Molina 1

Molina Josselyn

Professor Batty

English 101

27 May 2017

Reflection

This essay for me was the easiest one out of all three. I didn't make some dramatic

changes because from the comments I received the essay was good. I made some sentence

changes throughout the whole essay. For my introduction, I added the secondary purpose of the

place. For my second paragraph, I fixed some grammatical errors and added a few sentences to

the paragraph I also tried to connect the paragraph with the thesis. In my third paragraph, I fixed

my grammar errors and added sentences as well. For my fourth paragraph, I think I had more

changes because the paragraph was too small, so I added more sentences. Throughout the essay I

made changes, but they weren't major, I just added sentences, fixed grammar errors and tried to

unify the essay. I think one of the biggest problems I had was trying to make my paragraphs go

back to the thesis. My conclusion, I didn't make changes other than fixing grammar errors and

punctuation.