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Veterans - Ela Poem Comments-3
Veterans - Ela Poem Comments-3
Veterans - Ela Poem Comments-3
Teacher(s): Sarah Moss, Keziah Silva, Aminee Hector, Meagan Smith School: Kaiser Elementary
Date: 4/11/17
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.3.5 Create engaging audio recordings of stories or poems that demonstrate fluid reading at an understandable pace;add
visual displays when appropriate to emphasize or enhance certain facts or details.
2. State Content Standard Addressed (History/Social Science, Science, Physical Education, Visual and Performing Arts):
3. ELD Standard Addressed: (include Part I, II; Communicative Modes A. Collaborative, B. Interpretive, C. Productive; and Proficiency Level
addressing Emerging, Expanding, Bridging)
ELD PI 9 EX. Plan and deliver brief oral presentations on a variety of topics (e.g., show and tell, authors chair, recounting an experience,
describing an animal).
4. Learning Objective: (What will students know & be able to do as a result of this lesson?) STUDENT-FRIENDLY TRANSLATION
Students will be able to create a short poem and produce an audio recording that displays honor to I will be able to make and record a poem
Veterans and fluid reading at an understandable pace. that honors Veterans. I will speak at an
understandable pace.
5. Relevance/Rationale: (Why are the outcomes of this lesson important in the real world? Why are STUDENT-FRIENDLY TRANSLATION
these outcomes essential for future learning?)(TPE1.3)
It is important to know the many ways
It is important to understand the sacrifice that veterans make for our freedom and the many ways in that I can honor veterans for their
which we can honor them, one being through poems and writing. Students also need to learn how to sacrifice. It is also beneficial to me to
speak at a pace in which they can be easily understood. As they continue through their schooling and learn how to speak in a way that can be
careers, there will be many events in which they will have to public speak. By learning to speak well understood. This will help me as I go
now can benefit them for the rest of their life. through the rest of my schooling and my
career.
What are the factors that move individuals to sacrifice for their country?
How does ones perspective influence the concept of freedom?
What should be done to honor those who sacrifice for our freedom?
b. English Learners/Standard English Learners - There are 2 English learners at the Bridging level.
8. Students with Special Needs 1 student with a specialized academic instructor (SAI), 2 students have an IEP for speech, 1 student has a
section 504 plan for severe food allergies (eggs, dairy, wheat, gluten, etc.)
9. Academic language abilities, content knowledge and skills in content area - In this unit, the students will have already discussed and
learned what a veteran is and how to honor them through song. When it comes to ELA, they have already have previous practice with
creating short poems such as a haiku. They have done this in first and second grade, so it should be a bit of a review for them.
10. Linguistic background English Only (18), English/Spanish (3), English/German (2 twin sisters), English/Polish (1), English/Khmer
11. Cultural background (home/family) - Student ancestor reports show that most students are second or third generation immigrants or
beyond, from Europe and Mexico. One students grandparents are from Cambodia. The twins are first generation Americans, their parents
are both from Germany. Another students parents came from Poland, making her a first generation American as well.
12. Health considerations (if any) There are 3 students who have mild allergies to nuts/eggs/dairy/gluten. One students allergies are
severe; he has a 504 plan. No food may be consumed in the classroom. Any shared surfaces he touches, must be wiped down with Clorox
wipes.
13. Physical development factors that may influence instruction in this academic content area High energy level opportunities for physical
activity are important for 8 and 9 year olds. The role play opportunity will play a key role in letting out the students energy that can be
pent up during direct instruction lessons. ("ASCD Developmental Characteristics of Children and Youth" poster)
14. Social development factors that may influence instruction in this academic content area For 8 and 9 year olds, there is a continuing
need for teacher approval and affection, and students are increasingly able and interested in assuming responsibilities ("ASCD
15. Emotional development factors that may influence instruction in this academic content area At this age, students react to others
feelings in a positive or negative way, are sensitive to criticism and ridicule, seek a warm, friendly relationship with adults, and their
worries are more evident, revolving around self esteem and threats to security. ("ASCD Developmental Characteristics of Children and
Youth" poster).
16. Interests/Aspirations (relevant to this academic area) - 13 students have veterans in their extended family, and 5 students have veterans
in their immediate family. Most students live in Costa Mesa, which is home to a rich military history, including the operation of the Santa
Ana Army Air Base from 1942-1946 during WWII. This history was recently memorialized in Heroes Hall, which opened in February 2017,
located at the OC Fair and Events Center. The students enjoy activities where they can talk to one another. Each student has practice with
oral presentations because of a chit chat club that they have at the end of each unit.
8. Anticipated Difficulties (Based on the information above, what difficulties do you think students may have with the content? Please specify
anticipated difficulties for English Learners, Standard English Learners, and/or students with special needs. )):
I anticipate that the EL students may have a more difficult time putting in to words what they feel and think about freedom and veterans.
The student with SAI, who displays inappropriate behavior such as shouting out, not sitting in his seat and not following directions may find it
difficult to focus and stay on task throughout the entire activity. The students are given individual work as well as group work and there are
areas where he could easily become distracted or disruptive. This may cause other students to go off task.
The student who finds it difficult to start independent work may find it challenging to start their own haiku and to finish it in the time allowed.
For the EL students, a powerpoint will be provided to display visuals, show the poem we are reading, to display the directions and to show how
much they have with the online timer. In the beginning, we will also have a brainstorm activity where words and phrases are written on the
whiteboard. These words are examples to help guide them in writing their own haiku. I will also read and display a short patriot haiku so that
they can see and hear and example of the type of haiku that they have to write. I will also provide sentence stems to help frame their thoughts,
opinions, and feedback that they are giving to their group members about their haikus.
For the student with SAI and frequent inappropriate and disruptive behavior, I make sure to discuss what behavior is expected of each student
during this time. I will give non-verbal and/or verbal feedback when necessary. I was also frequently walk by him to make sure he is on task and
in his seat.
For the student who has trouble starting their independent work, they will be provided with words and phrases from the brainstorming activity.
This will give them resources to begin the task at hand rather than having to think of it by themselves. I will also make sure to check on the
student in the beginning and help guide them in the correct process to make sure that the student is not stuck or having a difficult time
beginning their haiku.
10. 21st Century Skills Circle all that are applicable
Describe how the 21st century skill(s) you have circled will be observed during the lesson (TPE1.5,3.3):
Communication: Students will be communicating with other students for a large part of this activity. They will be communicating their
feelings, opinions and feedback in an encouraging, positive and beneficial manner.
Collaboration: Students will be collaborating with a group of four students. In this group they will be reading their haiku to one another
and giving positive and corrective feedback. They will also be recording their individual haikus with their group members.
Creativity: Students will creatively construct a haiku that displays honor towards those who fought and sacrificed for our freedom as well
as reflects their own feelings and emotions towards veterans.
11. Technology - How will you incorporate technology into your lesson? (TPE4.4, 4.8)
Powerpoint
Online timer
Chromebooks
12. Visual and Performing Arts How will you provide the students with opportunities to access the curriculum by incorporating the visual
and performing arts? (TPE1.7)
a. Formative:
Students will be assessed formatively while they are writing their own poem. I will be walking around the classroom and making sure that each
student is understanding how to write this haiku. I will also be monitoring them while they are in their groups. I will be walking around the class
and listening to each group. I will listen and observe them to make sure that they are collaborating well with one another and are giving positive
and corrective feedback with the use of their sentence stems.
Students will be assessed on their individual production of a short haiku poem and a fluid and understandable audio recording.
c. Attach rubric here ( and copy and paste your objective above your rubric):
d. How do you plan to involve all students in self-assessment and reflection on their learning goals and progress? (TPE5.3)
Once students have individually wrote their own haiku, I will focus their attention and have them check whether or not their haiku meets the
requirements of what a haiku should look like, which is a 5/7/5 syllable form. As a group I will also display a few questions on the powerpoint that
will allow them to assess how they worked together as a group and what things they could have done differently.
Powerpoint
Online timer
Chromebook
Sentence stem handout
16. Procedure (Include estimated times. Please write a detailed procedure, including questions that you are planning to ask.):
1. The teacher will give the quiet signal to gain students attention.
2. The teacher then displays closing questions on the powerpoint.
These questions will allow for collaboration in the group to self assess and group assess.
3. The teacher will comment on the groups great collaboration.
4. The veterans, family and friends will love hearing the wonderful haiku's and recording you all created today.
b) If not, explain which areas in which students were not successful, according to your data analysis. Why do you think they were not
able to achieve the lesson objective in these areas?
3. What instructional strategies did you use to help students achieve the lesson objective? Which subject-specific pedagogical skills did you
employ to help students be successful? (Reference TPE Part 2: Subject-Specific Pedagogy)
4. What would you change about the lesson and why (according to your data analysis)?
Classroom Lessons ONLY: After presenting your lesson in your BST classroom, please review and reflect on student work related to this lesson.
Make copies of student work for levels of high, middle, low, EL, and Student with Special Needs, and write your comments on the copies.