The girl floundered when they came up behind her the girl has been abducted for a

month now. She weaned through a tiny place to hide she was determined to get out it was
devastating to hear that when they found her she was dead. Her family reluctantly goes to visit
her grave. Her parents still plead the police to find the person who killed their daughter and the
police can't do anything.

Ava,

You used the majority of your words correctly. Be sure to separate ideas with end punctuation
and a capital letter. You have several run-on sentences. Also, all of your verbs should match.
So if this already happened, all of your verbs should be in past tense (floundered, abducted,
found, went, etc.) Some of your verbs sound like this is happening right now.

This is a good start to completing this type of vocabulary check-up.

KT