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Drafting Essay - Problem Definition Essay - Team 4
Drafting Essay - Problem Definition Essay - Team 4
Elizabeth Sogunle
ENGL395
Problem Definition Essay
Our group set out to improve mental health care on college campuses. Through our
empathy and background research we discovered that many students were not seeking help for
mental health problems or were having difficulty accessing resources. Mental health
encompasess our social, physical, and psychological well-being and impacts one throughout
every stage of life (What is Mental Health 1). It is determined by a variety of factors including
biological conditions, life trauma or stress, and family history. For college students, mental
health affects their social, academic, and vocational wellness. Many students report feeling
overwhelmed and having difficulty balancing the aspects of their life. We found that college
students need a way to access mental health care because there is both a lack of knowledge of
mental health and resources and the educational methods employed by the administration are
fairly ineffective. College students as a whole would primarily benefit from increased access to
concerns different from the general student body would benefit. Finally, the administration could
focus their funds into more effective educational methods to improve the mental health of the
student body.
Mental health is pressing issue on college campuses. The average college student often
feels overwhelmed by the pressures and expectations arising from academics, social circles, and
health. Despite universities running educational programs to inform students and provide
resources, many students do not seek help. One in four adults ages 18 and older have a
diagnosable mental illness. In addition, nearly one third of college students have reported
depression that impacts their function and 80% have felt overwhelmed. (The Issue: Student
Mental Health 1) According to Ray Nardella, Resident Director at the University of Maryland,
College Park, mental health conditions have been increasing across all aspects since he began
working in student affairs. This includes everything from anxiety to suicides. Among these
One of the most significant factors preventing students from seeking mental health care
on college campuses is stigma. Family and friends, cultural expectations, and self-stigma can all
contribute to a persons resistance to accepting and seeking mental health treatment (Watson and
Corrigan 1). In fact, stigma is the number one reason why students do not seek mental health
services (College Students Speak: A Survey on Mental Health 4). Secondly, mental health
resources on campus are difficult to attend and hard to obtain. Counseling services have waiting
lists weeks in advance and have limits to the number of private sessions one can do. Finally,
campus education on mental health remains ineffectual. Most students do not know about many
of the campus mental health resources. In addition, the methods by which the administration
educates people on mental health is ineffectual. The primary methods used are flyers and posters,
factor on college campuses on why people do not reach out to get mental health help. One of our
interviewees stated that mental health was not a problem in the community that he is a part of
and due to that, he did not understand what the problem was. In another interview, an
interviewee stated that he didn't see the point of increasing funding to mental health initiatives on
campus. In society today, many people have different perspectives on what mental health and
what it isn't. In many instances, people do not believe that it is a health issue that needs a lot of
attention. We saw this same rational in some of our interviewees. Mental health is often not taken
seriously due to the different stigmas that are placed on mental health.
Improving mental health on campus benefits multiple groups. College students will
benefit from improving the mental health systems that are currently on our campus. With mental
health care students are less likely to drop out of school and have better grade point averages
(The Issue: Student Mental Health 1). Improving the mental health on campus also benefits the
way that students will interact with each other. Often times, students who face mental health
illnesses tend to shy away from social interactions they deem unnecessary. Its possible that their
illness leads them to become more isolated, which in turn worsens the illness.
Within these students, students of various cultural backgrounds are also impacted.
Multicultural students face many issues such as prejudice, stigmatization, and cultural aspects
that impact their decision to seek help. We found that the culture that a person comes from
impacts their ability to find access to mental health help. Not only that, but also it makes it harder
for people to get diagnosed with mental illnesses. From one of our interviews, an interviewee
stated the stress and the pressure that comes from her family simply based off of the culture they
are from. Many cultures do not recognize mental health to be an actual problem to be focused on
and one that needs medical attention. Its often normalized as just having a bad day, or being
too sensitive about something. In families and homes where the parents have immigrated to the
United States, children who may go through mental health illnesses would be ridiculed by the
parents if brought up. In an interview conducted with a daughter of a first generation immigrant
(thus making her second generation), the interviewee often said her depression and anxiety was
looked down upon by her parents. She said her parents often recalled their own hardships to
compare with hers, and they would bring up that they never suffered from depression despite
going through tougher times. Due to this, students from different cultural backgrounds often
have mental illnesses that go undiagnosed. They feel as if they should suck it up and just deal
with it, or they have no awareness of their own mental health illness at all. After analyzing all
the factors that we found, it is imperative that there is a drastic improvement for education and
Finally, the administration would benefit with better educational methods as they could
focus their funds into effective methods and improve mental health among students on campus. It
is imperative that the administration recognizes the need for mental health health on this campus
and find ways to fill in the gap. From many of the interviews that we conducted, we found that
students are flustered with the lack of support thats coming from the administration when it
comes to mental health problems. One of our interviewees complained about upon booking a
counseling appointment with the mental health counselors, there was a 4 weeks wait time. This
poses problems for students who are in need for help, but the need isn't necessarily urgent. These
are the reasons why it is essential for the administration to pay attention to the mental illness
After gathering valuable information on many college students experiences with mental
health illness, both direct and indirect, it is self-evident that there is a common problem. The
popular phrase Ignorance is bliss is often used to avoid knowing information to preserve ones
particular state of mind. However, in the case of mental health, ignorance is certainly not a good
thing. In many of our interviews, many of the problems that arose seemed to have stemmed from
lack of awareness and proper education on mental health illnesses. The stigmas of depression and
anxiety are due to lack of education. Older generations and foreign families did not have the
resources nor the dialogue to understand and educate themselves on the reality of mental health.
Its very easy to tape a flyer on depression and anxiety on the door of a bathroom stall, but its
effectiveness of helping college students become aware and educated are questionable.
Here at the University of Maryland, there are mental health systems that are currently in
place but needs to be improved on. The University Health Centre provides students with many
resources that will help them cope with different experiences students go through. The university
provide not only mental health screening, counseling, and different programs that promote
mental wellness. Not only that, but the university has peer educators that are student educators in
the topic of stress and mental health. These peer educators are responsible for going into
classroom, events, clubs, sorority and fraternity houses and educating the campus about different
stress and mental health issues and coping methods. At the health centre, they provide students
who are experiencing mental health emergencies resources and support to get better. Despite all
the resources that are available through the health centre, there is a lot more that needs to be
done.
Resources
http://www.activeminds.org/issues-a-resources/the-issue
https://www.mentalhealth.gov/basics/what-is-mental-health/index.html
https://www.nami.org/getattachment/About-NAMI/Publications-Reports/Survey-
Reports/College-Students-Speak_A-Survey-Report-on-Mental-Health-NAMI-2012.pdf
http://www.healthyplace.com/stigma/stand-up-for-mental-health/what-is-stigma/