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Learning To Write An Essay
Learning To Write An Essay
from:
Learning
to
write:
Error
analysis
applied
Carmen
Valero
Garcs,
Guzmn
Mancho
Bars,
Carmen
Flys
Junquera,
Esperanza
Cerd
Redondo
II
Writing
effective
texts
This
section
is
designed
to
give
you
some
basic
definitions,
strategies
and
techniques
in
order
to
help
you
write
more
effective
paragraphs
and
essays.
Writing
is
a
learned
behavior,
and
as
all
are,
culturally
mediated.
Therefore,
a
native
English
audience
will
have
several
expectations
about
written
texts
that
may
differ
significantly
from
the
expectations
of
a
Spanish
audience.
The
section
hopes
to
explain
concisely
the
textual
organization
and
patterns
of
development
that
are
predominant
in
English
academic
writing
so
that
you
can
analyze
the
student
texts
included
later
and
improve
them
accordingly.
Note
that
in
the
book
we
refer
to
"academic"
or
formal
writing,
which
is
clearly
different
from
journalistic,
business,
commercial
or
creative
writing.
Although
the
section
is
very
brief
and
undoubtedly
fails
to
cover
all
the
aspects
of
clear
and
effective
writing,
it
will
help
you
with
some
of
the
basic
notions
and
help
you
to
ask
the
appropriate
questions
about
other
texts
and
your
own
in
order
to
achieve
greater
clarity
and
effectiveness
in
your
own
writing.
A.
Writing
a
good
paragraph
A
paragraph
consists
of
a
series
of
sentences
which
develop
one
main
idea.
A
good
body
paragraph
should
be
unified,
complete,
ordered
and
coherent.
This
means
that
the
whole
paragraph
should
be
about
the
same
main
idea.
That
idea
needs
to
be
supported
with
examples
or
illustrations.
The
paragraph
should
now
in
a
logical
order
and
there
should
be
a
smooth
and
logical
transition
from
one
sentence
to
another.
In
order
to
write
a
good
paragraph,
here
are
some
practical
hints.
Firstly,
begin
your
paragraph
with
a
topic
sentence.
A
topic
sentence
should
be
a
statement
of
opinion
or
intent,
never
a
fact.
The
subject
should
be
narrow
enough
to
discuss
in
one
paragraph;
if
it
is
too
general,
there
will
be
no
focus
or
controlling
idea.
It
should
only
contain
one
or
two
controlling
ideas.
That
is,
besides
the
general
subject,
there
should
be
a
main
idea
and
perhaps
an
adjective
or
complement.
For
example:
"Alcala
de
Henares
is
a
beautiful
city."
The
subject
is
Alcala
de
Henares
and
the
controlling
idea
is
beautiful
city.
All
the
sentences
you
write
after
should
support
that
controlling
idea;
in
other
words,
all
of
them
should
illustrate
through
examples
or
descriptions
the
beauty
of
the
city.
No
other
subject,
such
as
location
or
population
should
be
included.
These
factors
are
irrelevant
to
the
controlling
idea
of
beauty.
Using
a
topic
sentence
at
the
beginning
helps
keep
you
focused
and
ensures
the
unity
of
the
paragraph.
After
you
write
each
sentence,
ask
yourself
if
it
supports
the
controlling
idea;
if
it
is
about
beauty,
in
this
case.
support
every
claim
(judgment,
evaluation
or
opinion)
that
you
express.
That
support,
in
the
form
of
paragraphs,
is
based
on
examples,
facts,
statistics,
descriptions,
case
studies,
and
so
forth.
The
objective
of
argumentative
writing
is
to
persuade
the
reader
to
take
your
position
or
your
evaluation
seriously
and
give
it
consideration.
Writing
an
essay
is
more
complex,
but
by
constructing
good
body
paragraphs,
using
sound
logic,
carefully
supporting
all
your
claims
and
opinions,
and
taking
the
audience
into
account,
you
can
achieve
clear
and
convincing
essays.
The
samples
and
questions
in
the
following
exercises
will
help
you
explore,
analyze
and
reflect
on
paragraph
and
essay
writing.
C.
Patterns
of
development
In
academic
written
English,
there
are
basically
seven
patterns
of
development:
narration,
exemplification,
cause
and
effect,
comparison
and
contrast,
description,
definition,
and
classification.
Although
most
essays
will
combine
a
number
of
these
patterns,
there
is
usually
one
that
is
predominant.
Your
thesis,
or
the
question
put
to
you
on
an
essay
examination,
will
probably
contain
a
head
word
which
implies
the
dominant
pattern
of
development.
For
example,
if
the
question
reads
"tell
the
story"
or
"narrate,"
then
the
dominant
pattern
will
be
narration.
The
main
characteristic
of
a
narration
is
that
it
describes
a
series
of
events
along
a
timeline.
Usually,
there
is
action
involved.
Narratives
usually
follow
chronological
order,
although
there
can
be
flashbacks
and
flash-forwards.
Of
course,
most
stories
and
novels
are
narrative
and
follow
a
timeline,
although,
for
different
aesthetic
purposes,
it
might
be
broken
or
altered.
In
academic
writing,
however,
it
is
best
to
adhere
to
the
standard
chronological
timeline.
Narratives
usually
have
many
clear
time
signals
to
indicate
the
sequence
of
events.
Time
signals
can
be
words
or
phrases
indicating
clock
or
calendar
time,
verb
tenses
and
adverbials
of
time.
Every
event
should
lead
to
the
next.
In
other
words,
keep
asking
yourself
(as
a
reader):
"What
happened
next?"
In
order
to
maintain
interest,
ask
yourself
"So
what?"
after
each
event.
That
will
provide
you
with
conflict
and
a
reason
for
the
events.
If
an
event
is
necessary
but
not
very
important,
describe
it
briefly,
without
too
much
detail.
I
f
it
is
important,
give
a
lot
of
specific
detail
so
the
reader
can
visualize
it.
That
will
increase
the
tension
and
highlight
the
importance
of
the
event.
Narratives
are
used
to
tell
stories,
but
as
you
have
seen,
you
might
want
to
begin
your
essay
with
an
anecdote
or
illustrate
some
point
with
personal
experience.
In
these
cases,
use
a
narrative
as
your
dominant
pattern
of
development.
If
your
head
word
reads
"give
examples"
or
"list,"
then
your
dominant
pattern
will
be
that
of
exemplification.
This
means
giving
a
number
of
examples
that
will
support
your
claim
or
argument.
The
examples
can
be
real
or
hypothetical,
but
if
they
are
the
latter,
they
should
be
believable.
The
examples
should
be
different
enough
to
illustrate
a
wide
range
of
cases
and
provide
ample
support,
For
instance,
in
the
paragraph
in
which
we
discussed
the
beauty
of
Alcala,
the
main
pattern
of
development
would
clearly
be
exemplification.
We
should
try
to
give
several
examples
of
why
the
city
is
beautiful
and
they
should
be
varied.
If
we
only
give
examples
of
historical
monuments,
the
reader
might
think
old
buildings
arc
the
only
interesting
thing.
Giving
examples
of
different
types
of
buildings,
parks
and
statues
or
plazas,
will
give
better
and
more
effective
support
to
the
controlling
idea
of
beauty.
If
your
head
word
or
thesis
uses
the
words
"why",
"reasons",
"because"
or
"explain,"
then
you
arc
probably
going
to
follow
the
pattern
of
cause
and
effect.
Firstly,
make
sure
to
study
what
is
the
cause
of
something
and
what
is
the
effect.
It
is
not
always
easy.
It
is
also
probably
too
much
to
address
both
cause
and
effect
in
only
one
paragraph.
Usually,
a
paragraph
will
discuss
one
or
the
other.
To
discuss
causes
or
effects
you
will
most
certainly
give
examples
and
possibly
narration,
as
in
describing
a
case
study
or
scenario;
however,
these
will
not
be
the
dominant
mode.
They
will
only
be
there
to
support
your
discussion.
In
either
case,
remember
to
give
several
possible
causes
or
several
effects.
To
give
one
sole
cause
to
a
complicated
problem
is
oversimplifying
and
constitutes
a
logical
fallacy.
In
paragraphs
of
cause
and
effect,
we
are
appealing
to
our
reader's
logic
and
intellectual
capacity,
not
to
their
emotions
or
aesthetic
beliefs.
One
of
the
most
typical
head
words
is
that
of
"compare"
or
"contrast."
f
you
arc
asked
to
compare,
that
means
you
will
be
looking
for
similarities.
If
the
question
is
that
of
contrast,
you
will
be
focusing
on
differences.
Regardless
of
which,
the
two
always
come
together,
although
with
a
different
emphasis.
If
there
are
no
differences,
then
there
is
no
reason
to
compare-it
would
be
a
clone.
If
there
arc
no
similarities,
there
is
no
point
in
contrasting.
There
are
two
basic
ways
to
structure
a
comparison:
sequenced
or
chunked.
A
sequenced
comparison,
that
is
point
for
point
or
grammatical
comparison,
compares
each
point
(part
of
the
body
or
characteristic)
in
both
subjects.
For
example,
if
we
arc
comparing
two
people,
we
would
begin
with
a
logical
order,
say
top-to-bottom,
and
compare
hair,
eyes,
nose,
mouth,
neck,
clothes,
and
so
forth.
A
sequenced
comparison
is
easy
to
follow
and
easy
to
write
especially
when
under
pressure
as
in
an
examination.
It
follows
a
logical
and
visual
order
and
you
can
keep
adding
points
as
you
visualize
or
remember
them.
However,
it
is
only
effective
if
the
two
things
being
compared
have
very
similar
structures.
A
chunked
comparison,
or
comparison
of
thought,
first
describes
one
subject
completely
and
then
the
other.
It
is
important
to
follow
the
exact
same
order
in
both
and
to
make
frequent
reference
to
the
first
when
describing
the
second,
or
the
reader
might
get
lost.
In
the
case
of
the
two
people,
this
implies
describing
one
and
then
the
other.
In
the
second
comparison,
you
would
have
to
make
comments
such
as
"Jane
has
curly
dark
hair
as
opposed
to
Mary's
straight
blond
hair."
This
type
of
comparison
requires
careful
planning
before
you
start
to
write
and
therefore
is
more
complicated,
especially
when
under
pressure.
Nevertheless,
it
is
more
effective
if
the
two
subjects
do
not
have
completely
similar
structures.
Imagine
that
you
are
comparing
two
families
and
one
is
a
single-parent
household
with
a
grandmother
and
three
children,
whereas
the
other
has
two
parents
but
only
one
child
and
no
other
relatives.
A
sequenced
comparison
would
not
work
well.
Remember
to
think
carefully
about
your
subject
before
choosing
the
type
of
comparison
and
then
be
consistent.
Do
not
switch
from
one
pattern
to
another.
Your
purpose
is
clarity
and
illustrating
the
comparison
to
the
reader.
Often
your
head
word
might
be
"describe."
Description
is
one
of
the
basic
patterns
of
development
and
it
appeals
clearly
to
the
readers'
sense~.
Descriptions
usually
have
a
lot
of
adjectives
and
go
into
details.
Our
objective
is
to
make
the
reader
not
only
visualize
the
object,
but
to
feel
it,
hear
it,
and
taste
and
smell
it,
too.
I
f
you
arc
writing
a
description,
it
is
useful
to
close
your
eyes
and
try
to
identify
it
using
all
of
your
senses.
We
tend
to
rely
too
much
on
our
eyesight,
and
appealing
to
the
other
senses
will
make
your
description
much
more
interesting,
memorable
and
effective.
Remember
to
follow
a
logical
order
and
to
choose
a
view
point
like
looking
through
the
lens
of
a
camera
such
as
from
distant
to
close,
strong
to
weak.
The
view
point
might
be
stationary,
as
from
the
door,
or
a
birds-eye-view
from
above,
or
it
could
be
in
motion,
as
if
we
were
in
a
car
looking
at
the
scenery.
Make
sure
your
reader
knows
your
view
point
and
can
follow
your
"eyes"
and
"cars."
Another
very
important
pattern
of
development
in
expository
writing
is
that
of
definition.
We
are
often
called
upon
to
define
some
concept.
Or,
in
argumentative
writing,
we
will
always
have
to
define
a
problem
or
issue.
How
we
define
our
subject
will
determine:
the
argumentative
strategy
we
will
use.
Most
argumentative
essays
have
a
paragraph
based
on
definition
to
identify
the
issue.
Clear
wording
is
essential
in
a
definition.
Although
definitions
use
examples,
as
almost
all
other
patterns
do,
the
main
point
is
not
the
example.
The
example
is
there
to
illustrate,
to
make
the
idea
clearer.
There
are
many
kinds
of
definitions.
One
of
the
most
obvious
is
the
dictionary,
which
can
be
a
useful
way
to
begin.
There
are
also
sentence
definitions,
which
are
used
in
this
introduction.
They
are
usually
preceded
by
phrases
such
as,
"that
is,"
or
"in
other
words."
They
are
brief
definitions
to
clarify
the
term,
in
case
the
reader
is
not
sure.
Longer
definitions
can
be
historical
ones
or
illustrations.
We
can
give
the
evolution
of
a
word
that
has
changed
meanings
or
give
a
number
of
examples
of
what
we
mean
by
a
certain
term.
One
very
useful
type
of
definition
for
academic
writing
is
a
stipulative,
or
working
definition.
When
we
are
discussing
words
with
ambiguous
meanings
or
many
connotations,
we
might
want
to
give
a
definition
of
how
we
arc
going
to
use
that
word
in
the
context
of
the
essay.
For
example,
if
our
issue
is
about
equality,
we
might
want
to
specify
that
we
understand
equality
to
mean
the
legal
rights
and
protection
given
10
all
persons
under
the
constitution
and
not
other
physical
or
social
constructions
of
the
word.
Giving
a
stipulative
definition
is
essential
when
discussing
any
controversial
issues,
since,
depending
on
our
definition,
the
issue
and
arguments
can
change.
And
finally,
our
head
word
might
be
"analyze,"
"what
kind"
or
"classify."
In
these
cases
we
will
be
called
upon
to
develop
a
classification.
A
classification
is
quite
difficult
to
make
-,
We
need
to
analyze
the
categories
of
something
or
break
it
down
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its
parts
and
components.
A
good
classification
should
make
sure
that
nil
possible
examples
or
parts
fit
into
one
of
the
categories
established.
Classifying
also
implies
revealing
our
worldview,
or
how
we
visualize
or
understand
the
world
around
us.
For
example,
if
you
are
asked
to
analyze
your
classmates
you
might
choose
the
categories
of
men
and
women,
or
good
students
and
bad
students,
or
tall
and
short,
rich
and
poor,
and
so
forth.
Whichever
you
choose,
it
reveals
how
you
see
your
classmates,
in
terms
of
sex,
grades,
physical
characteristics,
or
social
class.
I
f
you
have
only
set
up
two
categories,
such
as
in
the
example,
it
implies
that
you
view
things
as
dichotomies,
either/or.
In
other
words,
that
classmates
MUST
be
one
or
the
other,
not
something
in-between.
This
example
is
clearly
an
oversimplification,
but
it
does
illustrate
the
implications
of
any
classification.
Of
course,
this
example
also
illustrates
another
logical
fallacy,
which
you
should
avoid,
that
is
the
black/white
or
either/or
fallacy,
which
is
dichotomization.
Things
in
life
are
rarely
as
simple
as
one
of
two
extremes.
When
you
have
to
classify
or
analyze
something,
make
sure
to
take
your
time
and
think
of
all
the
possible
examples
to
see
if
they
fit
one
of
the
categories
your
have
chosen.
These
are
the
basic
seven
patterns
of
development
in
English
expository
writing.
An
essay
of
several
paragraphs
will
probably
use
several.
There
will
always
be
examples
and
probably
some
definitions,
even
if
only
a
sentence
definition.
Facts
and
statistics
are
types
of
examples.
Since
one
of
the
basic
techniques
of
support,
other
than
examples,
is
description,
this
pattern
is
also
very
frequent.
We
have
also
mentioned
that
narration
is
useful
for
discussing
case
studies,
scenarios
or
personal
experience
and
anecdotes.
Whether
you
use
cause
and
effect,
comparison
and
contrast,
or
classification
will
depend
on
your
subject
and
your
approach.
Your
native
English
readers
will
expect
one
or
more
of
these
developments.
lf
you
don't
use
them,
they
will
be
confused
and
then
your
essay
will
not
be
effective.
But
if
you
take
these
models
into
account,
as
well
as
the
other
guidelines
to
paragraph
and
essay
writing,
you
will
soon
find
that
writing
a
clear
and
effective
essay
is
not
that
difficult.
D.
Rewriting
the
text
Once
you
have
thought
about
your
topic
and
made
an
outline,
you
should
then
write
the
first
draft.
After
that,
you
should
ask
yourself
questions
about
it,
as
we
do
in
the
practical
texts
in
the
book.
Then,
it
is
time
to
rewrite
the
text
for
a
second
draft.
When
you
rewrite
a
text
there
are
two
approaches.
One
is
to
simply
correct
those
errors
in
the
original,
editing,
and
the
other
is
to
make
serious
changes
to
make
the
text
more
effective
and
interesting,
which
is
called
revising.
Usually,
we
revise
our
texts
first
for
content,
organization,
interest
and
effectiveness,
and
then
in
a
third
or
fourth
draft,
we
edit
for
accuracy
and
correctness.
How
much
revising
you
do
depends
on
many
factors:
your
objectives,
the
time
available,
and
the
interest
of
the
topic.
In
the
first
text
of
the
book,
we
have
provided
two
suggested
versions,
one
simply
edited
and
the
other
substantially
revised
and
edited
so
you
can
see
the
difference.
Always,
the
more
time
spent
pre-writing
(thinking
about
the
subject,
brainstorming,
outlining)
and
the
more
drafts
made,
revising
and
editing,
the
better
your
essay
will
be.
We
hope
these
examples
and
suggestions
of
rewritten
texts
will
illustrate
the
process
and
help
you
write
more
effective
texts
in
English.