Camera Instructions

Soundtrack /
Dialogue

Story & Mise-En Scene

Camera pans from the

Silence

Elderly woman sat down on sofa

seconds

wall to the doorway, the

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by herself in her home, she has a

wall will be pitch black

cigarette in hand. Woman is all in

and once the camera is at

grey and black clothing. The room

the doorway the scene

is black (represents her and the

will lighten to reveal the

mental state that she is in)and

set.

low-key lighting is used. The

woman is shown to be sad and
alone. Her body language is very
closed and very timid.

Extreme long shot.

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

5-7

Medium shot of elderly

Sound of heavy

Woman is looking very upset/ her

seconds

woman still sat on the

breathing.

body language is hunched over

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sofa by herself.

slightly. Shows her taking a

cigarette out of a cigarette packet

and lighting it.

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Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

Close-up ofwomans face.

Slow heartbeat.

seconds

this shot should look

Shows her taking the first drag off

of the fag, still looking miserable

Slow piano

and lonely. Shows the room

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steady so we can

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concentrate more on her

slowly getting invaded with lots of

facial expressions.

smoke.

Duration

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

3-4

The same position of the

Slow piano

A little girl all in white suddenly

seconds

camera in the first camera

soundtrack

appears in front of her.

angle.
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Shows the elderly woman still sat

on the sofa/ smoking the

Extreme long shot.

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cigarette.

The woman seems to be very

distressed and shocked about the
arrival of a person in her home for
a brief second.

Shot/Visuals

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

Medium shot of young

Slow piano

The younger girl looks upset over

seconds

girl.

soundtrack

the older woman smoking. She

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looks at the elder.

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Duration

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene^

Over the shoulder shot of

Slow piano

The drawing she gave to the

seconds

girl with tears in her eyes,

soundtrack

elderly woman shows why she

shouldn't smoke in a drawing.

she hands her a picture

that she drew.
^

Shot/Visuals

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

Shows the exchange from

Slow piano

Shows the context of the drawing.

seconds

the younger girl and the

soundtrack

Duration

elder.

Extreme close-up on the

drawing.

Shot/Visuals

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

Low camera angle on the

Slow piano

Shows the elder looking at the

seconds

elderly woman.

soundtrack

picture that has been drawn.

Duration

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Duration

Story & Mise-En Scene

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack
4-7

Extreme close-up on the

Slow piano

Woman begins to cry from what

seconds

elderly's eye/ shows her

soundtrack

the drawing presented to her.

Camera Instructions

Soundtrack

Story & Mise-En Scene

Extreme long-shot of the

Fades to silence

The room is completely the same

seconds

woman's room.

crying with one solitary

tear rolling from her eye
to her cheek.

Shot/Visuals

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except the girl disappears from

the room in this shot. The elderly
woman has her head in her hands
and begin to cry.
Writing appears on the screen
with information to seek help for
your smoking addiction.