LO1 FEEDBACK

Nicola Hutchings LO1 Feedback. 5/12/16

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
LO1 Part may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
A. improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning

outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
made.
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
Advertising Types & Styles
Good work here. You would benefit from more detail on the persuasive technique
section. Explain in the descriptions how the adverts apply the technique.
LO1 Part B. What is advertising?
Some good work here. Ensure that you quote / footnote any research that you
find. There is a lack of an evidence trail. The job roles section requires this. Add
more depth to this section.
Lo1 Part C. Regulation
Expand on the Ofcom section, this is short. Try to add in more detail on how they
are funded and the communications act.
LO1 part D. Analysis.
A good TV advert analysis here Nicola. However, the magazine advert analysis
has not uploaded correctly. Please check your blog once uploaded and if it
doesnt work ask for my help or consult the video files on Moodle for assistance.
Because the magazine analysis cannot be marked, this means until you re-
submit, the highest grade you can obtain is a pass. Please re-submit this work.

The resubmission deadline is: January 13th 2017