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Rhetorical Analysis Essay
Rhetorical Analysis Essay
Rhetorical Analysis Essay
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Nicolette Omelczuk
Professor Fielding
Writing 103
21 February 2017
The popular reality show Toddlers and Tiaras has glamourized child beauty pageants and
sparked a global phenomenon. Not only are parents putting their children in these pageants;
theyre going to extreme measures to perfect their image on stage. This includes, but is not
limited to, fake teeth, hair pieces, spray tans, acrylic nails, dramatic makeup and extremely
expensive dresses and costumes. The article Child Beauty Pageants Give Children Unrealistic
Expectations from the Green Haven Press by Martina M. Cartwright and the PSA image
explore the effects of these pageants on these young, easily influenced children. This rhetorical
analysis examines the article and the PSA images to further display the negativity that comes
This article focuses on the reality of child beauty pageants and how they affect children.
Many times, because of the competitive nature of the pageants, these children end up thinking
that their appearance is the most important thing in life. They struggle with self-identity and self-
esteem because of how the pageants objectify the body. School also ends up coming second to
these pageants which effects their education and levels of competence. This can eventually lead
to things life depression and eating disorders later on in life. The author suggests that a balance
Many rhetorical appeals are used in the article to support the claims made about children
in these pageants. A more obvious appeal used throughout is ethos. The article states, Martina
the fact that she has a PhD in a topic that can be closely related to things like eating
disorders and body image. Her other work was also published in The Journal of the
American Academy of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry(Cartwright 1). She furthers her
credibility by offering proof that she is experienced with examining the thoughts and
behaviors of children.
Cartwright also utilizes logos to justify her reasoning with facts and logical appeals.
She writes that, a small study published in 2005 showed that former childhood beauty
pageant contestants had higher rates of body dissatisfaction.(Cartwright 6). This proves
that the pageants teach girls to self-hate. Because they have been objectified and had this
idea of perfection beaten into them, they are constantly unhappy with themselves.
that the kids are often forced into. She suggests that, The key is to provide performing
children with a balance of activities that involve more than fancy costumes, make-up and
the world of make-believe,(Cartwright 9). Her intent is to prove that adding additional
activities is a great way to essentially raise a happy, well rounded child instead of one
The strongest rhetorical appeal used in the article would have to be pathos.
Cartwright tries to get the reader to sympathize with the children that are put into these
pageants and grow up unhappy with themselves. She directly states, Child performers
may believe that parental and/or adult love or approval are anchored to how perfectly they
look or how well they ignite the stage with their presence,(Cartwright 5). Any person can
look back at their childhood and relate to the feeling of happiness they felt when they
achieved approval from their parents. At the same time, it evokes a feeling of sadness for
these children that are only performing in these pageants to satisfy their parents. Not only
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are these children developing eating disorders and unhealthy habits, but they are putting
their performances before their education. Perhaps the most powerful quote in the whole
article comes from the section where Cartwright explains the long-term impact of these
pageants on girls. She says, "Looks are fleeting, brains are forever,"(Cartwright 9). This
gives the reader a sense of empowerment. These young girls should focus on their education
face of makeup and her appearance has obviously been photo-shopped. There are arrows
pointing to different parts of her face showing some of her features that are obviously fake like
her hair extensions, pearly teeth, nails, and eyelashes. There is a bolded title of LITTLE MISS
PERFECT with a blurb across the bottom explaining the negative side of pageants that pleads
for parents to consider the consequences of these pageants before they make their kids participate
in them. There are also two logos of non-profits that sponsor the ad including Beauty Redefined
In order to fully capture the attention of the public this PSA also includes abundant
examples of rhetorical appeals. To build a sense of credibility and trustworthiness using ethos the
author has paired up with two non-profits to sponsor the PSA. These non-profits organizations
are The Body Positive and Beauty Redefined and both of their goals are to try and spread the
word about body image and body positivity. Because the PSA is backed by two leading non-
profits a viewer is more likely to trust and agree with the information they are looking at.
Another example of ethos is how the image used is an actual headshot from a girl that
participated in a pageant. This furthers the argument that these little girls are being edited and
photo shopped and dolled up with excessive makeup for these pageants.
Logos is another important rhetorical appeal that appears in this PSA. Having a picture
grasps a viewers attention, but having dialogue that explains the picture makes the PSA that
much more understandable. The blurb under the title of the PSA reads, "Former child beauty
pageant participants are more likely to suffer from eating disorders and often have higher than
normal rates of body dissatisfaction. This is a statistic that proves that these beauty pageant
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children are unhappy with themselves at young ages and as time goes on these feelings can
The most dominant rhetorical appeal displayed throughout the PSA would have to be
pathos. Pathos is all about emotion and the feelings that overcome you when looking at or
reading something. One of the first things a viewer sees when looking at the PSA is the bolded
title "LITTLE MISS PERFECT". This is an example of pathos because it evokes a feeling of
empathy for the little girl that is expected to be perfect and graceful at all times. Another
example is the arrows that point out the fake features of the girl in the photograph. This makes a
viewer feel shocked because you see the innocent little girl but at the same time these fake
features that were edited and make her look much different than she actually does. Finally, the
last example of pathos is the quote from the PSA, Consider the consequences before you decide
your childs fate. This gives a sense of urgency because the author is pleading with parents to
keep their children out of these pageants in order to prevent the negative consequences of them.
All of these examples play with the emotions of a viewer in order to convince them of the
By using ethos and logos, the authors of both the PSA and the verbal argument try to
convince viewers/readers that their arguments are credible and logical. By using pathos, they try
to convince parents that it is not ethical to put their daughters in these pageants through an
emotional approach. The PSA is similar to the verbal argument in the sense that both use stats
that state that former child beauty pageant participants are more likely to suffer from eating
disorders and often have higher than normal rates of body dissatisfaction. It slightly different
from the verbal argument because it has a visual approach rather than a verbal one. The PSA is
more powerful because of the visual approach. People would rather look at a picture than read a
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long article. The PSA is also straight and to the point which makes it more appealing to a viewer.
Both sources have great use of appeals that strengthen the argument that child beauty pageants
Cartwright, Martina M. "Child Beauty Pageants Give Children Unrealistic Expectations." Beauty
Accessed 24 Feb. 2017. Originally published as "Child Beauty Pageants: What Are We
"Love your Body. Live your Life." The Body Positive. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Feb. 2017.
"Redefining the meaning and value of beauty in our lives." BEAUTY REDEFINED. N.p., n.d.