 nec se conti
b M
323f o decus exim
Emathiae tu
47
pulvinarl 50 vestis . . . variata figuris
E Ariadne on Beach
52f prospectans1... cedentem2
61
ut effigies bacchantis'
F Theseus
71
assiduis2 . . . luctibus
73f ferox2 . . . Theseus . . . egressus
81f corpus . . . proicere
simul ac . . . conspexit
86
105ff wind / mountain-topsimile; flamine
123 immemori . . . pectore
G Ariadne's Speech
195 querellis,2 querellas2
respersum . . . caede
non . . . languescent lumina morte
nostrum . . . luctum
1wordnot found elsewhere in Catullus
130,
181
188
199
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DAVIDA. TRAILL
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. (323f)
The conclusion that the second address is intended to recall the first seems
inevitable. However, in view of the fact thatthe second makarismosis so much
moreimportantthanthe first, it wouldperhapsbe nearerthe markto say thatthe
first, which in any case presentsa somewhattruncatedappearance,is intended
to anticipatethe second.
Sections A (1-21) and a (382-408) form the poem's prologueand epilogue.
In both sections Catullusdwells on divine participationin humanaffairs. He
emphasisesthe personalnatureof thatparticipationby what Kinsey refersto as
"the awed ipsa in 9 and ipse in 21"1' andby praesentes in 384 andpraesens in
396. There is an antithesisin both sections between the past (quondam I and
382), when the gods mingled with mortals, and the present, when they shun
their company and sight:
quare nec talis dignanturvisere coetus
nec se contingi patiunturlumine claro. (407f)
This antithesisis the dominanttheme of the epilogue, butis less conspicuousin
the prologue. Nevertheless,the antithesisis felt theretoo, for quondampointsas
muchto the culturalas to the temporalgap betweenthe events describedandthe
present. In much the same way as our "once upon a time," it seems both
wistful and slightly condescending. It preparesthe reader for an ethos far
removedfrom thatof his own day. Dicuntur (2) is a furtherrecognitionof the
distance between the world of Greek mythology and the stark realities of
contemporaryRome. Also, the total withdrawalof the gods in the epilogue
(407f) is presaged in the prologue, where the Nereids emerge to gaze in
1oQuinncalls only lines 334-336 a makarismos,but the term can be appliedto the whole song,
as the impendingbirthof Achilles is to be seen as the culminationof Peleus' felicitas. Catullus
practicallylabels the song a makarismosin line 382: talia praefantes quondamfelicia Pelei.
"Kinsey (supra n. 7) 915.
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