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Modifiers
Modifiers
Modifiers
Misplaced Modifiers
A modifier should be placed next to the word it describes.
Example
Note how the placement of the modifier creates different possible meanings:
Note how different placement of the word only creates a difference in meaning between
these two sentences.
Sentence A means that the shopper did not buy any ties.
Sentence B means that the shopper visited only the tie department.
even
exactly
hardly
just
merely
nearly
only
scarcely
The logical meaning of this sentence is not that the vendor almost sold all of
her pottery, but that she sold almost all of her pottery.
Therefore, almost correctly belongs next to all.
Misplaced phrase
Example #1
As written, this sentence means that children were served on paper plates.
On paper plates is misplaced.
simply
Correctly written, the sentence means that hamburgers were served, on paper plates.
Example #2
As written, this sentence means that the car is carrying a briefcase. Carrying a
briefcase is misplaced.
Correctly written, the sentence means that the man is carrying a briefcase.
Misplaced clause
Example #1
Correctly written, the sentence means that the toy was broken.
Example #2
As written, the sentence means that I forgot my keys after I got home.
Squinting modifiers
A squinting modifier is a modifier misplaced so that it may describe two situations.
Example
Awkward separations
An awkward separation creates a confusing meaning.
Example
As written, this sentence separates the auxiliary verb from the main verb, creating an
awkward gap.
In this sentence, the modifier passing the building is positioned next to the
broken window.
The resulting meaning is that "the broken window" is "passing the building,"
clearly not the
intended meaning.
In this sentence, the modifier once revised and corrected is positioned next
to I, suggesting that "I" have been "revised and corrected."
Dangling gerund:
In this sentence, the modifier after roasting for three hours is positioned
next to we, meaning that "we" have been "roasting for three hours."
Dangling infinitive:
In this sentence, the modifier when just six years old is positioned next
to my grandmother, suggesting that my six year old grandmother taught me
ballet.
With the modifier next to my paper, the sentence clearly means that "my paper" was
"corrected and rewritten."
With the modifier next to an acrobat, the sentence clearly means that "an acrobat" can
"walk a high wire."
2. Rewrite the modifier (phrase) as an adverbial clause, thus eliminating the
need for an immediate word to modify.
With its own subject, "was revised and corrected" clearly refers to "my paper."
With its own subject, "was just six years old" clearly refers to "I."
Now the clause clearly shows that "we" have "roasted the turkey."