The applicant's interest in the naval service originated from his father's involvement in the Navy. He wants to attend the Naval Academy to become an aerospace engineer and design military aircraft, as he has always loved planes and wants to pursue a career in naval aviation. While he had to take time off from school due to financial reasons, he has since taken on multiple jobs to overcome this obstacle and achieve his goal of continuing his education. The struggles he has faced have taught him the importance of education and how to overcome adversity, making him believe he can succeed at the Naval Academy despite its demands.
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This is the essay I wrote when applying for the Naval Academy.
The applicant's interest in the naval service originated from his father's involvement in the Navy. He wants to attend the Naval Academy to become an aerospace engineer and design military aircraft, as he has always loved planes and wants to pursue a career in naval aviation. While he had to take time off from school due to financial reasons, he has since taken on multiple jobs to overcome this obstacle and achieve his goal of continuing his education. The struggles he has faced have taught him the importance of education and how to overcome adversity, making him believe he can succeed at the Naval Academy despite its demands.
The applicant's interest in the naval service originated from his father's involvement in the Navy. He wants to attend the Naval Academy to become an aerospace engineer and design military aircraft, as he has always loved planes and wants to pursue a career in naval aviation. While he had to take time off from school due to financial reasons, he has since taken on multiple jobs to overcome this obstacle and achieve his goal of continuing his education. The struggles he has faced have taught him the importance of education and how to overcome adversity, making him believe he can succeed at the Naval Academy despite its demands.
My father and his involvement in the Navy was the origin of my
interest in the naval service. He never cared if I learned the strategies
employed by John Boyd; rather he wanted me to genuinely understand what it meant to serve our country proudly. He succeeded instilling in me the values he learned as a part of the Navy. After doing some research, I discovered the Naval Academy is the epitome of a perfect school for me. It has always been my dream to become an aerospace engineer and design military aircraft. Ever since I was a child playing with LEGOs I knew I wanted to build something greater than myself. Tying in my love for planes makes aerospace engineering ideal. Moreover, the opportunity to study aerospace engineering at the academy would provide a perfect gateway for me to pursue a career in naval aviation since I have always wanted to be a pilot. I have always wanted to learn to fly. I took one flying lesson and was absolutely hooked; the prospect of being a pilot in the Navy excites me all the more. It is my ability to lead and excel under pressure that makes being a pilot perfect for me. I understand that I could seek admission to a university with an NROTC program, but its the type of education that I will earn at the Naval Academy, a moral, mental and physical one, that makes me wish to attend. This past fall, I had to take time off from school due to financial reasons. It is uncertain whether I would be able to go back to school because of my familys ongoing struggle. I saw this as an obstacle that I needed to overcome in order to live my life how I wish. Life is sitting in front of me right now, and I can choose to be stagnant and watch it pass me by, or I can choose to take charge of my life head on and live out all my dreams. I would rather choose the second option and this is why I currently have two jobs and am looking for a third. While challenging, I have learned to manage my time to include work, my social life, and all the other things a twenty year old does. Its because I have the desire to attend school that I am willing to do anything to achieve my end goal. Even though this was a fairly new struggle, I see how this even contributed to who I am as a person. It has taught me about what life is, overcoming obstacles and not letting them impede progress. Not only that, but the obstacles I faced taught me the importance of getting an education. Attending the Naval Academy will not be an easy task because of the
demands physically, academically, mentally, and morally, but because I have
learned how to overcome struggle, to persevere, I know I will be able to prevail.