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Hello Saqib,
This free CV evaluation is intended to give you an honest, straightforward assessment
with some suggestions to help in your job search. I personally review hundreds of CVs
each month so I'm able to provide insight into how you compare to other job seekers
competing for the same positions.
CV Writing
For someone in the early stages of their career, an objective statement at the top of their
CV makes good sense. An objective statement tells a prospective employer what position
you are seeking. It should also reflect the individual strengths that you can bring to the
company. An objective statement should be concise, while at the same time, not limiting
your opportunities.
From the way the CV is worded, you come across as a "doer," as opposed to an
"achiever." Too many of your job descriptions are task-based rather than results-based.
This means that they tell what you did rather than what you achieved. This is a common
mistake for non-professional CV writers. To be effective and create excitement, a
strong CV helps the hiring executive envisage you delivering similar achievements at his
or her company. Here are some examples of task-based sentences in your CV:
"Material reservation and job planning as per requirement"
"Power Gas Turbines annual maintenance in combined cycle power plant"
Employers want to know about your previous contributions and more specifically, how
you made a difference at your last position. More importantly, they want to know how
you are going to make a significant difference at their company.
When I read your CV, I did not find the kind of compelling language that would bring your
work to life. Instead, I saw many passive words and non-action verbs. Phrases like
performed and responsible for are overused, monotonous, and add little value to your
CV. Strong action verbs, used with compelling language are what's needed to outline
exemplary achievements. Now, lets put it all together. Heres a real life example taken
from a former clients CV. By changing the language, we helped to improve the perception
of the candidate.
Passive language / Doing: Negotiated contracts with vendors
Action language / Achieving: Slashed payroll/benefits administration costs 30% by
negotiating pricing and fees, while ensuring the continuation and enhancements of
services.
A change like this makes a dramatic improvement.
It may not seem obvious, but a regular review of every word and sentence in your CV is a
good idea. Hiring managers are looking for an excuse to eliminate you as a candidate. You
may not be able to see awkward phrases and grammatical errors if you've already spent a
lot of time with your own CV.
Digital Readiness
Your CV is 33kb in size. About 16% of CVs are smaller than yours. You have a little room
to work with, so if you want to spend some more time on formatting, you can do so and not
risk getting filtered out based on size.
RESUME FILE SIZE COMPARED TO OTHERS
MICHAEL
A
finance professional that needed a new CV to
apply to a job within just two days.
View Michael's Story
CARMEN
A
nurse coming back into the workforce after
taking a break from her career.
View Carmen's Story
Your
CV FILE
is saved in PDF format. 19% of CVs look like yours. While this may
make
SMALL
LARGE
FILE
viewing consistent for recruiters, some older Applicant Tracking Systems (ATS) ? have
problems reading them. If you have the ability, you might consider saving your document
in Microsoft Word format for some online submissions.
RESUME FILE TYPE COMPARED TO OTHERS
64%
2%
19%
8%
7%
through the very same software that Hiring Managers use to filter the real talent from the
hundreds, sometimes thousands, of candidates that apply for a single open position.
Continue below to view how Applicant Tracking Systems (ATS) present you...
Saqib Raza
Management Associate
Contact Info
Location
Experience
92-345-6541266
Most-Recent Education
Management Score
University Of Engineering
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msaqibraza93@gmail.com
Engineering
Power Engineering
17.70% ?
13.70% ?
Does this properly describe the career youre pursuing? If not, check out a real-life scenario where we helped someone change their story.
Top Skills:
associate
budgeting
combined cycle
conveyors
deployment
inventory
production planning
Is this the skillset that you want to convey to employers? If not, email me! I'm here to help you land more interviews so you can get more job offers.
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