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    M E M O RAN D U M

    TO: Riley Mosby


    Student Writer, Freshman Portfolio Writing

    THROUGH: Shayla Atkins, M.A.


    Lecturer, Department of English

    FROM: Moesha Gayle


    Student Reviewer, Department of English

    DATE: February 13, 2017

    SUBJECT: First Revision Essay Reviewers Comments

    I am writing this in regards to the first revision of your second essay. I can already tell that you
    are already a great writer. Both of the first two pieces that you chose were already really great. I
    changed the slightest wordings around because it sounded weird.
    Your thesis was great, and the examples given were supported by the body paragraphs.
    The organization was clear and to the point. What was the prompt for this essay though? And
    why no works cited?

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