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PET Writing Part 3: A Short Story
PET Writing Part 3: A Short Story
ImaginethatyourtaskistowriteastorywiththetitleAnOldFriend.
Comparethefollowingsentences:
Billywasexcitedforhisfriendtovisit.
Waitingformorethanthree long
weeks,Billywas
exploding
withexcitement
becausehisbestfriendinthe wholeentire
worldwascomingtovisithim.
Noticehowwecanusethe gerund(ing)
tocreatetheatmosphere.
WhataboutastorythatbeginswithAsRachelopenedtheletter...
AsRachelopenedtheletter,shewasverynervousbecauseshedidntknow
whatitsaid.
AsRachelopenedtheletter,shecouldfeelherbody
nervouslyshaking
and
was
aswhiteasaghostbecausesheknewthatitwastheanswertothe
most
importantquestionshehadeverasked.
So,howdoyouplanashortstory?
Itshouldincludeaclearintroduction
Itshouldgoin
chronological order
Thereshouldbesometypeof conflict
or
problem
Theconflictorproblemshouldbe solvedtohaveaclear
endtothestory
Youcanincludedialogue,butmustdoitcorrectly!
GOOD: Whatdidthelettersay?,Rachelsmomasked.
BAD:
Dansaidhedidntwanttostudyanymore.
FIXED:Idontwanttostudyanymore,screamedDan.