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Analysis of Student Work
Analysis of Student Work
Analysis of Student Work
Chin Wu
Professor Lois
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First Lesson
Student Background
Lara is a six year old Latino female. Currently Lara is attending the first grade at Peterson
Elementary School in Clark County Nevada. Her primary language at home is Spanish. Lara
didnt start learning English until she entered Kindergarten last year. Lara reported that her
parents seldom read with her at home. She likes reading and enjoys reading by herself. Lara is
shy and doesn't like to read out loud in front of her friends. When her partners are reading, she
states she listens to them carefully. Her teacher has hard time checking her reading
comprehension because she does not like to speak. When Lara talks about the books she reads,
she is usually soft spoken and whispers. In the first week of school, Lara had an assessment for
counting and writing numbers. She was able to count and write numbers 1-120.
1.OA.C.6 Add and subtract within 20, demonstrating fluency for addition and subtraction within
10. Using strategies such as counting on, decomposing a number leading to a ten; using the
relationship between addition and subtraction; and creating equivalent but easier or know sums.
When the teacher was reviewing the skill Make Ten with ten frames, Lara took longer time
than other students but was still be able to find two numbers to make ten by herself. When the
teacher demonstrated how to add bigger numbers with then double ten frames, Lara was able to
place two numbers counters on two separated ten frames. However, she repeatedly forgot to
move some counters from the second number and failed to find the correct answers.
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Initial Strategy
Name the Steps: Break down complex tasks into steps that form a path for student mastery.
1. Students will cut the addition questions from Interactive Math Notebook
3. Teacher will ask one students to solve the second addition question using spider double ten
1. Show Me: Flip the classroom dynamic by having the teacher glean data from a passive group
2. Break It Down: When a student makes an error, provide just enough help to allow her to
The teacher re-teaches the lesson using the strategy Stretch It. The teacher starts with smaller
numbers.
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What is 9 + 1? Ask students to put 9 counters on the first ten frame and put 1 on the second ten
frame. Remind student that they need to move the counters from the second ten frame to the first
show answers.
Teacher challenges students to Stretch It for adding bigger numbers and ask them to show how
The teacher used strategy Stretch It to re-teach Lara using small group instruction. The teacher
asked Lara to add smaller numbers (for examples, 2 + 3, 4 + 5, 3 + 7.) so she could be familiar
with the ten frame. The teacher asked Lara to show how she got the answers by using the ten
frame.
The teacher asked Lara to add bigger numbers by using double ten frames. Lara placed two
numbers in two separated ten frames. She sometimes forgot to move counters form the second
ten frame to the first ten frame. The teacher gave Lara more numbers to practice for two more
days during small group instruction. The teacher assessed Lara again after re-teaching for four
days.
The teacher asked Lara use double ten frames to find the sums for two addition.
Second Lesson
Student Background
Lara, a six year old Latino female is the subject for this assessment. Currently, Lara is attending
the first grade at Peterson Elementary School in Clark County Nevada. Her primary language at
home is Spanish; Lara didnt start learning English until she entered Kindergarten last year. Lara
reported that her parents seldom read with her at home. She likes reading and enjoys reading by
herself. Lara is shy and doesn't like to read out loud in front of her friends. When her partners
are reading, she states she listens to them carefully. Her teacher has hard time checking her
reading comprehension because she does not like to speak. When Lara talks about the books she
Over the last six weeks Lara's teacher has evaluated Lara through a series of assessments to
determine her English language proficiency and literacy level. The teacher began by using the
comprehensive reading inventory to determine Laras reading abilities (McKenna & Kear 2009).
The comprehensive assessment aided the teacher in understanding Laras reading interests so that
When the teacher wrote the words on the whiteboard and asked students to determine if they are
nouns, Lara made several mistakes. She was confused by the concept of nouns. During the
Super Star game, Lara didn't correct some names that didn't have the first letters capitalized.
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Initial Strategy
Circulate: Move strategically around the room during all parts of the lesson.
1. Teacher will demonstrate the Super Star activity and ask some students
2. Students will use the KAGAN structure Stand up. Hands up. Pair up. to
3. The teacher will show some students names under the Elmo presentation
system. The teacher will use a blue marker to trace the first letter if it is
capitalized. The teacher will use a red marker to re-write the first letter is it is
not capitalized.
4. The teacher will ask some students to check if the first letters are capitalized.
During Guided/ Independent/ Group Practice, the teacher circulated around the room and made
sure students were on task. The teacher also helped students who weren't able to correct the
errors.
1. Right Is Right: When you respond to answers in class, hold out for answers that are all-the-
3. Begin With The End: Progress from unit planning to lesson planning. Define the objective,
decide how you'll asses it, and then choose appropriate lesson activities.
Begin With The End: Progress from unit planning to lesson planning. Define the objective,
decide how you'll asses it, and then choose appropriate lesson activities.
The teacher re-teaches the lesson with the strategy Begin With The End. The teacher shows
students some word cards with names and dates under the Elmo presentation system and re-
addressed the objective for this lesson. The teacher gave students some copies of the word cards
and asked students to trace the capitalized letters in the proper nouns.
The teacher re-assessed students for capitalizing names and dates. Most of the students were able
The teacher used the strategy Begin With The End to re-teach Lara in a small group
instruction. The teacher showed Lara some word cards with names and dates and re-addressed
the objective for this lesson. The teacher gave Lara some copies of the word cards and asked her
The teacher re-assessed Lara for capitalizing names and dates. Lara still made several errors.
The teacher asked Lara to write the alphabet and checked if she was able to distinguish upper
case and lower case letters. Lara wrote the entire alphabet correctly. The teacher reminded her to
The teacher showed Lara more word cards of names and dates and re-assessed her after two
days.
The teacher showed Lara some word cards and asked her to determine if they were nouns.
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The teacher showed Lara some sentences. Lara was able to high light all nouns in the sentences
and correct the popper nouns that didn't have capital letter at the beginning.
My birthday is on tuesday.
Third Lesson
Student Background
Lara is a six year old Latino female. Currently Lara is attending the first grade at Peterson
Elementary School in Clark County Nevada. Her primary language at home is Spanish. Lara
didnt start learning English until she entered Kindergarten last year. Lara reported that her
parents seldom read with her at home. She likes reading and enjoys reading by herself. Lara is
shy and doesn't like to read out loud in front of her friends. When her partners are reading, she
states she listens to them carefully. Her teacher has hard time checking her reading
comprehension because she does not like to speak. When Lara talks about the books she reads,
she is usually soft spoken and whispers. In the first week of school, Lara had an assessment for
counting and writing numbers. She was able to count and write numbers 1-120.
1.OA.8 Determine the unknown whole number is an addition or subtraction equation relating
During the guided practice, Lara couldn't decide whether she should use addition or subtraction
Initial Strategy
Board = Paper: Model and shape how students should take notes in order to capture
During Concept and Skill Development, the teacher used the strategy Board = Paper to
1. Teacher will use Common Core Math Interactive Notebook to introduce the
2. Students will complete the Statement and Vocabulary Flap book and glue
3. Teacher will show several math sentences and let students decide if they are complete
equations. Students use thumbs up and thumbs down to show their thoughts.
1. Without Apology: Embrace rather than apologize for rigorous content, academic
2. Wait Time: Allow students time to think before answering. If they aren't productive with that
3. No OPT Out: Turn I don't know into success by ensuring that students who won't try or
Wait Time: Allow students time to think before answering. If they aren't productive with that time,
The teacher re-teach the lesson with the strategy Wait Time. The teacher asked students to find
5+ =7
and reminded students not to shout out the first answer they had. The teacher gave students more
thinking time (5-8 seconds). More students gave correct answer to the teacher. The teacher
redirected some students with different methods. Then, the teacher gave students more thinking
The teacher used the strategy Wait Time to teach Lara in a small group instruction. When the
teacher asked Lara to find the missing number in an equation, Lara first said, I don't know. The
teacher told Lara not to answer so quickly. The teacher gave Lara some cubes and more thinking
time. Lara started to think more and gave a correct answer. The teacher gave Lara more
equations to practice and give her more time (30 seconds) to operate cubes.
The teacher asked Lara to find missing numbers in two equations. Lara was able to use correct
8+ = 12 =4
13 - =7 =6
Lara used the strategies count on and count back to find the missing numbers correctly.
Describe how you will apply the AWS process to your future teaching in K-6 classrooms.
Future applications for the AWS in my teaching would include utilizing both summative and
formative assessments as a basis for planning and designing lessons. Differentiating lesson
planning in response to formative assessments while providing both corrective and enrichment
activities for students who require additional support. Providing corrective instruction, designed
to help students and presenting concepts in engaging ways. The expanded implementation of
reading and writing workshops as well setting high academic expectations are key to a successful
classroom. The importance of systems and routines in the early childhood environment as well
making your room a place where students work hard, model strong character, are polite and
Performing the four tasks for checking understanding as well as gathering data on student
understanding and mastery is one of the more effective teaching principals for analysis of student
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work. The analysis of student work will allow me to customize and differentiate lessons to
support my students in more accurate and effective ways. Utilizing both small groups and larger
groups in ways that will increase comprehension and encourage learning that might not have
been achieved using other methods. The use of small groups with peer to peer interaction can be
Achieving Common Core standards is the ongoing goal that both myself and my students strive
assessments that they will achieve these goals. It is the ultimate goal that my students will
achieve, through the use of the techniques learned, that they will graduate and go to college.
What is your philosophy of teach, check, re-teach, recheck? Why is this important to student
achievement?
My philosophy of teach, check, re-teach and recheck are key to student learning, not just
teaching. Reteaching is most effective when teachers have made an assessment of students
academic needs. Educators are responsible to create different strategies to assist those students to
differentiate material for students who need. The initial pretest done either in paper or on
computer will allow educators to analyze the results. This initial assessment will make teachers
to become aware of the academic strengths and weaknesses of their student. Identification of
problem areas and addressing specific needs as they arise will set the support level upon which
academic improvement can begin. Modifying and changing the unit of teaching to better help the
when teachers reteach what the students do not know or cannot do yet. The use of formative
assessments and analysis of those assessments is crucial to differentiating material to best suit
student needs. Educators should focus on reteaching the parts of the lesson that students have not
yet mastered. Regular follow ups on student progress and continued formative assessments by
teachers are necessary to achieve prescribed standards. The teach, check, re-teach and re-check
are a cycle that can be repeated and used as a standard teaching tool that can be utilized for
greater academic achievement. Used in conjunction with both formative and summative
assessment as well as effective differentiation to meet student needs make the cycle most
effective.
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References
Kagan, Spencer & Kagan, Miguel. Kagan Cooperative Learning. San Clemente, CA: Kagan