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Purpose: To educate readers on the issues in the Chesapeake as well as suggest solutions and
how to improve
Essential Question: What is the cause of the decline in stocks in the Chesapeake Bay, and
how can the bay be restored.
Thesis: The only way to save the suffering Chesapeake Bay, crippled by overfishing and
habitat loss, is to encourage conservation agreements and advocacy within the governments
and communities that make up the watershed
Intro:
o Talk about significant and gradual decline
o Historically, the Chesapeake Bay has been the most productive estuary in America.
Author H. L. Mencken called it an immense protein factory.1 And as recently as the
early 1990s, the Bays crabbing industry seemed healthy. After the decimation of
oysters, shad, and sturgeon, blue crabs are the Bays last remaining major fishery,
except for small schooling fish. (badwater article)
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Topic 1: The Decline in Fish Stock (The problem)
o Topic Sentence: Fish stocks have been declining over time, but record lows have been
reached in the 20th century.
o Stocks have been declining. The major losses occurred in the 1970s but there still
are cycles of record lows.
o Chesapeake Bay Foundation: fisheries Article (Chesapeake Bay Foundation,
2017).
Many of the bays fisheries have been reduced in diversity and productivity.
Conservation as been compromised to accommodate allocation practices
Shad have been reduced due to overfishing and damns blocking their travel
patterns
Menhaden are caught and ground down for fish oil
Oysters have suffered reduction in reefs and habitats
Striper have been devastated since the 70s
In 2007 waterman faced the lowest recorded crab harvest since records began
in 1945
Maryland and Virginia have suffered over $640 million in losses over the last
decade due to their decline.
In 1948 there were only 60,000 pots in the water, in the 1990s there were
over 665,000 pots in the water
Although their range is from main to Florida, the majority of the bass spend
the majority of their adult life in coastal estuaries as well as the ocean. This
is why the Chesapeake bay is vital
From 2005 to 2014, total coastal recreational harvest has ranged from a high
of 31 million pounds in 2006 to a low of 19.2 million pounds in 2012, with an
average of 26.2 million pounds. Landings from New York (29%),
Massachusetts (19%), New Jersey (18%), and Maryland (12%) have
comprised approximately 78% of annual recreational landings since 2005.
Recreational harvest in 2014 were estimated at 24.1 million pounds.
o Menhaden form a critical link between the lower and upper levels of the Chesapeake
Bay food web, because they are a key forage species for fish such as striped bass,
weakfish, and bluefish and are filter feeders
o Menhaden generally is considered unfit for human food consumption due to its small
size and high oil content, but the modern purse seine reduction fishery grinds
menhaden into fish meal and oil for use as an ingredient in pet foods, livestock and
aquaculture feeds, and various industrial products. East Coast landings of menhaden
have ranged from 300,000 to 400,000 metric tons annually since the mid-1970s.
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Topic 2: The various causes (Overfishing and habitat decline)
o Topic Sentence: Although there are various reasons for the Bays Declined health,
overfishing and habitat decline have the largest impact on decreased populations.
o Research
o Badwater Article (Chesapeake Bay Foundation 2008)
o More than half of the bays eel grass has dissapeared since the 1970s
o Over buildup of nitrogen and phosphorus kills the grass they need for
protection
Overfishing
Fisherman catch more than 62% of the bays population of crab each
year and anything over 46% is not sustainable
Their habitat is in decline killing worms, oysters, and other bottom dwelling
invertebrates they crabs prey on
o Over 164,000 acres of oyster habitat have ben lost in the past 25 years just in
MD
o Without food crabs can even resort to cannibalism
o There is a prevalence of oxygen depleted dead zones during the summer
CB Cleanup (Motley 1988)
Excess nutrients like phosphorus and nitrogen caused surface algae so bad it blocked
sunlight and killed bottom grasses.
One of the first and most alarming signs of the Chesapeake's illness came in the
1970s, when scientists and others noticed that "submerged aquatic vegetation" was
disappearing.
The more [Nitrogen] they get, the faster they tend to growa phenomenon known as the
CO2 fertilization effect. (Kristen 2010).
Brendan Wilbur
Reduced eroded soil by 15.1 million tons a year (enough to fill 150,000
railcars)
o The conservation efforts in total across the nation add more than $640 billion to the
economy
o There are over 84,000 farms in ranches in the Chesapeake Bay Watershed
o Under the Lacey Act, the U.S department of justice pushes to prosecute more fishing
offenses as environmental crimes.
Brendan Wilbur
o One recent and extreme example was the prosecution of Michael D. Hayden of
Tilghman Island, Md. He was part of a four person striped bass poaching scheme that
illegally harvested over 185,925 pounds of striped bass between 2007 and 2011.
o Hayden must pay a $40,000 fine to the state of maryland as well as a $498,000 fee for
restitution to the federal govt. On top of this, he must serve an 18 year sentence in
prison.
o Although his punishment was severe, actions such as this are essential in order to
crack down on poaching. Typically, poachers ignore local and federal laws, as well as
conservation efforts in order to quickly generate a profit. This article is a good option
for my possible solutions section of my paper.
o In 2009, Bay Program partners gathered input from citizens, stakeholders, academic
institutions, local governments to draft a goal oriented document that would address
environmental concerns.
o Sustainable Fisheries Goal: Protect, restore and enhance finfish, shellfish and other
living resources, their habitats and ecological relationships to sustain all fisheries and
provide for a balanced ecosystem in the watershed and Bay.
o Vital Habitats Goal: Restore, enhance and protect a network of land and water
habitats to support fish and wildlife and to afford other public benefits, including
water quality, recreational uses and scenic value across the watershed.
o Old system is where officials determined how many fish could be caught each year
TDML Sheet
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Brendan Wilbur
Conclusion
o Restate on how the bay is significant
o How it is a national treasure
o Largest bay in U.S and provides many significant environmental and ecological
benefits
o The bay can be restored
o End with a hopeful thought on the bays restored health and how it can be brought
back.