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GabbyHaller

123ElmosWorld
EuropeanCity,EuropeanCountry10011

4thSeptember1492

ThePope
00120 Piazza San Pietro
del Vaticano, Vatican City

DearMrPope,

IamextremelydispleasedwiththeRomanCatholicChurchatthistime.Theyare
makinganunreasonableamountofmoneyandspendingit,notforGod,butfortheirown
good.Oneexampleofthiswouldbeindulgences,moneypaidtoforgivesins.Also,theChurch
isgivingtheirclosefriendsbetterjobsthansomeonewhodeserveditmorebutwasntrelated.
ThenewworkersattheChurcharemakingmoremoneythaneverbecauseofthe
indulgencesandothertaxesbeingpaidtotheChurch.However,noonecanreadthebibleto
provethemwrong.Frankly,Iamunpleasedwithallofit.

Tome,thechurchiswrongbecausesomelesswealthycitizenswhohavecommitteda
sinareunabletopaytomakeitbetter,oriftheydidthemoneyisgoingtosomeoneelses
fortune.Also,moneyshouldnotbeinvolvedinreligion,orapartofthebible,butnoneofus
willbeabletoproveitnotinthebiblebecausewecantread.TheChurchshouldnotbe
sellingindulgencesbecauseofthesereasons.Theyarealsodoingwrongsbygivingjobsto
theirfriends.Thisiswrongbecausesomeonewhoactuallydeservesthejobisnownotgoing
togetit.IbelieveifyoulistentomycommentsandcorrectionsIcanimprovetheChurch
drastically.

Mysolutiontoendingallofchaosandwhat'swrongwiththisChurchwouldbetoend
indulgencesThiswouldsatisfyeveryonewhocantaffordthem.Youshouldalsonotgivejobs
topeoplewhodontdeserveit,thiswillmaketheChurchstaffstrongerandmorepowerful.All
inall,theChurchhasmanymistakes,howevertheycouldbefixedwiththeapplicationof
thesecorrections.

WriteyourlettertotheCatholicChurchandthePopetoexpressyourdispleasurewiththe
Church(assomeonelivingduringthetimeoftheReformation).
Paragraph1:Explainwhatthechurchisdoingduringthistime.
Paragraph2:Explainwhyyouthinkwhatthechurchisdoingiswrong.
Paragraph3:Offerasolutiontotheproblem.

Sincerely,

GabbyHaller

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