Excellent work overall on this assignment!

Your descriptions were very thick and easy to

follow as a reader, and your definitions of the terms were spot on (even though you left out one
of the required terms); you certainly went above and beyond on this work. Also, I wanted to
mention that with your interview, I really appreciated how you provided context about the
interviewee.

I would like to see you add some pictures to help readers identify with what you are
describing. Consider using photos of significant characters or events, and you can either embed
them in the document or use the slideshow feature on the Wix site.

One piece that you left out of your assignment that was required was your definition for
figured world; I would recommend that you add this before your rules and conventions section.
The rules and conventions section directly relate to the figured world in that every figured world
have specific rules and conventions for appropriate behavior.

I love that you refer to "Criminal Minds" as a soap opera for you and your mom, but I want to
hear a little bit more here. What I mean is explain how this show is a soap opera for you and
your mom. This particular show doesn't fit the normal make up of what a daytime soap does, so
I am wondering why this word choice and what does this mean? Just a sentence or two
explaining this would be sufficient.