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HFTWP Analysispaper Alexandraburgess
HFTWP Analysispaper Alexandraburgess
HFTWP Analysispaper Alexandraburgess
In the movie Hunt For The Wilder People their is a kid named Ricky
Baker. He is a fat kid on the run. In the movie Hunt For The Wilder People
Ricky Baker is a hero because he is loyal, brave, and outgoing.
He is loyal. When he stayed with Hec when the police were after
them. Thats loyal cause most people would be like im going this way.
Then the other person would be like im going a different way then. Another
way he is loyal is because when they got split in the movie Ricky Baker
came back to Hec. Most people would of stayed away or havent tried to
find the person we put in trouble.
Ricky Baker is brave. Shooting Hec was brave cuase most people
would be scared to shoot someone. Another reason is because he ran from
the police with Hec most people would of seen police and then would of
thought im done im staying here.
Ricky Baker is outgoing. Ricky Baker ran away most people would be
like what if they caught someone walking out of the house or what if
someone cant open the door with no nosies. Another reason is because
he was friendly to Hec the whole time most people would be mean about
everything and want it their way.
Rubric rating submitted on: 2/23/2017, 6:55:35 PM by
wagner.jill@iowacityschools.org
4 3 2 1
Introduction The essay begins The essay begins The essay begins The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong with an with an begins with only a
Your score: 2 introduction introduction introduction thesis statement
paragraph and paragraph that paragraph but is and not a fully
contains the contains the missing either the developed
following parts: required elements: attention-grabber introduction
attention-grabber, attention-grabber, or the bridge paragraph OR the
bridge, and thesis bridge, and thesis and/or the introduction
statement. The statement. attention-grabber paragraph is
thesis statement However, the is clich or the missing entirely.
appears as the attention-grabber transition does not
last sentence of may not be as actually lead into
the introduction. effective and/or the thesis
the transition may statement. The
not be as smooth. introduction
The thesis paragraph
statement appears contains a thesis
as the last statement that is
sentence of the located at the end
introduction. of the introduction
paragraph.
Supporting Details All supporting Supporting details One supporting Supporting details
(x2) details are logical are mostly logical detail may be may not be
Your score: 4 and connect to the but might exhibit missing and/or present or logical.
thesis . weak connectors may contain a
Supporting details to the thesis . direct quotation or Supporting details
are broad enough Supporting details specific evidence may be random or
to effectively summarize the that should appear off topic.
summarize the content of the in the body
content of the body paragraphs paragraph.
body paragraphs and do not contain Supporting details
and do not contain specific evidence. may not connect
specific evidence. to the thesis
statement or
effectively
summarize the
paragraph.
Analysis/ Body paragraphs Body paragraphs The writer has Body paragraphs
Commentary contain effective contain included plot lack analysis and
(x2) explanation of explanation of summary in some contain mostly plot
Your score: 2 evidence in your evidence in your places instead of summary.
own words. Each own words, and analysis/
piece of evidence each piece of explanations, OR, There is little
is explained in at evidence is the writer has not evidence of logic
least two explained in at explained each and/or reasoning.
sentences that least two piece of evidence
analyze how the sentences. with at least two
piece of evidence However, the sentences
proves the thesis analysis may be consistently. OR,
and supporting more obvious and the writers
details Analysis lack depth, analysis/
shows depth and therefore, not fully explanations may
goes beyond the proving the claim only state the
obvious. presented in the obvious.
thesis or topic
sentences.
Conclusion The essay ends The essay ends The essay ends The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong and with a conclusion with a conclusion ends with only a
Your score: 1 memorable paragraph that paragraph but is rephrased thesis
conclusion contains the missing either the statement and not
paragraph and required elements: link back to hook, a fully developed
contains the link back to hook, rephrased thesis conclusion
following parts: rephrasing of statement or the paragraph OR the
link back to thesis, thesis statement so-what statement conclusion
rephrasing of and key points, is weak paragraph is
thesis statement transition, and so- missing entirely.
and key points, what statement.
and so-what However, the so-
statement what statement
may not be as
effective or logical
Comments:
34/48
71%