Name

: Krismonalia Rizki

Class/No

: XI MIPA 3 / 17
Jakarta As A Bad Working Place For Expatrities

Jakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to work in outside of the United
States of America, Canada and Western Europe. It is according to a recent report published by
Businessweek.
The Businessweek report ranked emerging markets that might be challenging to move
into due to their level of pollution, disease, political violence and availability of good and
services.
The report ranked Jakarta second, just below Lagos in Nageria and above Riyadh
Saudi Arabia and saying the threat of violence from extremest. In particular, it is serious
drawback to living in Jakarta. Bombings targeting foreign interests in Jakarta, such as the JW
Marriot hotel bombing in 2003, have been repeated elsewhere in the city.
The report say despite problem common to many developing cities such as the risk of
disease, poor sanitation, and excessive pollution, Indonesia can be an enticing location.
In response, the Jakarta administration take the report positively, saying it can spur the
administration to improve its performance.
A. Structure Of The Text
a. Thesis
: paragraph 1
Introduces the topic and shows speaker or writers position; Outlines of the
arguments to be presented.
b. Arguments
: paragraph 2 4
It consists about the states of the main argument, develops and supports each
point of argument.
c. Reiteration
: paragraph 5 (the last paragraph)
Restatement, restates speaker or writers position.
B. Languange Features
a. Emotive words
Serious
b. Connective or link argument
In particular, was serious drawback to living in Jakarta.
c. Simple present
Jakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to work in outside of
the United States of America, Canada and Western Europe. It is
according to a recent report published by Businessweek.
d. Compound sentence
The report ranked Jakarta second, just below Lagos in Nageria and
above Riyadh Saudi Arabia and saying the threat of violence from
extremest.
e. Qualify statement

In response, the Jakarta administration take the report positively,

saying it could spur the administration to improve its performance.
f. Complex sentence
Bombings targeting foreign interests in Jakarta, such as the JW Marriot
hotel bombing in 2003,

Name

: Krismonalia Rizki

Class/No

: XI MIPA 3 / 17
Cars Should Be Banned In The City

Cars should be banned in the city. As we all know, cars create pollution, and cause a
lot of road deaths and other accidents.
Firstly, cars, as we all know, contribute to most of the pollution in the world. Cars
emit a deadly gas that causes illnesses such as bronchitis, lung cancer, and triggers off
asthma. Some of these illnesses are so bad that people can die from them.
Secondly, the city is very busy. Pedestrians wander everywhere and cars commonly
hit pedestrians in the city, which causes them to die. Cars today are our roads biggest killers.
Thirdly, cars are very noisy. If you live in the city, you may find it hard to sleep at
night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.
In conclusion, cars should be banned from the city for the reasons listed.
A. Structure Of the Text
a. Thesis : paragraph 1
Introduces the topic and shows speaker or writers position; Outlines of the
arguments to be presented.
b. Arguments
: paragraph 2 3
It consists about the states of the main argument, develops and supports each
point of argument.
c. Reiteration
: paragraph 4 (the last paragraph)
Restatement, restates speaker or writers position.
B. Languange Features
a. Emotive words
Concentrate
b. Connective or link argument
Secondly, the city is very busy. Pedestrians wander everywhere and
cars commonly hit pedestrians in the city, which causes them to die.
Cars today are our roads biggest killers.
Thirdly, cars are very noisy. If you live in the city, you may find it hard
to sleep at night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk
to someone.
c. Simple present
Cars emit a deadly gas that causes illnesses such as bronchitis, lung
cancer, and triggers off asthma.
If you live in the city, you may find it hard to sleep at night, or
concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.
d. Compound sentence
As we all know, cars create pollution, and cause a lot of road deaths
and other accidents.

...,you may find it hard to sleep at night, or concentrate on your

homework, and especially talk to someone.
e. Qualify statement
Cars today are our roads biggest killers.
As we all know, cars create pollution
f. Complex sentence
Pedestrians wander everywhere and cars commonly hit pedestrians in
the city, which causes them to die.