The children had been searching for answers ever since strange events began occurring. They heard a news report about other strange occurrences, realizing the mystery was bigger than they thought. After a flashback to when it first started, the children returned to continue their search with a new sense of urgency, determined to get to the bottom of what was happening.
The children had been searching for answers ever since strange events began occurring. They heard a news report about other strange occurrences, realizing the mystery was bigger than they thought. After a flashback to when it first started, the children returned to continue their search with a new sense of urgency, determined to get to the bottom of what was happening.
The children had been searching for answers ever since strange events began occurring. They heard a news report about other strange occurrences, realizing the mystery was bigger than they thought. After a flashback to when it first started, the children returned to continue their search with a new sense of urgency, determined to get to the bottom of what was happening.
We had been looking for answers ever since the day when Here is where the children (and the reader) find out what is happening but not the full explanation.
1 Middle of the story
(FLASHBACK) then flashback to how it all began
(START)
Start in the middle of the action
Describe the children searching
and then hearing a news report. Decide who is telling the story and when they tell it. For example, in the caption, one child is telling the story after the action has already finished; that is why the caption says then we saw instead of now the children see.
(RETURN)
We thought we were the only ones who had noticed
the strange events. Then we saw the news report.
then return to the action
Tell what the news reporter is saying.
The new information should lead the children to think something like: Now we knew how we could solve the mystery or Things were getting worse. It was time we did something about it.
(END) End of the story
now complete the story!
Use phrases like:
We returned to ____, but this time we searched ____ or We went back to the person who had warned us not to keep up our search. They sure had some explaining to do.
Years 3,5,7 literacy materials
www.qsa.qld.edu.au
Partnership and innovation
Strange Events Series
The State of Queensland (Queensland Studies Authority) 2007