Get it Up

Written by
Alexander F.C Mroz

Address: 323E One Rockwell, Philippines

Mobile: 0928 872 0994
Email: alexandermroz@yahoo.com

FADE IN:
INT. SLEAZY MOTEL ROOM-NIGHT
Opening credits: going around the room showing all of the
objects in there including, the bed, a cage, condoms and an
ash tray. While the ever last is playing.
CUT TO:
INT. SLEAZY MOTEL HALLWAY-NIGHT
The hallway is silent. The floor is covered in red carpet and
the walls look old and dirty with the wall paper pealing off
of them.
At the end of the hall there are two people a man JOSH (20)
brown hair, well dressed. You can tell he has dressed up for
a date. And then there is a women LIZZY (21) long dark hair,
taller then Josh. She is wearing a slim fit dress. The two
are sucking on each others face as they smack from one wall
to the other slowly making there way to the room at the end.
Lizzy (still aggressively kissing Josh) smashes him into the
door Josh smiles and reaches into his pocket to grab the key
franticly. He puts the key into the lock and unlocks from
behind as Lizzy is biting his lip.
The door opens and Lizzy pushes him in with a demonic smile
on her face she closes the door behind her.
CUT TO:
INT. SLEAZY MOTEL ROOM-NIGHT
The room has a harsh red color palet, the feeling of sex is
in the air. There is a heart shaped bed, a cage, a window
with a shit view and a closet. The carpet is the same from
the hall but has stains which can only appear to be from
sperm.
Lizzy looks at Josh with her big eyes and a the same smile on
her face.
Josh stares back at Lizzy lost her eyes that if they could
speak would say fuck me hard boy.
Lizzy starts to swiftly walk over to Josh as she kicks her
shoes off.
Josh starts to franticly take his shirt off.

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Lizzy gets to him helps him rip his shirt off and begins to
kiss him again. She starts to slowly make her way down to his
waist.
She unbuttons his pants but then realizes that his jeans
dont have a zipper. They are button up. Lizzy has problems
getting the buttons undone. Lizzy struggles for a moment or
two but then gets the buttons undone and continues to take
his pants off.
Now that his pants are Lizzy starts to rub Joshs penis
around outside of the underwear.
She then pulls his underwear down and begins to get him hard.
LIZZY
Yeah you like that baby.
Josh looks up to the ceiling but with a look of pleasure.
A few seconds go by but Josh still hasnt gotten a hard on
yet.
Lizzy looks up at Josh raising one of her eye brows to him.
Josh looks down at her with a confused look on his face.
They make eye contact and she stops jerking him off.
She then looks back down at his dick and starts again with a
bored look on her face. After a second or two when she
realizes that she is getting anywhere with it she stops.
LIZZY (CONTD)
Okay what the fuck?
She stands up and sits on the bed behind them.
Josh pulls his underwear up.
JOSH
I dont know? Im just having a
hard time, you know getting hard.
Lizzy looks at Josh, she still has the look of sex in her
eyes. Josh starts to pace back and forth.
LIZZY
Did I do something wrong.
JOSH
No! It was great

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LIZZY
Was I going to fast? Pulling to
hard maybe?
JOSH
No it felt good for me.
LIZZY
Was it to dry?
Josh stops pacing and looks at Lizzy.
Maybe?

JOSH

Josh then sits down next to Lizzy.

JOSH (CONTD)
I dont really know.
Lizzy turns and looks at Josh she kisses him stands up and
takes her dress off facing him, walks over and sits on his
lap. She wraps her arms around him.
LIZZY
I tell you what. Well try it with
my mouth and see if that works.
Josh looks into Lizzys eyes with a kiddish smile trying to
hide it.
Okay.

JOSH

Lizzy gets up off his lap and gets down on her knees in front
of him.
LIZZY
Good. I so good with my mouth it
will be hard for you to hold back.
She starts rubbing his thighs, takes his underwear off and
spreads his legs open. She starts to descend toward his
penis. For another try.
LIZZY (CONTD)
Oh dont blow it in my month.
Josh looks at her dead serious eyes.
JOSH
No problem.

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Lizzys eyes jump back to loving sex eyes as she starts to go
back down for another try.
She begins to give him head but after a moment or two stops.
Lizzy gets up frustrated and walks over towards the cage.
Josh has a guilty look on his face as he stops giving head.
JOSH (CONTD)
Im sorry. Im sorry.
Lizzy, by the cage looks at Josh confused.
LIZZY
I mean what the fuck is this your
first time or something.
Josh turns away from Lizzy and looks down.
JOSH
(laughs) no.
Lizzy walks away from the cage towards Josh.
LIZZY
Oh shit it is.
JOSH
What your crazy.
Josh looks like hes about to start crying.
LIZZY
Ive never taken someones
virginity before.
Lizzy says with pride.
LIZZY (CONTD)
Your just nervous.
She grabs his head and turn it to face her.
LIZZY (CONTD)
Listen Josh. I want your virginity
and nothing is going to stop me
from getting it. I dont care if it
takes all night. (beat) WERE GONNA
FUCK!
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MONTAGE:
They both start kissing and then slowly go down on the ground
immediately they shoot up scream disgusted jumping up and
down and wiggling around.
CUT TO:
JOSH AND LIZZY STANDING NEXT TO THE BED.
They stand next to the bed and Josh pushes her on he then
jumps on her and starts to take control. A second after they
start the bed begins to spin around. They both stop and get
out of the bed.
CUT TO:
SOMEONE KNOCKING ON THE DOOR.
There is knocking at the door lizzy in a robe walks over as
you can hear Josh in pain off screen.
LIZZY
Is it working.
JOSH
I dont think so it just really
hurts. Like a lot.
Damn.

LIZZY

Lizzy opens the door it the owner of the motel.

MOTEL OWNER
The amount of time you paid for is
up miss.
LIZZY
Oh okay how much more for another 3
hours.
In the back you can her Josh in pain.
MOTEL OWNER
Twenty five.
LIZZY
Okay well here you go.

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Lizzy grabs her purse, takes the money of and hands it to
him. As Josh screams the man tries to get a better look
inside.
Okay bye.
Um bye.

LIZZY (CONTD)
MOTEL OWNER

Lizzy closes the door on him before he can finish.

She turns and walks back to Josh
LIZZY
Lets get you out of that.
JOSH AND LIZZY IN THE CAGE.
Lizzy is holding on to the bars as Josh is humping her from
behind still trying to get a hard on.
LIZZY
Yeah faster.
Josh goes faster.
LIZZY (CONTD)
Yeah baby harder.
Josh goes harder.
Faster.

LIZZY (CONTD)

Josh goes faster.

Harder.

LIZZY (CONTD)

Josh goes harder.

LIZZY (CONTD)
HARDER AND FASTER!
Josh tries but looks like hes about to pass out. He then
Pushes super hard and pushes Lizzy forward which ends up
causing the cage to lift off the ground and fall over.
They stop, both stand straight and stare right in front of
them in shock.

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END OF MONTAGE:
CUT TO:
JOSH AND LIZZY SITTING ON THE BED.
Josh and Lizzy both have a look of disappointment. They
believe they have been defeated.
JOSH
Im really sorry.
LIZZY
Holy Moses, I cant believe it. No
matter how hard I try or how much I
beg you just cant get it up.
JOSH
Its fucked up
LIZZY
Damn right its fucked up.
Lizzy stands up and walks over to the closet, and turns to
face Josh.
LIZZY (CONTD)
I mean if you dont use it you
loose it. Just plain and simple.
(beat) Why cant you use it on me?
She looks down sad.
LIZZY (CONTD)
I mean I want you to you know.
JOSH
I know. (beat) You want my
virginity.
Josh looks to the side at the cage.
LIZZY
No. (beat) I mean thats not only
why.
Lizzy looks up at Josh.
LIZZY (CONTD)
I really do like you and I want you
to feel the same way about me. I
want to make you happy like how you
made me happy.

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Josh looks at Lizzy.
LIZZY (CONTD)
I want use to have that special
bond.
Lizzy looks back down at the ground embarrassed and blushing.
Lizzy.

JOSH

LIZZY
Wait Im not done.
Lizzy.
Josh I.
Lizzy.
I.
Lizzy.

JOSH
LIZZY
JOSH
LIZZY
JOSH

Josh gets cut off.

LIZZY
I LOVE YOU!
There is a silence for a moment the only sound that can be
heard is Lizzys breathing.
Lizzy.
Huh what?

JOSH
LIZZY

JOSH
I have a Bonner.
Josh looks at Lizzy with a big grin on his face. As Lizzy get
her fuck me hard eyes back.
FADE OUT.
The End.

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