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    The memo provides feedback on a student's essay about Beowulf. It notes that the essay lacks clarity and details compared to the student's previous work. It recommends adding context on Beowulf for unfamiliar readers, including more details throughout the essay, correcting errors, and adding a conclusion paragraph to clarify the overall point of the essay.

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    M E M O RAN D U M

    TO: Riley Mosby


    Student Writer, Freshman Portfolio Writing

    THROUGH: Shayla Atkins, M.A.


    Lecturer, Department of English

    FROM: Sydne Barard


    Student Reviewer, Department of English

    DATE: February 13, 2017

    SUBJECT: Second Essay Reviewers Comments

    I write to address your essay Beowulf Essay that you submitted on February 13. There were
    several areas that I noted while reading the essay that deserve varying levels of attention.

    This essay is very vague compared to last essay. What was the exact prompt?

    I think you should a brief summary of who Beowulf is for readers who have not read the poem.
    From there, I would suggest that you add more details to the essay over all. Correct any
    grammatical and organizational errors.

    I also think a conclusion paragraph needs to be added. I am unsure of what exactly the essay was
    supposed to be proving and a concluding paragraph would help make that more clear.

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