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Socratic Seminar 29 / 33 Be out 1. I

to ask questions - should have
something to help worked up the
people get back courage to ask
on track more questions
Should 2. There
be 1 page at least were things I
Your forgot to add to
strengths? the reflection, I
Your need to pay
weaknesses? closer attention to
the requirements

Juvenile Justice 42/50 In 1. Put a

Essay need of a title title next time
Shorte 2. Pay
r anecdotes to attention to the
keep the readers wariness of the
attention anecdotes
Had a 3. Check
good thesis for relevance
Check 4. Quote
the relevance of more
examples and 5. More
how they relate to expansions
the thesis
Bring
in a direct quote
to strengthen up
the argument
Expan
d on some shorter
examples
3rd
paragraph is the
strongest

Gender, Language, 40/50 Textual 1. I will

Culture Identity Evidence gather more solid
Narrative Get to evidence rather
the point sooner than relying on
internet evidence
2. Plan to
cut back on the
more narrative
and put in more
 informative

1984 Controlling Idea 38/50 Shorte 1. Will

Exploration Essay n your refrain from
background adding too much
information just a detail
bit 2. Will
Awkwa reread before turn
rd phrasing in(unless i have
Remai no time to)
n in an objective 3. Was
voice rushed will be
Discus more careful
s more rather
than having a
short conclusion

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