Peer Review

BY: Laurel Bunchanan

Introductory paragraphs:

"Technical communication is twins with all rainbows, such is its color" was the overall theme of the entire
paper. You did a great job of incorporating this quote and theme into the entire reflection. The only suggestion
here would be to possibly explain what the quote means earlier in the paper.

Supporting paragraphs:

Each paragraph that was written fell back in line with the original theme, which is very nice. You gave a
detailed "tour" of what you and your group accomplished and the challenges you faced. If I had to choose one
more paragraph to give more evidence, I would say paragraph 3. Try explaining how the quote was exactly "at
play yet again." Just add more detail here.

Paragraphs:

1- Introduction paragraph
2- First module
3- Second module
4- Second module downfalls
5- Recovery of second module downfall
6- Last module
7- Peer review and revision of the final module

8- Explanation of quote
9- Future plans

Everything here looks wonderful! I would keep the paragraphs like they are because it flows nicely. One
suggestion might be to combine paragraphs 4 and 5, and possibly move paragraph 8 near the beginning to give
a more detailed explanation of the quote.

Important things:
- State clearly the idea of the quote at the beginning
-Decide how you want the paragraphs to be in the end

GREAT JOB BTW

BY: Taja Boyd

Introductory Paragraph
Theme: Technical communication is twins with all rainbows, such is its color.

This is a great catchy theme and you immediately grabbed my attention with the first paragraph
describing why you chose the theme.
Supporting Paragraphs
Good job with staying on topic and sticking to the theme. The paragraphs following the introductory
paragraph flow very well with the topic.
Organization
1st paragraph: Introduction, attention grabber and describes theme

2nd paragraph: discussed the first module

3rd paragraph: second module
4th paragraph: usability test
5th paragraph: proposal; and feasibility
6th paragraph: Final module
7th paragraph: peer reviews
8th paragraph: reinforces the theme
9th paragraph: conclusion
10th paragraph: plans for the future
** You did an awesome job making sure to keep the theme highlighted throughout the paper and
mentioning what your topic and overall goal was for your writing.
Revision Overview
you did a good job with discussing ach assignment but be sure to focus a little more on actually
writing each assignment and how you felt during the process. For future plans you may want to add
what you would do differently as far as your writing assignments and how you would approach them
knowing what you know now.