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Goodfield Week 1 Graded
Goodfield Week 1 Graded
Goodfield Week 1 Graded
In the most part, the results did fit in my career path. Before going any further, I would like
to define what my career is. I would like a career in accounting or business administration with
contraction in finance.
The reason the result fit into my career path is that all the results deals with accounting.
Example is I can be a payroll manager or an accounting supervisor. There are results that in my
opinion have nothing to do with accounting. Example of this is a freight forwarder.
In general, the result do fit into my career path. Some of the results, in my opinion, do not fit.
The career profiler did give a wide range of careers I can do. In the most part, the profiler results
are in line with my chosen career path.
Note the highlighted areas and comments that I provided in this graded paper. The errors
in mechanics are the issue rather than the content of your writing. You are double-double
spacing after each paragraph, which creates a couple of formatting issues. If you are using
RiverPoint Writer, you do not ever have to hit the return key more than once, which is
done at the end of a paragraph; the system will automatically indent for the next
paragraph. Additionally, you did not cite the source nor did you provide a Reference page
for the source you obviously had to use.
422 words
0% passive voice (excellent)
6.8 grade level of writing (must be 16.0 or greater)
80% is the grade received