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PETWritingPart3:AShortStory

Its important that your story is


INTERESTINGforthereader,soyouneedtouse
DESCRIPTIVE LANGUAGE .
We also want to create a sense of
MYSTERY,
INTRIGUEorEXCITEMENT.

ImaginethatyourtaskistowriteastorywiththetitleAnOldFriend.

Comparethefollowingsentences:
Billywasexcitedforhisfriendtovisit.

Waitingformorethanthree long
weeks,Billywas
exploding
withexcitement
becausehisbestfriendinthe wholeentire
worldwascomingtovisithim.

Noticehowwecanusethe gerund(ing)
tocreatetheatmosphere.

WhataboutastorythatbeginswithAsRachelopenedtheletter...
AsRachelopenedtheletter,shewasverynervousbecauseshedidntknow
whatitsaid.

AsRachelopenedtheletter,shecouldfeelherbody
nervouslyshaking
and
was
aswhiteasaghostbecausesheknewthatitwastheanswertothe
most
importantquestionshehadeverasked.

So,howdoyouplanashortstory?


Itshouldincludeaclearintroduction
Itshouldgoin
chronological order
Thereshouldbesometypeof conflict
or
problem
Theconflictorproblemshouldbe solvedtohaveaclear
endtothestory

Youcanincludedialogue,butmustdoitcorrectly!

GOOD: Whatdidthelettersay?,Rachelsmomasked.
BAD:
Dansaidhedidntwanttostudyanymore.
FIXED:Idontwanttostudyanymore,screamedDan.

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