Date: 20/03/2017 Time: 1:27 PM Place: MS1 Present: Mr Southworth and Miss Wellings Group Members: William Hall, Sam Baxter and Chris Haisell Advisor: Miss Wellings Items Discussed: Firstly we presented the pitch to Miss Wellings and Mr Southworth by taking it in turns to talk over different parts of the pitch we created on the computer after we had shown the whole slideshow and we had discussed all the point we wanted to we received questions from the teachers which we answered and then we got feedback on our pitch and how we could improve certain aspects of the idea. We included a frisk assessment and production schedule with our pitch so the people present could understand we had planned the whole idea and had a complete understanding of what was to be done.
The questions asked by the teachers were
basic questions as we had planned almost every little thing down to the last detail although the things they did question us about because we didnt mention them were small things that our group decided very quickly and efficiently because our team is very good at making decisions and work well together. One question which was particularly hard as we hadnt considered this before they asked was about the music in the background of our ident which we took a few seconds to think about and then decided very quickly and efficiently.
Mr Southworth and Miss Wellings then gave
us feedback on our pitch explaining to us how they liked that we had used an external online presentation service to complete our pitch which made the pitch very colourful and exciting throughout capturing their attention from the very start of the pitch they also said they liked that we had included the production schedule and the risk assessment but they would have liked it if our storyboard was included. They then said they could clearly see we had put in work and we knew the channels ethos and target audience and gave us feedback saying we answered the questions they asked well and quickly which was good as it showed clear skill on all group members behalf.
My overall conclusion is that our pitch was
very successful which can be seen in the feedback and we even answered the questions very quickly and efficiently. We could have done a few things differently by incorporating the storyboard and such which would have made our pitch a little better better but in general our pitch was very successful. But my main criticism would be to have thought more about sound in the ident.