SPELLING, PUNCTUATION AND
GRAMMAR
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Remember to spell correctly the author's name, the names of al the
characters and the names of places.
'A.good idea isto list some of the Key spellings you know you sometmes
{Get wrong before the exam stats. Then use itto check as you go along.
Sometimes its easy to make small errors as you write but if you have your
key word lst nearby you can check against it
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Remember
1 Use fullstops and commas in sentences accurately to make clear points.
Don't write long, rambling sentences that don't make sense; equally,
void 2 lot of short repetitive ones. Write ina fluent way, using Inking
‘words and phrases, and use inverted commas for quotations:
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‘Boxer and Benjamin are good | Boxer and Benjamin are good
friends they seem to behave friends although they seem to
Uitferenty, Thisisas the story | develop different outlooks on life
progresses. This may Be due to | on the farm as the story
ther different atitudes towards | progresses. This may be due to
the pigs. their different attitudes towards
the pigs
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\When you are writing about the text, make sure you:
Use the present tense for discussing what the writer does, ¢.g. Orwell
presents Moses as deceitful and untrustworthy NOT Orwell presented
‘Moses as decetful and untrustworthy.
1 Use pronouns and references back to make your writing flow.
Por
While Mollie seems to be a more | While Mollie seems to be a more
‘pable reader than Boxer and | capable reader than Boxer and
Clover Mollie's use ofthis kil | Clover, her use ofthis skill 0
Simply to write her own name | simply write her own name makes
‘made the mare appear foolish.__| her appear foolish.
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Remember that
spelling,
Punctuation and
‘grammar are worth
Spproximately 5%
‘of your over
marks, which could
ean the diference
Between one grade
{and another
ractive your
spellings of key
iterate terms you
might use when
{iting about the
tent such astro
Sinile, metaphor,
imagery.
Character, theme,
Inerarchy, ete
Enliven your essay
by varying the way
your sentences.
begin For example,
The animals believe
Squealer
‘explanation, despite
their misgivings, can
so be written as:
Despite their
‘misgivings, the
Simats believe
Squeaters
enplanation.
anna ean 73P PART SIX_ PROGRESS BOOSTER
Excellent
‘opening se
{up importance
tf Boxer inthe
Scion of the
Somand
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derstanding
st contet in|
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Upevents
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Boxer represents all that is good in Orwells novdla Our first
introduction to him emphasises both his physical power (he |
has vast hairy hoofs and is as strong as any tuo ordinay
horses put together? but also that this enormous beast is
a gentie one: he ets his hoofs with great care’ to avoid
Fnurling any smaller creatures who might be hidden in the
‘tran, Boxer represents, n allegorical form, the purity and
Virtue ec eae ee :
expli capitalist system and corrupt pli
leaders such as Stalin. ® ]
Boxer's strength and physical power is repeatedly mentioned
pcag eared eben
it seems to acquire most superhuman rs once the
vevdution is achieved: he seems to be ea baste hori
‘than one’ The farm is utterly it on hime its entire
work’ seems to rest upon his mignty shoulders”. Not only dees
Fea Oa a ria aca
Eee
Cee ee ea aeten tellin
(and rebuilding) of the windmill,
Boxer is loyal in every sense. He s also one of the main
defenders of the farm from attack. He is a terrifying
petscerarnaup on sirhing out oth gc (Sees
he
Us ange
Srcture for
arity and
Semanstates|
‘00d use of
punctuation
‘an informed
response with
{ood use of
uotation
lear grasp of
tex, relating
pars tothe
‘wh
Understanding
\ofs: Orwel makes clear that Boxers terrifying power + Uedestana
is only ever a force for good: even when fighting for the purpose and
‘survival of the farm, Boxer sorrowfully' mourns the apparent | the effects of
cath of the stable-lad. Crwdl is also careful to tellus that lenaveae
this act of violence snot deliberate: 4 forgot that | was.
wearing iron shoes Who ul belive that | didnt do tis en
pres th a with the caleulated, sere we see
Napoleon dispense during the rest of the story but also shows
ort refusal oe ‘Boxer as eli a tory
saintly, Even in self-defence Boxer's ‘is benign. And, of
course, he turns cae rot tohave Kl the stable ad afterall.PROGRESS BOOSTER PART SIX q
{In fact, Boxer is placed so far beyond reproach that at tives
oe Sis naa atees ryt tide ecatialad Ccorcca
Even when he c with a damaged lung, Boxer's first interpretation,
‘thought is for the farm, tdling the other animals that he vas | which is
‘gathered enough stone for them to rebuild the windmil. ee
‘Gruel presents him as a paragon of virtue ashe is the trae | the text and
hero of the story - the blame-free working man whose 08 ot
‘trusting, honest nature is exploited by dous political | Stiherit
leaders hile Boxer represents the Stakhanovite workers ose {intention
‘effort and sacrifice was celebrated by the Soviet Union. the
bbock’s subtitle (A Fairy Story) should also be taken into
acount. Perkaps this is one reason why at times Boxer fels
litle one-dimensional - you dant gt complex characters in
fairy tales, aftr all.
Boxer has a single weakness Boxer’ ack of tnteligence means an
tat nvr ats bag is Dra ett ‘eae
nysical is of no use here: Boxer tries with all his wright”) structure
(Colle erst fthrebtabe teanrmerdasn® | | ren!
Cruel suggests that ths, coupled ith his trusting nature,
rakes him walnerable to explatation, ben Snouball is
Caparo the farm Borers vequdytrouel: bu caret
oles a coer or wv sugges, ven
‘ppt at ee ones are esha fo mca
is thoughts’ but cannot think of anything to say: He
eventually settles for trusting his lader rather than
pestiorng hier hen one cudopted the maxim
lapdeon i alas vight.
1f Arima Farm’ as a hero, then its Bove. His strength and
kindness (traditionally hercic virtues) are vital to the farm's
meee a ‘aut, It is no match for the greater.
eae more ‘the pigs’ in! or the ruthlessness:
Chauiuer tienes |
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Comment
This isa confident and well-argued response, which shows an excellent
Understanding of authoral intention and of the book as a whole. This
's coupled witha clear, well-supported personal interpretation of the
text. Expression is sophisticated and precise. An excellent response,POLITICAL TERMS
Bolsheviks
capitalist
cold War
callectvise
Jemocracy
‘democractic)
Sictator
indoctrination
sulak
Maraist
oroletariat
public
socialist)
pin doctor
ubversion
subversive)
cotalitarian
sar
yrant
tyranny)
ndemocratic
FURTHER STUDY AND ANSWERS PART SEVEN.
the radical wing of the Morsst Russian Socal Democratic Party. Founded by Lenin,
the Bolsheviks came to power inthe 1917 October Revolution and eventually
changed their name to the Communist Party of the Soviet Union
according to Karl Mary, a capitalists someone who has money and invests it ina
business. Ths person then makes a profit if the business des well
‘the period from 1949 to 1989, which was marked by a diplomatic and political,
standoff between the Soviet Union and Western powers,
2 term given to the Stalinist policy of forcing groups of kulaks to unite thelr farms
Into one collective farm (or Koiknoz n Russian). When the Kulaks destroyed thelr
‘crops and animals in protest, they were brutally punished
{2 government that is elected by the people or their representatives,
2 rule" whose decisions do not need anyone else's agreement. Often, in