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Write Angles 5-09
Write Angles 5-09
Newsletter of the
Berkeley Branch,
Write Angles 2009
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- David Baker
May Meeting:
Cover Photo Series:
Saturday, May 16, 2009.
Distinguished Writers
Social Hour: 9:30 a.m. - 10:30 a.m.
of California
Meeting and Program: 10:30 a.m. - Noon
Self-Portrait, Event Loft, Barnes & Noble Book Store
Ray Faraday Nelson Jack London Square, Oakland.
Late-breaking news about Risa Nye, a co-author of Writin on Empty. In addition to receiving honorable
mention in an essay contest sponsored by Skirt! Magazine, via WOW! Women on Writing, she also received from
WOW! a collection of books and a hand-written note. Nice acknowledgment for her essay, Making a Home From
Scratch.
On a humorous note, Tina Marie Stinnett wins 1st place in actress/author Mariel Hemingways Write My
Cartoon Caption contest, an online contest promoting the release of Hemingways new holistic cookbook, Mariels
Kitchen: Simple Ingredients for a Delicious and Satisfying Life.
Ken Frazer reports the great news that Sarah Sweeney, a winner in our Fifth-Grade Writing Contest last year,
has gone on to win first place in the Diablo Branchs Sixth-Grade Writing Contest. Definitely Sail On! events.
Using language with his customary originality, W. E. Reinka expounds in an unexpected and tantalizing way
on the word published in his essay Prepublished, which appeared in the March 2009 issue of Art Times (a literary
journal and resource for all the arts, arttimesjournal.com).
Another feather in the cap of Tatjana Greiner. She has been selected as one of the judges on this years
Armenian Allied Arts Association Literature Competition (armenianalliedarts.org).
Therese Pipe sent copies of two covers of books to Allene Symons for the CWC display at UCLAs Festival
of Books. One was of Lorna De Sosas book of poetry, Who Turned the Grass On; the other, of Fred Cody Award
Winner Dorothy Bryants oral history, of which Therese was managing editor.
With sadness, we announce the recent death of Lorna De Sosa, long-time CWC member. Lorna died on April
17 at the age of 95. A Memorial Mass was planned for April 24. Our heartfelt condolences to Lornas family.
Attention, Members: Every month our Member News column proves that getting published or winning a contest
depends on sending out your writing. Nothing magic about that. Extract that document from your desk drawer or
from the bowels of your computer. Give yourself a chance to get the attention of agents and editors looking for
something fresh, and keep us posted about your efforts. Consider the following grist to inspire CWC members: a
letter to the editor, a filler, a puzzle, fiction, nonfiction, jokes, a book review, greeting cards, screen play, making a
film, winning in a contest, appearing in an interview. Please send the memorable news to Anne Fox,
writefox@aol.com.
Tidbits
Web Sites for Writers
The Writers Network News
writers-free-reference.com
WordHustler.com
Clear Writing with Mr. Clarity
wsu.edu/~brians/errors/index.html
Ray Nelson joined the Berkeley Branch in the early 60s. He is a Life Member of the Branch and served as its
president for many years. Next month, Fiction Faults, Part Two, from Ray.
Why is it that Americans remember what an adjective is yet cant define other parts of speech? Not that
we need to, actually, unless were learning a foreign language. Still, its odd. Ask anyone what an adjective is, and
youll get an answer. Ask anyone what another part of speech is, and youre likely to get a nice long silence in
which to plot your next short story.
The other day a student of mine called to ask me what an adverb is. I said that its usually a word
ending in ly that describes a verbas in learns quickly or speaks slowly. He then asked whether all ad-
verbs end in ly, and I said, No. Consider well, as in writes well, or fast, as in think fast. In case he was
starting to get it, I added that not all descriptive words ending in ly are adverbs, either: weve got adjec-
tives, like curly, surly, and ugly, hanging around on corners, trying to look like slick. Like adverbs.
What about just, my student asked. Is that an adverb? I hadnt thought about just recently, so
I put it in front of a verb to see whether it workedjust say no, just improvise, just do it. Yes, I said, its
an adverb. Then I thought of just beautiful. An adverb, I had to tell him, can also describe an adjec-
tive: just perfect, just delicious, just enough.
My student, for some reason, hung up. Yet my mind continued to roll. Just splendidly, just dessertsthe
little four-letter word can be an adverb before another adverb or an adjective before a noun. Just isnt any one part
of speech. Its a chameleon! It can travel across a sentence, change colors at every stop, and affect a writers
meaning. Take a look at just doing, well, just that:
So whats the role that just plays? It all depends on where you find it. Look to the rightif a verb,
adjective, or adverb is coming up, just is an adverb. If a noun, pronoun, or noun substitute is coming up, just is an
adjective.
Now, what the heck is a noun substitute? Something less caloric than a noun? A person, place, or thing that
kids give no respect to?
Time to plot your next short story.
- Janis Bell
Janis Bell is the author of Clean, Well-lighted Sentences, A Guide to Avoiding the Most Common Errors in
Grammar and Punctuation. An English professor and writing consultant in San Francisco, shes been teaching
writing in schools and businesses for over three decades. You can contact her at janisbell.com.
- AL Levenson
Oakland, CA 94614
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