Incorrect sentence

explanation

Correct sentence

Error

1. want to join me in computer club?

want to join me in the computer club?

- article (the)

2. Why you want to join this club?

Why do you want to join this club?

- SVA (do)

3. Why do you wanted to join this club?

Why do you want to join this club?

- tense

4. Why do you want to joined this club?

Why do you want to join this club?

- to infinitive

5. I also can enjoy

I can also enjoy

- word position

6. I can also enjoy in this club.

I can also enjoy myself in this club.

- hanging verb

Give me a few minutes to think about it.

- to infinitive

What are the advantages of the Computer Club?

- SVA (are)

9. It is also good for the market job.

It is also good for the job market.

- word position

10.I can learn some new knowledge in this

club?

Can I learn some new knowledge in this club?

- word position

11.Do you interested in the Computer Club?

Are you interested in the Computer Club?

- SVA (are)

Im very interested with the activities in the club.

- plural (-ies)

Im very interested in the Computer Club so I

want to join the club.

- repitition

14.I thing / I am thingking

I think / I am thinking

- spelling

15. can get many advantages. Therefore, in

the Computer Club

can get many advantages. For example, /

Beside that in the Computer Club

- linking word

16. we easy to get a lot of knowledge

we can easily get a lot of knowledge

17. we easy to get a lot of knowledge

it is easy to get a lot of knowledge

18.And then, if we choose the Culture Club

Moreover / Other than that, if we choose the

Culture Club

7. Give me a few minutes to thinking about

it.
8. What is the advantages of the Computer
Club?

12.Im very interested with the activity in the

club.
13.Im very interested in the Computer Club
so I want to join the Computer Club.

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- modal + adjective native tongue

translation
- pronoun (it) native tongue
translation
- linking word

19. we difficult to get a job

it is difficult to get a job

- pronoun (it) native tongue

translation

20.In the Culture Club the activities not

interesting.

In the Culture Club the activities are not

interesting.

- SVA (are)

Incorrect / Not so good

explanation
21. and can get a lot of knowledge

Correct / Better

Error

and you can get a lot of knowledge

- missing pronoun/subject before verb

The Culture Club has many advantages

- SVA (singular)

like you can learn dancing, meet people and it

is also enjoyable.

- word position

24.I am confuse in choosing between

I am confused in choosing between

- verb vs adjective

25. because there are many advantage.

because there are many advantages.

- plural (-s)

26. the club have many advantages

the club has many advantages

- SVA (have vs. has)

27.What club do you want to join?

Which club do you want to join?

- wh questions

28. people who wants to find

people who want to find

- SVA (plural)

29.Yes, if we surfing the Internet

Yes, if we are surfing the Internet

- SVA (are + ing)

30. but I want to dancing.

but I want to dance.

- to infinitive

31.Thats right, what you say.

Thats right, what you said.

- tense (past)

32. thats not a big problems.

thats not a big problem.

- a + singular noun

33. because it is many advantages.

because it has many advantages.

- SVA (is vs. has)

34. learn dancing because it sound

enjoyable.

learn dancing because it sounds enjoyable.

- SVA (it + singular)

35.What is the club you want to join?

What is the club that you want to join?

- missing word (that)

36.Why you want to join

Why do you want to join

- missing verb (do)

37.What benefits in learning

What are the benefits in learning

- SVA (plural), article (the)

22.The Culture Club have many advantages

23. like you can learn dancing, it is

enjoyable and you can meet people.

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38.I heard that you wanna join

I heard that you want to join

- slang word

39.What the benefits?

What are the benefits?

- SVA (plural)

40.(put all points given in one sentence)

(disperse the points to few paragraphs and

elaborate on each)

- elaboration of points

Incorrect / Not so good

Correct / Better

41. but joining the Culture Club I can

but by joining the Culture Club I can

- missing word (by)

42. when you surfing the Internet

when you surf the Internet

- tense (simple present)

43. meet people in Facebook and Twitter.

meet people on Facebook and Twitter.

- preposition (in vs. on)

44. get knowledge about computer.

get knowledge about computers / the

computer.

- plural (-s) / article (the)

45. when have leisure time

when we have leisure time

- missing pronoun (we + verb)

46. we can use it to amuse anybody

we can use it to amuse ourselves

- pronoun (inflictive)

47. can gain skills in the computer.

can gain skills on / from the computer.

- preposition

48. we can easy to get jobs

we can easily get jobs

- adverb , to infinitive

49. it is good for find jobs

it is good for finding jobs

- for+ verb (-ing)

50.Which club you like to join?

Which club would you like to join?

- missing modal (would)

51.Why you choose the Culture Club?

Why do you choose the Culture Club?

- missing verb (do)

52.I want learning dancing

I want to learn dancing

- to infinitive / to + verb (-ing)

53. the Culture Club is a enjoyable club.

the Culture Club is an enjoyable club.

- article (a vs. an)

54. but what the advantages of the club?

but what are the advantages of the club?

- SVA (are + plural)

55.In the computer we can get

From the computer we can get

- preposition (in vs. from)

56.Yes, it so much more enjoyable.

Yes, it is so much more enjoyable.

- SVA (it + is)

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Error explanation

57.Are you want to join me?

Do you want to join me?

- Verb use (are vs. do)

58.I want go to the Computer Club.

I want to go to the Computer Club.

- to infinitive

59. between this two clubs,

between these two clubs,

- determiner (plural)

60.Why you want to join

Why do you want to join

- missing verb (do)

61. the Computer Club is more better

the Computer Club is much better

- double comparative

62. for people who want to find for work.

for people who want look for / to find work

- word usage

63.Work vs job.

Work (v) = kerja | Job (n) = pekerjaan

- word meaning

64. because I like to dancing.

because I like to dance.

- to infinitive

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