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Evaluations Number One
Evaluations Number One
In my film the main character shows a lot of his emotions through his body
language , when he is feeling stressed he represents how someone potentially
would be feeling on the inside, this leads to strong messages being made,
allowing the audience to get an inside connection with the main character. This
connection will allow the audience to relate with my film and almost put
themselves in Johns shoes. Johns character profile is built up through different
conventions, such as aspects of mise en scene, in the supermarket scene John is
seen to be out of place due to his costume and frantic behaviour. By dressing
John in his pyjamas in the super market scene, it strengths the message that we
were creating as it shows that he was in such a rush to cease the Nutella in to his
possession he didnt have time to get changed, this helps to add to the
atmosphere that the audience are injected in to as they will feel the frantic rush
John feels, whilst laughing at the amusement of going to the supermarket in his
pyjamas. The character profile is touched on again when John is unable to locate
the product he is so obsessed with, this allows John be presented as a fool or an
idiot allowing the audience to laugh at his conventional over-exaggerated idiocy.
I think one of the reasons that we created so many ideologies in to Johns
character profile was to really create that personal connection with the audience
and the main character; this allows them to want to know what is going to
happen to John due to this connection, this leads to the audiences attention
being grabbed and held on to; leading to them being engrossed within our media
product and therefore enjoying it all the way to the end.
Following one of the main conventions of a short film my film has an open tailed
ending. I didnt want to give the ending away due to leaving it to the audience to
make a decision. If they are left with a decision what happens from there in then
they can chose what they would like to see. Furthermore, the audience can
create a buzz within themselves talking about all their differing opinion on what
will happen to John next. They may also want to rewatch my film so they can
reanalyse what they think the ending is, creating higher revenue. Lastly, another
reason that I left my end open would be if the audience chose what they want
the ending to be/their own interpretation of what happens then they will have a
positive view on the ending as it is what they want it to be so there is no let
down if they didnt like the ending. This means that the audience will have a
positive view on the film ending and as this is the last thing that they will see
they will have a positive overview of the film, as this is what they will remember
the most. If the audience are coming out of the film with a positive end look on
the film then they will give positive reviews to friends and family members,
advertising my film in a positive way, drawing more audience in and therefore
making higher revenue.
The choice to do a satirical comedy really branched from the idea that I have a
personal belief that everyone in society is controlled by the big corporations to
some extent, this will mean that people could understand Johns situation and
empathise for him. If they are empathising for him then this really means that
they will feel saddened by the ending, strengthening the connection between the
audience and the main character, even though John is portrayed throughout the
film as a fool and everyone laughs at his idiocy, the audience will take the
message that corporations will go to the far extremes on the society to draw as
much money as they can out of all of their customers as they are purely selling
to benefit themselves and each member of society gets involved in their games
and tricks. This a major message that the audience will all be affected by
whether they are part of the big corporation or a member of society being
involved in these games and tricks. This leads to the film having a sense of
realism and therefore the audience can really inject themselves in to the fantasy
film world with real-life experiences being displayed in a funny, light-hearted,
exaggerated way. This realistic message is breaking the convention of a
stereotypical happy ending to a comedy to show the harsh reality of the raw
underlying message that we have tried to entwine within our product. This will
lead to the audience thinking deeply about the message and then discussing if
they agree with the message, once again starting a buzz within the audience to
talk about my film, leading to them recommending people to go to watch it so
they can give their viewpoint on the message being presented.
When looking in to different narrative theories, I really think that the uses and
gratification theory can be applied to my film perfectly. If audience members
have been caught out of money by large corporations before then they can
watch my film and see that they are not the only one, providing them with
comfort. Also if they are stressing and want a funny film then they can watch my
film for a short time of diversion and entertainment. Furthermore, they can gain
surveillance and information about how big corporations are trying to trick them
out; as the satirical comedy follows the conventions of the obvious meaning and
the discreet meaning, this means that they can really understand/learn
something about the power of the corporations in modern society. Furthermore,
my audience member quite possibly have been in the same situation as my main
character, leading to them being able to relate with my film, if they are
connecting with john and being put in his shoes this may get the audience really
thinking about what they would do in his situation. Furthermore, due the
convention of leaving the ending open as well as the discreet meaning of the
short film which is a convention of a satirical comedy, this will lead to a buzz of
conversation within the audience members and then lead more audience
members going to see the film so that they can join in with the social interaction
my film would have created within its audience.
A lot of short film comedies also have a running gag throughout the film, in our
product we have managed to follow this convention by having a running gag
surrounding the commodity of Nutella. In normal running gags the main
character is usually being ridiculed throughout the film, generally with making
mistakes that the audience can laugh at, I display this irony as throughout the
film the audience only grows more aware of the extent of Johns obsession with
Nutella. In the opening of the film, one of the first things that the audience are
met with is the product Nutella being photographed on lots of different location
around the world (on holiday with John). This is ironic as Nutella is just an object
whereas John is treating the object as a human, the film ends with the same
product leaving John homeless.
If I was going to do my product over again then I would make sure that I was
extra careful with continuity errors, even though I was conscious, we still had
some errors which meant that we couldnt use some clips and this meant that
the quality and depth of my film were damaged in certain parts. I would also try
to give some kind of light to the ending as this breaks the conventions of the
genre and may leave my audience in a saddened mood due to the fact that they
werent expecting this break in convention, however this does separate my film
out from the rest of the comedy films, giving it a unique selling point.