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Double Entry Journal:how To
Double Entry Journal:how To
DoubleEntryJournal
Directions:Whenwritingadoubleentryjournal,youmustusetheformatandguidelines
detailedbelow.Yourevidenceandcommentarymustconsidertheworkasawhole.
Quotes/Observations
(Concrete)
Providequotesorconcrete
observationsaboutthe
piecethatyoufind
importantandciteinMLA
style(Authorpg#).
Commentary/Conclusions(Abstract)
Writeyourcommentaryinthissectionbyconsideringsome
ofthefollowingquestions:
WHATISTHEEFFECT?
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Whatdoesthisquotationmean?
Whyisthisimportant?
Whatismypersonalresponse?
Whatrhetoricaldeviceisused?
Whatisthesignificanceoftheauthorsstyle?How
doesitcontributetotheoverallpurpose?
6. Howdoestheauthor/speakerusethethreeappeals
(ethos,pathos,logos)foraspecificpurpose?
WHATISTHEARGUMENT?
1. Howdoesthispartrevealtheauthorsintent?
2. Doyouagreeordisagreewiththeissue?Whyor
Whynot?
3. Whatareotherexamplesofthisissue?
OTHERIDEAS
1. Raisequestionsaboutthebeliefsandvaluesimplied
inthetext
2. Discussthewords,ideas,oractionsoftheauthorora
character
3. Tellwhatitremindsyouoffromyourown
experiences
Example1:(extended
response)
Thehistrionicsofgrieftook
onacompetitivequality.Who
couldweeptheloudest?Who
wasthemostdistraught?The
mournerswereeggedonby
theTVnews,whichbroadcast
hoursandhoursofpeople
wailing,grownmenwithtears
rollingdowntheircheeks,
bangingtheirheadsontrees,
sailorsbangingtheirheads
againstthemastsoftheir
ships,pilotsweepinginthe
cockpit,andsoon.These
sceneswereinterspersedwith
footageoflightningand
pouringrain.Itlookedlike
Armageddon(Demick100).
Thesereflectionshighlightthemagnitudeofthedeathofa
NorthKoreanleaderonNorthKoreaanditspeople.If
staged,ornot,orasomewhereinbetween(itwillneverbe
known),Demicksdetaileddescriptionscapturethe
enormousimpactoftheKimDynastyanditsfateonNorth
Koreansocietythroughthedeepsorrowandrangeof
emotionsfeltbyitsconstituents.Demickeffectivelyconveys
thesituationinNorthKoreathroughherusageofrepeated
questions.Thistypeofsyntax,askingquestionsuchaswho
wasthemostdistraught,conveythecompetitivenatureof
griefinNorthKoreathewaythatthosewhoseemedtobe
themostnegativelyaffectedbyKimIlsungsdeath,which
theyshowedthroughtheloudestscreamsormostvisitstoa
monument,weredeemedthemostloyal.Theparallel
structureusedtodescribetheNorthKoreanindividuals
reactions,specificallyconnectingtotheirprofessionand
location,suchasthepilotsweepinginthecockpit,also
aidsindisplayingtheideathatnoNorthKoreanwasleftout
fromthemisery,andthatitaffectedall.
Example2:(abbreviated
response)
Toneinparagraph4:
smokersbreath,smear,
Takeitfromme,Me&my
kindetc.
Mairssblendofplaintalk,humor,andinsistencegives
readersthefactstheyneed,winsthemoverwithcommon
humanityandlightness,andconveysthegravityofthe
problem.