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Poets of the spoken word share craft

techniques that work for all genres.


By Hillary Casavant

T
he energy is volatile. Tension pulses through the theater, sharp and
electric. Head bent, breathing deeply, Las Vegas poet Vogue Robinson
stands before the microphone. She glances once at her hand, where
she has written the names of five women, one for each finger. She
runs the poem through her mind a final time before, with a long inhale, she
raises her head and speaks.
At a slam poetry event, writers such as Robinson have only minutes to pour
out their souls onstage. They are the firsthand witnesses to their communities,
exposing the raw, unspoken truths of culture and personal life. But they have
to combine those insights with time limits and performance quality.
The poem is me finding a place to contain my energy, Robinson says.
Wherever youre from, its about learning how to channel whatever happens
to you into something thats positive, thats beautiful.
Slam poetry includes a spectrum of genres, evoking elements of storytell-
ing, personal memoir, journalism, performance and music. The poets infuse
their work with wordplay, marrying syllables and sentences like the notes of an
opera. The musicality echoes the precise movement and gestures that the
poets incorporate into their performances.
The phenomenon has gained steady momentum since the 1980s, when Chi-
cago poet Marc Kelly Smith founded the movement. He envisioned an art form
that would unite writers of all races, backgrounds, cultures and ideas through
the common love of spoken word. Almost 30 years later, slam is a global move-
ment. From Cleveland, Ohio, to Heidelberg, Germany, slam
poets are dismantling conventional approaches to
how, where and why a poem should be heard. And
they offer a model of both discipline and adapt-
ability from which all writers can learn.
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going to remember who won bouts, he Born Slam for the first time this year, Rob-
Applaud the poet
For the 70 teams of poets who competed
says. Youre not going to remember
who had the best scores. Youre going to
inson applies this perspective in her own
work. The poet finds inspiration from her
in the National Poetry Slam last August in remember the poems that got a hold of experiences and conversations, then
Boston, the thrill of performance is funda- you, and youre going to remember writes to discover solutions. After her
mental. Rudy Rudacious Cabrera of Liz- those things that changed your life. friend became pregnant while pursuing a
ard Lounge Poetry Jam in Boston says that masters degree, Robinson explored the
the adrenaline helps fuel his work. definition of motherhood and the term
When youre up there and you start
your first word, its like running as fast
From page to stage
Basilo, who is also executive director of
baby mama through poetry. Robinson
uses the poem to address the degradation
as you can, and you keep telling your- Chicago Slam Works, believes that the of unwed mothers in her community.
self, Dont fall, he says. most powerful poems are personal and A key component of Robinsons writ-
At the National Poetry Slam, poets specific, infusing elements of the macro ing process is observation, both physical
memorize and perform several solo and world with micro experiences. and emotional.
group poems. Five audience members, Competing with the Las Vegas Battle Its telling the truth, she says. Its
randomly selected at the start of each making observations and getting to the
details. Its not the table is round. Its
the little chips in the corners. Somebody
decided to put brick right here. What is
it made of? And how they laid each
brick. How much of the mortar is in
between? Whats in the in-between?
Alexander Dang of Oregons Portland
Poetry Slam also wrote a poem based on
his personal observations. As the poem
What Kind of Asian Are You? pro-
gresses, his humorous pop culture refer-
ences give way to the dark origins of
racial slurs.
I wanted to demonstrate the frustra-
tion I felt growing up as an Asian Amer-
ican, only to realize what I am will
ultimately always be my story, he says.
That Im the one to define my actions
and my character.
Dangs writing process often
begins with a lightning burst of
inspiration.
ss Moore
Its telling the Once I have an idea, Ill run
Michael Que with it in kind of a manic, one shot,
son
and Kaycee Fil truth. Its making go for it, see-how-far-it-will-go
observations and writing sprint, Dang says.
slam, determine scores, and the That type of stream-of-con-
team with the most points moves getting to the details. sciousness is not unfamiliar to
on to the next round. Its not the table is any kind of writer, and Basilo
But scores arent everything. encourages both the sprinting
Many poets honor the old slam round. Its the little and free writing in his work-
adage, The points arent the point; chips in the corners. shops and classes.
the point is the poetry. J.W. Basilo, a Write for 20 minutes, he sug-
Chicago-based finalist in both the gests. Write for the whole 20.
National Poetry Slam and the Indi- Because at minute 12, youre
vidual World Poetry Slam, has been going to start the poem. Even
Marshall Goff

through enough competitions to rec- though youve written a page


ognize the truth behind this mantra. already, the real poem doesnt
Vasant Marur

At the end of the week, youre not start until you catch the flow.
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This process inspired a poem from tain level of divorce from [the emotions]
the perspective of Judas, the betrayer of because youre controlling the memory,
Jesus in Biblical tradition. The poem
begins with the line, It is a different
youre controlling the action, he says.
But once youre performing it, you hear
From the
type of martyrdom to sacrifice your
name, speculating that Judas was a
those words coming out of your mouth,
and your energys already up, and your mouths
of poets
scapegoat for humanity. adrenalines already up, sometimes you
Although rooted in his personal can just get ambushed.
faith, Parent questions the complex Jasmine Jaz Sufi, who competed
dynamics of religion to tell an uncom- with Pierced Ear Poetry Slam from
fortable truth through poetry. Stockton, Calif., recognizes the The elements of slam poetry
fine line poets walk between heal- apply across all genres. Use
ing and re-traumatizing through these ideas from seven poets
the spoken word. Poetry can put in your own writing.
you in the mind frame to change
Owning ourselves is
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your own life, she says, but the
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the most important poet must do the work to imple- genuine.
ment those changes.
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human beings. And tory of self-harm has also opened
the doors of conversation with
telling our truths and the audience. Following one Q Craft stories that are
personal and specific.
telling our stories slam, a woman who had
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ways to do that. Sufi. The woman said that after


hearing Sufis poem, her step- Q Share what makes you the
daughter opened up about her most uncomfortable.
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After the initial first draft, Basilo puts One poem examines why Rumpelstiltskin writing, Sufi says. This actually can
his poems through a grueling editing
process. Revising and reading his work
would want to steal a child. In another,
Parent speaks from the perspective of the
Healing with words
For some writers, the fear of personal
help people.
The power of spoken word moves
Q Use poetry for the process
of growth, to discover
aloud helps him memorize and pinpoint Biblical character Lazarus. The poem exposure restricts their ability to write beyond the audience, too. Jessica Helen different parts of yourself.
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in my mouth, says Basilo. A lot of back from the grave. Parents unique per- presence of strangers to bolster their mother and waitress. Performing slam #PTUPO
times I write things that are really good spectives earned him a second-place finish work. Basilos one-man show helped poetry empowered her to become an activ-
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looking on the page, but theres no at the Individual World Poetry Slam in him to process his past, and he says ist and teacher, and allowed her to address
Explore a different persona.
music to what Im saying. both 2010 and 2011. exposure to the audience was key to the domestic violence of her childhood. Ask, If this is true, what
Basilo may go through five or six Parent began his career as an impro- personal development. Its there where I can find my voice, else is true?
drafts before the words are rhythmically visational comedian before taking the Its part of owning it, he says. Own- when I didnt have a voice as a child, o+FTTF1BSFOU 4BMU$JUZ4MBN 
ready to perform. But the process doesnt leap to slam poetry. His narrative style ing ourselves is the most important thing she says. I was silenced and victimized 4BMU-BLF$JUZ
stop there. Performance has taught him still implements the patterned struc- we can do as human beings. And telling at the time. Here is where I can survive.
to economize, a skill he applies across all tures and theatricality of improv, he our truths and telling our stories onstage Lopez says slam poetry has become
genres to condense his phrasing and says, allowing him to wear a character are the best ways to do that. a grass roots movement for writers, Q Create a poem that works on
focus on the depth of each word. for a little while like a mask or a cos- The intensity of these stories can a genre that invites all genders, all page and onstage.
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tume. Parent often begins the writing unleash unexpected emotions. Basilo races and all identities to open their
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process with a one-dimensional charac- experienced this the first time he per- mouths and speak. The results are
The character veil
Other writers create poems from the per-
ter from history or folklore and then
uses improvisational techniques to tease
formed his Pushcart Prize-nominated
poem Anointing the Hand after his
soul shaking, a transformation that
happens when poetry finds you and Q Write your story and claim
spective of a character or object. Jesse Par- out a more complex narrative. He asks friends death. The poems boxing imag- you find poetry. it. Because its yours and
Rich Beaubien

ent, who has competed with Utahs Salt of his characters, If this is true, what ery contrasts the loss of control he felt it belongs to you.
City Slam since 2007, is frequently else is true? And what would I do? And during that time. Hillary Casavant is an editorial assistant at The o+FTTJDB)FMFO-PQF[ "#2
inspired by Biblical stories and fairytales. what do I think is true about this? When youre writing, there is a cer- Writer in Boston. 4MBNT "MCVRVFSRVF /.

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