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What is especially interesting or

effective about this draft? After
reading it, what do you most
clearly remember about it?

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address its intended audience?
Any suggestions for improvement?

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Are there places in the draft that

need additional details or
examples?

Is the main idea clear, with a sense

of purpose?

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Is the format in this draft clear and

convincing? How might the topic
be made more effective?

What changes/additions/deletions
can or could they make to their
step 5 and 6?

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Comment on the organization of

the draft? How well unified is it?
Suggestions?

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What seems to be the central idea

or purpose of this essay?Any
suggestions for improvement?

Comment on the opening

paragraph. Suggestions?

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